Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
it is great to see our Bella getting through her treatments and it looks like there is some light at the end of the tunnel. She is realizing thatbshe is surrounded by loved ones now, either with her presently or waiting for her back home. It was interesting to see a glimpse of her memories from the hospital, and it makes me wonder, could it be her mom? Why would Aro keep Renee from Bella??? Hmmm??? Can't wait for Edward and Bella's reunion, and hopefully see these two getting busy to make their family complete and maybe get busy getting Bella pregnant, well, if she is emotionally ready. Love it all!!! Can't wait for more! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Is Renee not really dead?
Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 08:48 PM · On: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Finally Bella is getting better, she really needs the peace she feels now. I really and truly hope that they didn't fake Renee's death for some god awfull reason. Just a feeling I have. We shall see.
Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Awesome story have been so emotions very good. Thanks :)
Reviewer: Dsgirl (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2011 03:35 PM · On: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
AWESOMENESS!!!
Reviewer: Dsgirl (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2011 01:19 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
Ok. I'm officially hooked. At first I was like What/ and then I was like maybe, and now Im like this is great!!! Great story!!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
That was an absolutely amazing chapter. I have never lived through recovery from an addiction, but to be honest, I swear if you could describe it, I would think that your chapter was incredibly perceptive. That was so dark...painful...sad.....all consumming, and then WHAM.....you can see her reliving her life, and being faced with an incredible decision...to fight to keep her life. It was completely mesmerizing. I loved it! So glad she chose to live her life and fight, fight for Edward and her. LOVED IT! I can't wait for these two to get back together. She needs him to complete her recovery. Hmmm....Hot Soup, with a side of a HOT Husband....YUMMMMY! Keep up the great work You amaze me!! Love it!!
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Great chapter. Poor Bella, she's been on one heck of a roller coaster ride. Glad she chose to live, want to see her healthy and happy plus don't think Edward would have survived either. Hope we get to see these two live HEA. After everything they've been through it's well deserved.
Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Thank you so much for the update...I can't get enough of these two. I want them happy together once again. They need it so bad, they break my heart each time. I'm glad Bella did not give up, I really don't think I could have handled it. So I know Edward would not have handled it at all. They belong together no matter what. So thank you from the bottom of my heart sweets, and I hope RL behaves for you...huge hugs and sloppy kisses coming you way from NC....xoxo
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Another wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Another wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
wow what an emotional chapter... very good Welcome back... you are a very talented writer!!!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapt 25 - Rising from the Ashes
Wow talk about crazy. Bella's emotions are worse than the largest rollercoaster on the planet! But yet they make such an interesting read. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
oh my god! i had to read that twice...i read 'blew UP around me'....thought the plane had been rigged. jeez. freaked me out...thanks for the great chapter!
Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
Love this story. Can't wait to see a healthy independant Bella emerge from with in.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
I tried to give this fic a chance because I am all about E&B romance. However, this fic is so convoluted in every chapter with more conspiracy stuff and more angst-filled *so-called good reasons* to keep them apart that it is not my cup of tea. I hate so many different people for so many different reasons keeping them apart, with every chapter adding a different facet, or a whole new problem. And now Bella *has* to have her therapy while living away from Edward. No offense but, I have really lost interest because this isn't about their romance or the *delicate dance of their marriage.* It is about crimes, conspiracies, and all the ways that other people interfere in their marriage for their own reasons or because they think they know what is best for them.
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 04:44 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
an amazing and emotional story!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 12:40 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
Heart is breaking...seriously. These two poor people have been torn apart...lied to....destroyed. They finally make a wonderful connection and are back to such a wonderful loving relationship, and WHAM...lol. These two can't seem to catch a break. I had tears in my eyes when these two had to say goodbye. Such a powerful chapter. Charlie is at least more appreciative of Edward and both Esme and Carlisle are there to support Edward. I know it is only a small seperation, but it will be so so so hard both both of them. I can't wait for these two to have a beautiful life and many beautiful children.
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 11:10 AM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
OMG - I need a whole box of tissues after that one. Feel so bad for both of them but Bella's got to get through the detox. Hope they have better days ahead soon!!
Reviewer: prudence21 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
it so sad and it crashed my hear T-T....
Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 09:43 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
Okay why don't you cut out my heart and stomp on it...because it's killing me right now, I swear I can't breath right now...these two are really going to be the death of me. How much more grief do they have to go through, I don't know how they get by day by day...*Gah* Thank you for the update...see you soon...xoxo
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 04:26 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
Awwwww I wanted to cry so much from this chapter! It's so heartbreaking! I can't wait for Bella's treatment to be over and for them to be back together!
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: DaryItzy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
omg!!! I know that they need to be apart but it hurts :(
dont let us wait to much please
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
Oh my heart is breaking for them,I know it is what had to happen to make her better but it still hurt. You are some writer this must have been so hard to write. It's all up hill from now and I know they will be fine. Can't wait for next chapter.
Lilly
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Chapt 24 - With All My Love
OMG!!!!!
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