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Reviewer: Arizona Hale (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:24 PM · On: The Light Upon This Earth
First, let me say that I never expected to have a wife. This is perhaps the happiest day of my life. :D
Second, I'm so happy that you had the courage to post this. I encourages ME to post my little chapters, the things that you and I have been working so hard on together. *sigh* I can't be chicken shit if you've been brave enough to step off the edge.
Shit.
So...anyway. You know how I feel about what you've written. It's beautiful and I'm so, so proud of what you've done. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
So...when's the honeymoon? *wiggling eyebrows*
Author's Response:
Ah, stepping off the edge - how so very New Moon-ish. You know me too well, sister.
Thank you seems like so little to say for all the time and effort we've pored over all this... and good gawd, this is just the first chapter! I'm grateful nonetheless, and am more than proud to have you in my corner. Who says this fanfic stuff isn't fun?
And a honeymoon? Dear me, beloved, how opprobrious for you to even suggest one. ;)
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:09 PM · On: The Light Upon This Earth
I have some problems with the summary. Totally cryptic, so I don't know if I want to go on reading or not. Please tell us more clearly where you want to go and what you want to say. Chapter one isn't a big help.
Author's Response: Hello.
I'd actually had a thoughtful discussion regarding the whole cryptic feel of the summary and first chapter with one of my betas long before I'd even posted the story, and pretty much defended it by saying that ambiguity is very much a part of the way the story unfolds. There is a method to the madness, and revelations will be made in due time.
I will say that what I'm attempting is a character-driven story, since in my opinion the most intriguing way to know a character and to test their values is by way of internal struggles. The drawback in writing a story like this is it's difficult to chronicle introspection, let alone make sense of it. I'm going to try anyway.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I am grateful for your doing so.
Reviewer: lilroses_89 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 12:42 PM · On: The Light Upon This Earth
Beautiful and introspective. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read, for your very kind review, and for giving this story a chance. ;)
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 12:12 PM · On: The Light Upon This Earth
I AM SO PROUD OF YOU!!!!
I know you were so nervous about posting this, but you did it! Yay, you!
I don't think I told you before, but I absolutely ADORE this part: "This foreign fragrance was more than apropos... as a fair representation of the tears she couldn't shed." I can smell the saltiness in her hair and on her skin when I read that.
The whole thing is just beautiful! So proud of you!
Author's Response:
*blushes* Thank you, thank you, thank you... I have you to thank for challenging me to write, then encouraging me to share. Thank you for being such an inspiration. ;)
And yes, you'd told me you liked that part more than once. I'm relieved the imagery was something that made this part of the story real for you.
Thank you again for everything.
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