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Reviews For Dear Mr. Masen
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

Damn, you girls are REALLY good.

Reviewer: Vamp-by-night (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am in love with this story. I stayed up late reading this and asleep at the last chapter last night and reluctantly parted this gem. But I actually kept thinking about it all day and thats the highest compliment I can give a story; when it actually stays with you after you've read it. I really like this friendship you're building between these two lonely characters and I'm so excited to see their romance develop. Kudos and please keep writing

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

It's also sexual harassment if he types the word "fucking" in any context. And she shouldn't be asking about klismaphilia either. I guess can can erase both hard-drives after those e-mails.

 

OTHERWISE, really 'fucking' funny.

 

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ha-ha, great gift, Edward!

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh SNAP! Wonderful chapter. I smiled the whole time Mouth Breather was being questioned. Bravo!

Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

They're dance around each other is a riot - all appologies and making sure that they don't realize they are attracted to one another. I loved his gift, that was the very best after reading all about the mouth breather. When his precious calendar was confiscated - SOOOOO much fun!

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hysterical.  Love, love , love it.  Great banter between the characters [and the two of you].

Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 8

this is a funny light story , ilove it

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

i would have a good laugh for that one! 

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

Loved Taylor put the Mouth Breather in his place on Edward's orders, absolutely enjoyed it, just like Bella.

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 8

I feel a little bad for Jasper. Or maybe Alice. I'm not sure.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

*Giddy* yay!! Ohhh this chappie was FUN!!! 

LMAO...Jake, aka "Mouth-breather" ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

I love Edward!  That was the greatest gift ever.  Normally I want to kiss Edward anyway, but that was spectactular!  Bella's character is so real and even the awkward situations they find themselves in are written in such a way that I am sucked into the storyline.  I have been anxiously awaiting updates for this story.  These characters are so appealing and I really like the emails format for the story.  Their flirting and shy steps toward a relationship are charming.

Reviewer: jbt (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is beyond!  I have been laughing out loud (in a good way) since I began reading.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 8

I hope Bella knows what Edward's favorite dessert is, because he's earned it!

Reviewer: Ara Rayne (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just started reading this and love this chapter... and am very much looking forward to the others.

Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Edward's present for Bella was FANTASTIC! I

Reviewer: marissa64 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great story and unique way of telling it. I really like it.

Reviewer: LivingwithEdward (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

Loved this chapter. And the rest of the story too. It is so entertaining and makes me giggle.  Thank you for writting and sharing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: fundip (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 8

aaawwww! That was so sweet =D

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

oh how you make my day wonderful. I get all giddy when I get the update email.

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great ending to this chapter!! Perfect present for Edward to send to Bella LOL. I was slightly disappointed that more dialogue didn't occur between the 2 of them on Saturday morning but was pleasantly surprised by their continued emails throughout the week. Glad to see she invited him for dinner on Sat & he accepted. The whole slept together, slept together situation was cracking me up!! awesome chapter as always - looking forward to the next!! ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the dinner with Bellas friends. Loved the present. 

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

LOL

I soooooooooooo love this story

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