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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
So Rose and Bella have the same condition? Hmm. How Rose is concerned about Bella talking to Edward because he could changer her mind? Hmmm. Some really strange stuff going on in this town. Edward saying my mo...Esme? Hmmm? Bella wants Edward...damn pregnancy hormones....but great sex. Love it!! Can't wait for more of this story to come to light.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
looking forward to the enxt chapter
Reviewer: candyflower58 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
I bet that this is hard to write but I love reading it. Update when you have time I will like it no matter when I get it.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
Edward has some demons. You don't mess with Bella and get away with it!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
ok, what is going on with everyone???? she's gonna need to be on medication just to deal with all the drama....does Rose want her to back out of the arrangement?
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
What a dick. Shit he should be happy she did not get rid of it. It must be nice to never be able to be in that situation and still have the ability to look down at others and judge them. Oh I cried again with the Rose and Bella interaction.
Author's Response: Well, he might be the only one that can actually relate to her situation. So, yeah, his story is pretty similar to hers. You did? Oh, I'm sorry I made you cry :/ Thank you!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
A bit to short but good chapter.
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
A bit to short but good chapter.
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
A bit to short but good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
Poor Rose. I know Edward has to have a story....can't wait to read about it later! Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
I totally pictured the library part like the one in Beauty and the Beast lol. Rose's story...just wow. What a survivor. What the hell is Edward's problem? Asshat lol
Author's Response: Yes, he's the one that will make this harder for all of them. Thank you!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
OK...so Rose is a little messed up too. Bella and Rose can probably each sympathize with each other. Not sure where Bella's head is right now. She seems OK with giving the baby up, but I don't think Edward thinks this is such a great idea. He might be able to convince Bella to keep the baby?? Sounds very interesting! Can't wait to see where the road takes us.
Author's Response: Yes, he is the only one that won't make it easy for her. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Esme's past is pretty brutal. I'm so glad that she found Carlisle. She is finally safe. No one should have to endure a life like that, and I guess that's what makes Esme so special. She just loves to give. Bella seems to have had a pretty confusing life as well. Now at least, things will be moving in the right direction. I'm reading on Love the story!
Author's Response: Thank you! xoxo
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 (LisaDawn75)
they're not off to a good start.......*sighs* :(
Author's Response: No, and this is only the beginning. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
:( she should have thought this thru more....her mind is all over the place
Author's Response: Yes, everything happened very fast and she's overwhelmed but she'll figure it out as the story progresses. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 5
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 5
Esme's past was heartbreaking but at least she has Carlisle now :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow what a sad story but I'm glad she found love with Carlisle and adopted all of the kids cause people don't usually care if your not a cute little baby foster child state of Florida for parents till I was 18.it sucks not having a family someone to love you and care what happens to you.hopefully Bella wil find peace and love
Author's Response: Indeed, it is very sad. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Not one chapter without tears. I feel so bad for Bella I don't think she really wants to give her baby away. This is gonna kill her and it is just so unfair all the way around. Buy Bella have a nice life. :(
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry...! No, its not easy for her but she puts her baby above all. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
awww, poor Bella, i don't think Edward will make her feel any better at first :(
Author's Response: Yes, it's really hard for her and everything is still new so she's having a hard time dealing with it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Prologue
good beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really like the story but to be honest all the misspellings are very distracting.
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me, I will edit asap. I'm glad you liked the story.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.Thank you so much! Thank you for your review!
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