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Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hello, I just found this story and I love it, escpically the part where Edward admits he's a New Kids fan.....LOVED IT!!! Okay, back to the rest of the chapters!
Reviewer: Dillinger910 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
:)
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
Aw, great birthday surprise :)
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10
great chapter as always thank you
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 10
"I struck it."
God, Bella. You crack me up.
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 10
Yeah, sure you're only feeling amorous because she's done nice things for you. Keep telling yourself that, Mr. Masen.
I hope these two can find a way around Carlisle's rules, because it's clear something is about to happen. I love their respective ramblings, and they're both so cute.
Hope you update soon.
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 10
That was sweet of her to make him dinner and a cake for her birthday. Awww!!!!!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
i think she secretly wants that too!
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is just embaressing now. I am checking for updated multiple times a day. I know great writing takes time, but I am in love with these characters!
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Regarding Whitlock: Wow. Farting, Bieber, and erectile dysfunction.
Good God this is hilarious. I am re-reading as I wait impatiently for another chapter and I just love it. I laugh out loud and am more amused now that I can savor this slowly for the second time.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
Well done!
Reviewer: tinamoe (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 9
These guys are so freaking funny! I was laughing so hard. Sweatpant sex! hahaha
You guys are great
Reviewer: Lindis84 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story! It's so sweet and funny =)
And I absolutely adore both Edward and Bella!
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more more more! =D
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
I really love this story! LOL!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 9
I just adore him. I like how he joked to defuse the tension in the room. I felt so bad for Bella when she spilled the wine all over him.
They are just so precious together. I'm looking forward to more!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
Loved the dinner party :)
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
Almost like Sweatpants sex!! Oh, I laughed so hard at that! Bella & Edward are so cute & so oblivious. Thank goodness Rose will know whats going on., and will hopefully clue Bella in!
Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9
"the part of the sweats that had been touching him were now touching me. It was almost like sweatpants sex." HAHAHA! Fantastic! Ah, the story makes me gush with girly awws. Please keep it up and have a lovely week.
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2011 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
oh god, who wouldn't be nervous in that situation?
mmm Edward wearing sweatpant :) nice
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
Poor Bella, I'm sure that Edward loves every crazy moment and word that comes out of her mouth! Can't wait to see what Edward thought, and how Bella's surprise goes!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 9
Could they be any more adorable? I don't think so!
Can't wait for your update!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yeah! So THERE, Mouth Breather! That Edward packs a mean gift!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 7
Beautiful, touching, witty. I love it!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
love your story, eager for more
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
What a wonderful build-up to their actual meet. Plus it's great that she isn't at her best and he still thinks she's lovely. This is my new favorite ff!
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