OMG! Iloved this story. I had to take several...um...breaks*snickers and wiggles in seat*, but it was spectacular. You definetly have a creative imagination, and a seemingly depraved sexual appatite!! My poor husband was worn out after the first few chapters. So gonna add you to my favorites so I can be sure to read your newest work.

 

Sin~

Wow, what a ride. Almost felt like this story was more Alice & Jasper's or maybe I just felt for their characters more.

No.  Something is wrong.  I'm not feeling the way I thought I would feel.  This not the Alice I love, and worst yet Edward.  I hate that he agree to this.  It makes me not want to continue reading.  Maybe we'll see.

Author's Response:

Im sorry you feel that way.  feel free to flounce if you don't feel a story is right for you hun.  

Still not liking the Edward image.  And more importantly, hating the first meeting.  But we'll see.

 

: ) didn't you know that Bitch stands for Beautiful, Intelligent, Talented, Caring Human? DJ

Wow! Hate to see this story end, but a great ending! Of course, from the last chapter we all knew the "I love yous" from Edward and Bella had to be explosive, wonderful job with that one! 

Now I have always been told when one chapter ends another begins, what's the next story you are writing for us?? :)

Author's Response:

Well its a little different from this one.  I have just submitted the first chapter for my vamp/BDSM story called The Ripper.  :) thank you for your support for this story xx

Thanks babe!  We heart you madly!!!

Nothing more can sum it up except wow! ...  And that was steamy?

Glad Bella and Edward are back together.  Great move on Edward's part getting the limo for their date to Emmett's showing at the gallery.  Very enjoyable evening until Jake showed up and started to make another move on Bella.  Bella wanted Edward.  Jake was being a jerk.  Edward definitely turned into Caveward.  As soon as Bella left to catch her breathe, Edward exerted his ownership towards Bella.  Emmett intervened prior to any bloodshed thank goodness.  Emmett chewing on Jake for starting to cause a scene about Bella.  Emmett knows Bella is crazy about Edward and Edward is nuts about Bella.  Both men wanted the Beautiful Swan picture.  While Emmett took Jake off on the tour, Edward went to find Riley to make sure the purchase was made to him.  Alice was ill during the showing.  Bella figured that Alice was probably pregnant and she needed to get a home test kit to verify it.  Jasper and Edward were excited about it.  Jake tried to stop them from leaving.  Bella left running to the limo.  Edward followed leaving their jacket and wrap behind.  At least they declared their feelings towards each other at Bella's place.  Made love and been together ever since.  Alice going into labor right after her wedding ceremony.  Pretty funny actually especially breaking her water all over Rosalie's new shoes.  I laughed so hard.  Just made up for her being such a bitch earlier on in the story.  New baby girl for the Whitlocks.  Only questions I have did Edward get the picture of Emmett's " Beautiful Swan "?  Also which apartment do they live in? Or still have two apartments and use both alternatively daily?  Love happily every after.  Getting it on in the cleaning closet while Alice is in labor to finish what they started at the church really daring of Bella and Edward.

Aww. Now it's over. *cue the tears* It's been a crazy journey for everyone but it couldn't have ended better than this :)

Awww what a great ending! ♥

Well, at least everyone is talking to each other now, even if there only communicating half of what they're thinking! Can't wait to see how the launch goes!

Gotta love Edward and Bella and their sense of humor with each other.  Building up the sexual tension until their date the following evening.  Bella knowing she has forgiven Edward and can't live without him.  Jasper was absolutely adorable about wanting to start a family right away.  Didn't care if she was pregnant walking down the aisle because to him she couldn't be more beautiful than if she was carrying his child.  So sweet.  Emmett giving Bella a teasing time about her and Edward.  Emmett knew Edward was important to Bella and that she would get back with him.  Amazed that Jasper and Edward were able to challenge Rosalie into actually striving to achieve the best funds to furnish the house for families of cancer patients.  Was surprised that Rosalie took a shine for Seth and that Seth returned the attraction.  Hoping Rosalie will learn humility before Seth will start to date her.  She's such a witch, she really needs to learn how to live a normal life instead of the glamorous rich lifestyle.