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Reviewer: Twilight Tweets (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Reconstructing Bella
Hi! Your storyline is very addicting. Want to read more, please update soon...
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:18 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
So you never told your family, Edward? Perhaps now they're a bit more understanding and sympathetic about Bella's reaction and decision...
Reviewer: princesseva (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Hi, I really like your story. It's different from a lot of others I have read. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Holy crap!!! I still think he was set up!!! I wonder who pushed her down the stairs??? I cried hearing about the baby. Didn't you say Emmett knew?
Reviewer: xXblackxdiamondx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 12:18 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
I love this storyline but I'm a little bit confused as to how long its been since Edward and Bella have seen each other?
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 12:12 AM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Well the shit hit the fan! Damn.
Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
i hope edward told her the truth and i hope edward fights for bella, like really fight for her!--i want them together again
Reviewer: krystens (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 08:55 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Ok, so basically I think you're story is amazing :)
I read the first four chapters before you posted this fifth one and was so intrigued that I went to FF to look for it and read the whole thing! Loved it!
The FF version definitly needed to be corrected a bit but other than that it was great, so this is just a review to do confidence boosting because I thought it was a great story line.
I would like to point out that it would be much easier to follow the story if you defined the Italian in the story rather than end notes. Like in italics right after the dialogue? I think that would be less confusing.
Anyways great job and I hope you post a zillion other stories ;)
~Krys
Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Will we learn the truth? Did he or didn't he cheat? What about the baby? Did someone set Edward up? Your story has me on edge. Update soon:)
Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Oh wow!
So what really happened??
And of COURSE its Tanya skanali from Denali... Hoe.
I want the truth! I can handle the truth! :)
Reviewer: ilovegreendayasmuchastwilight (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
i absolutly love this story!!!!!! you have to make more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE
Reviewer: blueeyez (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
very funny chapter love crazy edward
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
awsome part. so why was he with tanya that day shopping, he shouldve just never talked to her again. friend he should have stopped when he realized her intentions. and let me guess who pushed her?
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
So I find myself drawn to your story, even though I feel like it has serious problems. Bella's incessant freakouts are tiring and not fun to read. I don't understand her inability to deal with any of this after four years. If she stayed away that long, she could have handled everything from a distance without being in the same room as him, which clearly she is not capable of doing. Why doesn't Edward try to explain before the very last moment? Surely he can't be surprised she's asking for a divorce after four years of estrangement?
On the other hand, your story has some original elements and I find myself drawn to it, so I'll be looking for the next chapter. Without some further development and answers to the above, though, I can't promise I'll hang around.
Thanks for writing and sharing. I appreciate how much time and effort it takes and how difficult it is to put yourself out there.
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
WOW, that was one hot meeting! I think Edward should take Tania to the meeting and make her confess and if she lies put her in the looney convent lol!
Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
That was intense! My heart is breaking for everyone! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
She should've just fired Felix....overly sanctimonious, self-important ASS. Like how you dealt with the miscarriage...and of course, i hope she takes Edward back...(love a begging Edward!) but there's lots to go, i'm sure before we get to that point:)
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:53 PM · On: Confessions and Consequences
Loved it an dcan't wait to read the nect chapter!
Reviewer: 11mousy (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:02 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
This story is so good!
Reviewer: Finn19 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:41 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
I love this. It is absolutely exquisite. Please update soon!
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:33 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
Ok so things not to do when your wife walks in on a naked woman in your bed 1) you don't call her names and say that she didn't know what was going on while not giving her a straight answer 2) you don't get photographed with other women 3) when you see her next you don't pretend that nothing is wrong & 4) you don't injure her in a blind rage because you didn't get your way. Normal men fight for their wives and don't give her continued cause to suspect infidelity.
The way I am looking at this, I might and this is a tiny might believe that Edward found a woman in his bed, but only cheaters, arrogant men and idiots that don't care about their wives brush off a woman's fears about infidelity. And here's a biggy, if Emmett knew about the pregnancy and miscarriage wouldn't he have tried to assure Bella in many ways that Edward was innocent if Edward was innocent.
Edward's actions thus far show a blatant disregard for his wife's feelings and that he feels entitled to have her as well as any woman on his arm. No matter what the back story is Edward needs to be brought down several notches, grovel quite a bit, and suffer a lot.
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:58 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
OMG. Maybe Edward didn't do anything and Tanya was trying to. Great story.
Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:19 AM · On: A Turbulent Affair
wow.... oh my.
she will have bruises, the media will have a hay day with that!
How can being in a bed with a naked woman not be what it looked like?
Of course it was a mistake Eddie! You tripped and it fell in... right?
Once a cheater, always a cheater.
I cant wait to read more, I love this story already.
Reviewer: vamps09 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:27 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
Omg, I love this story, poor Edward, I am wondering what really happened, cant wait for more.
Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:18 PM · On: A Turbulent Affair
ahhhh soo good!!!!!!!!! i hope edward fights for bella and does tell her the truth and in turn have bella tell him the truth, but i want and hope that they do get back together, but i want bella and jacob to date too.. and i know you cant do both haha.. or maybe you can!? hahaha but whatever you do ill be happy!
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