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Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 10:35 AM · On: A Turbulent Affair

I am so confused who is the bad guy in this story?! Man I am addicted to this!

Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 12:56 AM · On: A Turbulent Affair

I am so confused who is the bad guy in this story?! Man I am addicted to this!

Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 12:38 AM · On: How To Make An Entrance

I hope she doesn't give in to him he should have tried harder don't you think and he has been seen with so many women 

Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 12:05 AM · On: Reunion

I really wonder if Edward really cheated on her. Also did she lose the baby?

Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 11:34 PM · On: Reconstructing Bella

This story is amazing. 

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: False Allies (Part Two)

HES HER FATHER!!! BAHAHAHAHA. UPDATE SOON, OR ILL DIE IF I DONT KNOW WHATS GOING ON!

Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: False Allies (Part Two)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARrrrrrgghhhhhhhh!

 

Attack of the evil cliffie!  *growls in frustration*

 

lol, love it!  HIGHLY ANTICIPATED FOLLOW FOR THIS ONE EH? *giggles*

Reviewer: Black Poyzen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Playing The Part

Hey! i love this part, but i feel like bella and jake don't really say what needs to be said and that whole part about him keeping a new secret is just....; if i were bella i wouldn't have even talked to him after that, if there is nothing i hate more its the "there's something i know but i can't tell you' line - i mean just don't tell me anything to begin with! neway i'm ranting ... i actually read each chaptper the day it gets posted if i can and i'm dying to read the next part!  thanks!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Playing The Part

i hope that bella can stop hiding and step and face everything with jake, edward and their lost baby

Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Playing The Part

I swear these two can not catch a break...thank you for the update.

Reviewer: darkstarz (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Playing The Part

Nice!  Though Bella continues to be a contradiction herself. 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Playing The Part

That was a wonderful chapter.    Edward seems so concerned for Bella and I hope that soon they can sort everything out and come clean with all of their feelings.  I have a feeling that their thoughts are exactly the same.   They just want to be alone and happy together.   Obviously she needs therapy, and I hope they can convince her to talk to someone soon.   And I guess it is of no shock, that Jake has feelings for Bella, but maybe he can fall for the "other Bella", the lookalike...he he.   I would love to see them go home, spend every night together, and soon they'll be ready for a new baby Cullen...one of their own.  Can't wait...Hope to see udate soon!   Enjoy your trip.

 

 

Reviewer: Aurora Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Are You Still Mine?

i got an update with the same chapter from a day or two ago

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 09:00 AM · On: You've Made Your Bed...

no one ever take into account just how much greif the father of a lost child could be in its always thee poor mother ....the father has to be strong and help the greeving mother

but we have a greiving father here  on our hands she has had 4 years to deal with this he is just freshly wounded

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Are You Still Mine?

"And if you ask me, it is pretty low of Edward to ask you to get rid of him.”

Isolating women from friends is a sign of an abuser.

And Bella didn't "fail" Edward. She saw a naked woman in THEIR bed! How long is everyone going to IGNORE his screwup?

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Taking Care of Business

I don't like Jake... but Assward had no right to do that. None. Bella needs to grow up and tell them BOTH to stop acting like she's property.

And EDWARD needs to grow up and STOP blaming EVERYONE but himself for what happened. Does he really think if he gets Bella all alone and isolated, their marriage will be perfect? That's crazy.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:40 AM · On: When a Man Loves a Woman

Well, Edward is partially seeing the light.

But what the hell did he expect; discovering Bella had come home and seeing Tanya's clothes on the floor should have made him THINK "Wife came home and found other woman's clothing on floor = I'm screwed."

Instead, he attacks Bella for her "lack of faith" in him? Fuck him. He needs to grow the hell up because he's certainly no prize.

BELLA is the innocent one. Not him.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability

this is where I say she better tell him or I will   wait what forgive him for what ????????

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses

Gawd, when will Bella stop blaming herself! She's the only really innocent person here! I'm so tired of her "I'm not worthy" bit. EDWARD started the whole damn mess.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:29 AM · On: You've Made Your Bed...

WTF?

How dare he!? How DARE he?! Who the hell does he think he is? HE let a woman (who had made a pass at him) spend the night in his WIFE'S home? What did he think she would believe? How DARE he whine about her "lack of faith"? How DARE he blame her for losing her baby?

Edward is a spoiled, entitled brat who thinks that the sun shines out of his butt. What would he think if he found a naked man in his bed and his wife in the shower?

Asshole.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Reservation for Explanations

I wish Bella would stop blaming herself. Edward was (and is) a prime asshole when it comes to her.

And the rest of the Cullens need to stop treating her like a damn toy; pushing her around.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Desperate Devotion

its not that we doubt you but this waiting for the other shoe to drop is giving me an ulcer 

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:00 AM · On: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares

Grow up, Edward. Bella told you she saw Tanya in your bed - what do you THINK happened? Stop blaming everyone else.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 07:52 AM · On: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries

Jasper is a self-centered jerk; to ask Bella that.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 07:48 AM · On: Confessions and Consequences

So Edward's a victim? HE brought a woman who had made a pass at him into his wife's house and he doesn't think he did anything wrong?

Sigh. I bet Bella will start blaming herself for that, too.

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