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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 18

Bella and Edward are safety away from the reunion and back at Edward's house.  Edward in heated discussion on the phone on the first floor and Bella soaking in the upstairs large tub.  Feeling horrible about ruining the reunion for everyone especially Edward.  Edward comes upstairs and joins her in the tub.  Telling Bella he's proud of her telling James off and standing up for herself.  Only bad thing was that Emmett was arrested along with James.  Can't blame Bella for not being upset about not being informed of restraint order being revoked.  James should never have been released from his assault charges. Do wonder what Charlie's reaction will be to the occurrances of the reunion and after.  What could Kate possibly need that she needs to call Edward at 1 am in the middle of the night?  to call him repeatedly.  just to interrupt him or to have him come over to lure him into an inappropriate environment and atmosphere?

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 18

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 18

SHIT not another ex seriously!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 18

Nooo....nooo cliffy...lol.   Of course there must be cliffies.    I wish I could have been a fly on the wall to see Emmett pounding James like a piece of tough steak...bam...bam....bam.    I'm sure Emmett didn't sustain much damage from James.     I still can't believe it has only been two weeks.    Edwad and Bella together seem so natural, so moving in together would be perfect.   She can finally feel whole because of Edward.   He completes her and she completes him.   It can be a rare thing these days.    It would also be perfect if James does take a indefinite stay at the local jail and maybe have his virginity revisited by a few of his new, er...jailmates.   I think James will start to think taking someone virginity isn't such a wonderful thing when it's happening to him...he he.   Can't wait to see more!   Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 18

Ah, and here enters Kate... uh oh!

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 18

kind of short, wasnt it? hehe

really nice after all the drama =) hope you can opdate soon

have a great weekend

Daniela

Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great update. I liked it. Please continue the good work.

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 17

Great great chpater updates!!!!!!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 17

James is such a creep.  Saying all those horrible things.  Why would Lauren take him back after pressing charges and having testimony in court against him.  That's a lot of steps completed to get rid of him.  Then why bring him to a high school reunion.  Just to have him torment Bella (Izzy).  Doesn't make sense.  Then to have James say all those things and humiliate Bella in front of everyone in the gym.  Everyone Lauren and Bella went to high school with and grew up with in town.  Especially in a town the size of Forks the happenings will be spread throughout town by morning.  To accuse her of not being able to keep the child alive and being a bad mother.  What a lot of horse sh-t. Belittling Edward at the same time.  Wanting the men to lose control to strike at him.  So he has a way to get back at them in order to get back at Bella for testifying against him.  He has some quirky plan going on.  Lauren is afraid of him too.  Wonder what he did to her to have her agree to bring him with her as her escort.  Edward lifting him off the floor surprised James and scared him.  He thought only Emmett a threat.  Edward capable of defending himself and Bella.  Couldn't take James insulting and degrading his lady love.  I'm surprised both Edward and Emmett didn't just each take a side of James and just heave hove James right out of the door flying into the pavement with a call to the police that he struck Edward and was harassing Bella.  That would get some response. Now Bella and Edward have to leave early from the reunion just when Bella was just starting to relax and enjoy herself.  She has realized that being with Edward she has come out of her shell and had the courage to stand up to James.

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

ah, that was kinda weird. I cant believe that Lauren would drop the charges. It seems that james might be up to something, but then this seems like a done deal too. Curious to see what else come their way.

LOVE MAC!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

Good for Bella for standing up for herself & being strong enough to do it!

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 17

Good for Edward and Emmette but you know it isi not over with with James yet.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 17

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: heathercherry004 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

this story reminds me to much of my life its crazy! James is just like my ex boyfriend and edward is just like my husband!!! cant wait to read the rest

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 17

Wow...so Edward is not only wonderful and sweet, but extremely protective over Bella and ready to kill James.   James is such an incredibly sick and insecure individual that he would want to go out of his way to hurt a woman.   What a psycho!   I wonder if James is going to end up dead somewhere and unfortunately the entire Cullen clan has been seen threatening him somewhere with death.    All bad things should come to an end sooner than later.   I hope Bella can now move past that snake James and have some comfort in knowing that Edward is now her savior.   Keep up the amazing writing.  We'll be waiting!

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

That was a hell of a class reunion!  What a heartless bastard, I can't believe Edward didn't go mental on him!  What an asshole!  Great chap as always, thanks for sharing it with us xo

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 17

Swoon!

Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 17

And now I'm all hot for Edward...more so than usual. *fans self*

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

Happy Dance!!!!!

Go Edward hell GO Bella!!!!!

I am so glad they had that facedown but I am afraid James isn't gone for good...   Look forward to more so excited to see an update tonight its been a LONG day!!! you just made my night thanks <3

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 17

*sigh*

Sweaty, feral Robward.

*dies*

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

My guess is that it's James since the middle part of the story included him. :0)

Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 16

Has to be James! Keep going you're doing a great job Thanks!!!!!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 16

Edward making going to the reunion as special as going to prom with a limo.  Surprising all their alumni with them being together as a couple.  Edward getting jealous at the guys checking Bella out.  Really cute.  Seeing Jessica and Lauren makes Bella uncomfortable.  Edward is just so sweet ready to leave at a moment's notice to make Bella feel better.  Bella backing into the punch table talk about embarrassing and drawing everyone's attention to you.  But seeing James there is like a nightmare coming true or a serious flashback from her time with him.  His abusive and crude ways towards her.  Wonder if Edward will take him on and teach him about how to treat a woman correctly.



Author's Response:

James really is a douche - Edward sure can teach him a few things about how a woman should be treated, that's for sure. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :-) 

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 16

Good Chapter..... i believe that it is james

Reviewer: twimtlfan (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 16

James. It has to be 

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