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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 26

squeeee omg omg omg love it!!!

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 26

Yippie! Goin to the chapel...

Reviewer: stressmaster (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 24

Jacob never gives up.

Reviewer: stressmaster (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

cute story.

Reviewer: alexandratrueblue (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 12

poor Bella

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update...luvin' this story!!! Congrats on having your own little "Bella"!! Best Wishes!!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update...luvin' this story!!! Congrats on having your own little "Bella"!! Best Wishes!!

Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 25

okay i have to say this story drew me in origianally due to the facebook angle, i love stories like that, but i stayed on because it just turned out to be extremely well written and thought out. really enjoying this and have a bad feeling tha edward will end up treating lauren soon, perhaps a pregnancy that james didn't want again, what do i know. anyway despite the fast pace that edward and bella have i still want to read more and i love that they trusted each other when the surroundings tried breaking them up:) thanks for this sweet story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the message. I'm glad you're enjoying where the story is going. It's complete and I'm getting the chapters well edited/beta'd before they post, but I hope not to keep you waiting too long. 

Trust goes a long way in a relationship and thankfully, Bella has picked this up pretty fast after meeting Edward. 

I love your username - Buffy fan by any chance? 

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 25

Loved the discussion between Edward and Bella moving their relationship to the next level.  Discussing children and numbers.  Liked that Edward wanted to make her an honest woman first and to do that needed to meet her father first.  Looking forward to the future chapters.  Happy for the update have missed them.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 25

Awwwww, seriously, awwww! Lump in throat. Domestic Bella and Edward is so damn cute!! Edward coming home in scrubs, yummy!!! The way he can be so forward, is because he is in love!! He's not wasting time! He wants her home, cooking, with babies! Love how Bella almost killed him with her total....7!!! Hahahahaha! Bella's inner dialogue......crazy funny!!! Love tha Edward wants to talk to Charlie ! Make her an honest woman!!! Love it all!!! Can't wait for more!!! Xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 25

Good chapter.....

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 25

squeeee wow major talks of teh future woot woot!!!!!  Can't wait for more love it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: chachi94 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 24

This story is awesome but I think you uploaded two of the same chapters twice. But this is a really good story. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

I dated a guy like this when I was 18, he was 29. He kept me from my friends and family, made me feel like shit, never trusted me and basically told me that I was lucky to have him because no one else wanted me. After 2 years he kicked me out of our apartment in the middle of the night and moved my best friend in the next day. He was scum and after 5 years I still haven't completely gotten over how he made me feel. This story brings up some bad feelings for me and I can only hope that somewhere along the line James will get the shit kicked out of him.

Great and expressive story.

Reviewer: MiZpamier (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

wow.. just wow..

I know I had to review earlier, but I had to keep reading..

maybe I'm just oversensitive, but the part about sophie, I cried my eyes out..

this story is so good, and so close to the truth that you just can't can't feel what bella is feeling(strange sentence but I hope that you know what mean;))

thanks for writing, I really loved it

and btw, please continue!

ps. I hate tanya

Reviewer: Libby219 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 24

Please keep writing!

Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 12

Having miscarried my second pregnancy, I can so relate to Bella here.  Well done - you wrote it so well!! No one knows unless they've been through it, just how gut wrenching it is.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review. Its a terrible thing to have to go through. I lost twin sons during my second trimester. It was hard to write this chapter, butI think it helped me to cope too. Hope you're enjoying the story. 

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 24

Ghahhah great great chapter!!! Pls pls pls update soon!!!

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 18

Damn, will these two ever get a break? Who next - Jake?

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 24

Bella did the right thing.  She is doing what makes her happy.  She is in love with Edward and he is in love with her.  Edward had feelings for her back in high school, but afraid to act upon them.  Jake just wants Bella for himself so will attempt to lay any possible doubt upon him to discredit their relationship and happiness as false. I was actually proud of Bella for standing up for herself and telling Jake to let her be.  She's happy and she's running her life. He's her friend not her life partner as their parents think.  So back off.  Perfect timing for Edward's happy text to arrive.  It improved her attitude quite a bit.  Will make the last two classes a lot better for her.  Once they move in her father and everyone else will just have to accept it.

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 24

omg jacob is pissing me off lol - love ur story cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 24

Love Edward & Bella's reunion.  Jacob needs to keep his nose out of it but I doubt he'll do that.

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 17

What a crappy thing to happen at a high school reunion. Lauren is an asshole to be with that abusive prick. I am so angry... but so aroused by Braveward ;-)

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 16

Please don't tell me that Lauren brought that douche bag James to the reunion! How stupid is she really!

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

Edward is absolutely amazing! I love him...

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