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Reviewer: PerennialAddict (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 14
LOL YAY! It is about time Carlisle made it in there!!!
I am really enjoying your story. You are truly doing this POV justice!
I don't quite remember if I provided any comments in the past.. so if I am redundant bear with me.
You pulled me in from the first chapter... I have chuckled in each and every chapter!
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Poor girl...I hope she has extra panties!! Great chap.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
Seems like the green-eyed-monster needs to step up his game, maybe another talk with Jasper might help? Carlisle is terribly nosy, wonder what made him visit IT. Hope the mouth-breather didn't spy and tell on Bella, he's always lurking behind her, maybe reading her mails?
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
damn, does Bella still have that spare set of clothes in her desk?? could Edward possibly be with him?? I noticed there were no emails exchanged so far & just when she is trying to write one she gets interrupted. It would be so much easier if Bella did get a different job because then they could date freely! I cannot wait to read Bella's response to Carlisle entering her office area :) ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
what? noooooooooo
you cant leave us here- i need just a smidgen more to hold me over.
Carlisle knows something and i really thought that Esme was going to convince Carlisle to back off and not let him turn Edward into a mini version of him- maybe i am foreshadowing or something from what i have seen, please please update or just throw us a teaser soon
ok, enough whining, i am sorry, it has been a Monday and this helped
Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
I think Edward will have to realise that people in his life should have to be more important than his work...but for that, he will have to learn ...maybe the hard way ! Really happy for the update and your story is awesome :)
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
(laughs) oh dear. Carlisle showed up. I wondered when that was going to happen.
Edward is being incredibly dense. But maybe if Bella takes Rose's advice about looking for a new job things will start to happen. (crosses fingers)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ohhhh! here goes the ctazy random shit!
lololololol
Well I hope she gets a chef job soon it would change the game alittle!
And what are we gonna do with Eddie??? huh
I mean he is smart so he has to have it firgured out....and the execution is the slow uptake!
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 14
Uh oh. The moment of truth... is she is big a swooning scaredy-catt as she says?!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think they are both having slow epiphanies! Let's see which one of them gets forced to move first? Carlisle is an ass, Bella will be sickened she had a crush on him!
Reviewer: Jessa1326 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh gah! You're leaving me hanging like that?! What does Carlisle want? Tell me! lol!
I hope you update soon! :)
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 14
OMG! LMAO! OK so Bella needs to tell Edward what she thinking and then she needs to quit and get a job as a chef!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
well i hope she just tells him how she feels ! cant wiat till the next chapter
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
Edward should look a little more carefully At Carlisle...he's one unhappy MotherF*$^er who spews really rotten advice...GeeesH!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
Hahahaha, the infamous Carlisle Cullen meeting! Can't wait ;)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
Gah....cliffy. Wonder what is going on with Carlisle? Does he know about Bella? He's brilliant and the CEO...I think he could find a way to get to the truth. He wants Edward to stay single, so I don't think he could have good news for Bella. I'm worried. Would love to know what is going on. WTF with Edward? No calls...no e-mails. When he was talking to himself about being a good friend to Bella and then thinking of supporting her decisions with Peter, I was shaking my head furiously. Don't do it Edward! Don't be stupid! You'll be sorry! Gah......
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was an amazing Chapter! Edward was apparently trying very hard to express his emotions to her, by holding her hand, and walking with his hand on her back, not something that a "friend" will do. I had to laugh at how jealous Edward was of Peter. Bella really shouldn't play with Edward that way if she is serious with feelings for him. This is getting sooooo good. Keep up the great work! Moving on to the next chapter....squee....can't wait. Love it!
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ah! Carlisle! Oh boy Bella. Oh Boy!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 13
I just adore them. This Edward and Bella have such incredible rapport and banter and wit. It is so entertaining and addictive.
I must confess that I LOVE a jealous Edward. He is absolutely one of my favorites. Also, while I am such a conon couple girl, I would like to see Bella go out with Peter. I think this (his jealousy and Bella's potential date) might be the catalyst to move beyond the friend zone. At least I hope so.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 13
Hmm...
well eesh, Edward! Way to ruin a "non-date" by answering ur phone!! And I'm glad Bella talked with Peter & Edward was jealous! He's gotta realize that if He doesn't make a play for her, someone else Will!
I think Carlisle relies on Edward Way Too Much & should utilize some of his other staff members. And Edward shouldn't let him--I don't care what the reasons are! He needs to put his foot down & quit being run over!
Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh Eddie boy... You better stake your claim soon! And I kinda feel like kicking Carlisle in the shins for interrupting the game watching. You just don't do that in baseball!
Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
I think someone here is jealous and doesn't realise it ! I really like this chapter...can't wait to read more:)
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story andcan't wait to read more! i wonder what is going to happen since she gave him a kiss. Hope she doesn't call Peter.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
Sorry, Bella, but you don't make plans when you're with someone else--even if you define the relationship as friends only. And especially if the someone is Edward.
Excellent!
Reviewer: fundip (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
Stupid Edward!
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