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Reviewer: obessingovertaylor (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 05:34 PM · On: The Fateful Day

Hey, I love this story and the original movie. I am sad though that you never finished writing it. If you could that would be great.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Putz

Loved Jasper and Bella's banter :) Icky Vicky rears her head lol

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 11:05 PM · On: New Beginnings

Uh oh lol

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 10:29 AM · On: He's Got What!?

Damn....that was funny.   I know it's based on the movie, but just thinking of these characters in   I loved it.   "Do I like Jello?"   lol.   I can sense that Edward is falling fast or has already fallen for Bella, so I'm just wondering when this will all come down,and how Edward will express himself.   He should be commanding and strong and tell her that in no way should she ever think of Jasper...that he is the man for her.   He should sweep her off her feet.    I can't wait!!!   Love it!!  Write us again soon!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 11:32 PM · On: He's Got What!?

Loved it!

Reviewer: Saryione (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 07:26 PM · On: He's Got What!?

i have to say I love this movie so putting Twilight into this just makes me smile the whole time.

Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 05:38 PM · On: He's Got What!?

Still here!!  Reading this made me go out and buy the movie, which I also love!  Thank you!

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 06:18 AM · On: Not Enough

thanks for making me cry lol

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Not Enough

Jake Jr is such a little chapter stealer lol

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 06:07 AM · On: Pregnant?

oh my god.... that's so funny

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Pregnant?

Loved druken Alice lol and Jake.

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Family Dinner

looks like Bella's secret is going to get caught

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Family Dinner

The family dinner was hilarous!

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Affair

hmmm wow, i can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Affair

Loved it :)

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 09:23 AM · On: Affair

is Bella ever going to get caught before Jasper awakes or will Jasper have to reveal everything?

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Making Friends

Loved it! Bella and Edward's walk was so cute :) Jake Jr at the end cracked me up :)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Making Friends

Loving this..keep them comming!

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 11:11 AM · On: Making Friends

Too cute!

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Making Friends

i wouldn't mind walking on that street

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 10:50 AM · On: The Fateful Day

omg iu lov eit

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Special Deliveries

More tension between Bella and blind.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Special Deliveries

i love their banter :)

Reviewer: jing (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Special Deliveries

Maybe you could try to twist the story a little bit.Its too similar with the movie.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Surprise Visitors

Jake Jr is annoyingly adorable lol

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