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Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness. You are a little bit evil for leaving it there!  I hope to read more soon. I also hope they can be together without Carlisle being evil about it.

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

She should slap him for kissing her without asking, they slam the door in his face! He needs to call her and send her flowers everyday for a week then ask her out a real date some where public and make her his main focus and attention, while all this is going on he needs to tell Carlisle that he is falling her her and that he will have to resign from Cullen Inc. if something cant be worked out or arranged. While Bella refuses his flowers, gets the job with Esme and QUITS Cullen Inc, without some much as an email to Edward. Then he will need to track her down and really grovel, stating his love for her and ... well you can write the rest (LOL)

LOVE MAC!

Cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 17

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!  *stomps impatiently*  You left it there?!  That's crueller than... well, fading to black!  I really hope Esme smacked Carlisle around, being as a hug is NOT fraternization to me.  It's coworker commaderie.  If it were two female employees, he'd think nothing of it.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oh dear...Carlisle needs a kick in the ass, but he does have a point about his policy, so many companies are like that because of law suits.   But for many people who are as busy as  Carlisle kept Edward in that job where else would he have met anyone to take to a benefit as a date?  In Edward defence, he obviously isn't used to dating, he was handling it well until Carlisle ripped him a new one.  I would have acted the same way Bella would have when Edward started acting cold and distant as I feed off body language, so she's not to blame at all I don't think, if she'd have stuck it out it would have gotten so much worse.  Leaving was the best thing to do, it gave notice to Edward that his behavior was totally unacceptable.   I'm glad he woke up. 

Reviewer: kufansvj (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

Loved this chapter. I was furious with Edward that he didn't even think of all the ramifications of inviting Bella to that night. I'm so glad they have finally kissed. I'm excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 17

Really!!!  REALLY???  No!!  That was just mean, lol.   What a wonderful...sweet chapter, where they are getting ready to share some honest feelings with one another.   Damn that Carlisle!   Hope Bella can quit and go to work for Esme, and I have  feeling that Esme is a deep rooted romantic and she saw the emotions between the two of them, and now she'll help out.    Can't wait to hear more.    I know you said that things might be iffy for a while, but you have to know that you are one of our top favorite fan fictions.  Don't go for long....please!!  WE love it.   We are stuck in an embrace with Edward and don't know what will happen next.  We can hope, but we don't know.   Please write some lovely pages soon!

Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 17

Finally he says screw it and shows how he feels. Can't wait 4 the next chapter!

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 17

you are evil!!!! how can you leaves us at that point?

I can't beleive it!!!!

I feel bad for Bella and for Edward but she is absolutely correct, she deserves better....

 

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

Great chapter.  Finally they kissed!!! Yeah!  Loved it.  I hope Bella gets the chef job.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

Ah, I've caught up and Wow, just wow.  It is as if Cinderbella is on the way to the ball.  I know it has been building but it feels like they are going to fall in love tonight, at least I hope so.  After tonight she'll be all like Peter?  Peter who?  I am so excited I can hardly stand it.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

I was afraid something like this would happen.  Peter may be a nice enough guy but just what do we know about him?  The whole thing makes me just a little bit nervous.  I do have to laugh at myself though because I was thinking what if she attends the fundraiser as Peter's date and Edward is accompanied by someone else, platonically of course.  I do continue to feel bad for Edward in that he does not know how to control the situation.  Hopefully B/E will have a good time at the benefit and Carlisle....  Hell I don't know how you are going to get out of that one.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh dear!  You don't suppose Carlisle is suspicious do you?  Sooner or later it has to come to his attention and Edward's deviation in behavior, however miniscule, is bound to raise curiosity.  And a man like Carlisle would certainly have his ways. 

Bella and Edward.  Both want more can they find a way to have that though.  Rosalie had an excellent idea in that if Bella went to work elsewhere..... Just sayin.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 13

Loved that he took her to a ball game.  What a treat to seat in the "good" seats.  Before we could afford them we sat in the "riff-raff" section most of the time and there is something to be said for sitting on the outskirts.  I mean where else can you whoop it up in hopes of winning the coveted Rowdy Row or section....good times earning that title I tell ya. 

It was so sweet when he kissed Bella.  He wants more, she wants more and here they are stuck in a catch 22.  Perhaps he can change the rules when he rules the roost. 

And Peter?  Is it appropriate to ask Bella to beware?  Perhaps it is not necessary.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 12

Well that wasn't so bad.  Actually that was a pretty good make up without a kiss.  Bella has no filter, just like me, and I must say I feel a bond of sorts with her, however, I know nothing about computers.

Jasper was fun in this chapter.  And Seth!  He may be my favorite Seth ever.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 11

"...my stomach did this weird flip-floppy thing every time ..."  This absolutely explains how I feel with each new chapter.  I don't who I have a bigger crush on Edward, Bella or you two.  This story just makes me feel so happy.  Well it did until the end of this chapter anyway.  Oh boy, why do I feel something is about to happen?  My tummy is doing a weird flop-flippy thing at the thought of something unpleasant.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

My heart hurt for Edward from the moment I began this chapter.  My next "chant" was "I hope she makes chick potpie, I hope she make ....."  (Of course, we already expected her to show up with cake.)  When he realized she had plans to make the cpp, with the secret ingredient I might add, I swear I did the happy weepy dance right in my chair.  Well that and I may have sung a few bars of Happy Birthday to Edward too.  Loved how the chapter went from forlorn to joyous in a very short time.

Now about this fraternization policy.  Just how are you going to work around that?  If Jake catches wind of the budding relationship things could get very ugly and we do not want that.   Nope.  Not at all.

Sandra 

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

Appears to me that there will be some fraternization going on a little sooner than later.  I did not mention it last time but I love the little squirm dance that Jacob did.   The mere mention of it had me giggling again.  The dinner went quite well all things considered.  Edward seemed to hit it off well with Bella's friends and I do hope we will see more of that.  In the meantime I believe I have a birthday surprise to read.....

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

I have been away for awhile, real life and all.  How could I have forgotten just how much this story makes me smile and even guffaw in some moments.  Fun and excellent, fan fiction doesn't get much better than that.

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 16

I have finally caught up! i love your story but these two are soooo infuriating lol please post soon

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

I could've pictured Edward fitting Bella with the beautiful prada shoes ala cinderella, but Riley wasn't a bad substitute! Now, will there be a kiss at midnight?

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 16

I completely adore their wit and banter.  Love it.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 16

Outstanding chapter, yet again!  love this so much.  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 16

With all that's been happening to Bella prior to the real event I can't fathom what'll be going on when they're really there. I was glad to find out that Bella still prefers Edward to Peter.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 16

Awww! Bet she felt like Cinderella, with Riley as her Fairy Godmother ~_^ *sigh*

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh my gosh, I would like to stop laughing now! Bella is almost Willow Rosenberg-esque in her awkwardness :)

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