oh my

very hot snd very funny

Loved this story... looking forward to the epi <3

well we all can agree that this was a major breakthough on the unfreezing of the heart of Edward Masen

oh its the end!!

i loved it. both the ending and the whole story. really.i  will definitely coming back in the future to reread this... so! i hope you dont take it down! i really loved that tyler and terry reunited. i wasnt expecting it at all and i thought it was really sweet. i also loved playful edward at the end. best kind of edward. :) well.... i look forward to reading the epi and the sequel and outtakes!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much.  I am glad you have enjoyed the story.  My penname on fanfiction is troublefollows1017, if you want to check out the outtakes over there.  :)

What an engrossing story! I loved the penny revenge...had me laughing out loud. I can't wait to see where this goes.

This was such a sweet and also hot chapter, lol.   Sweet how Bella found a way to reunite Tyler with his long lost love.   I could only imagine with Tyler felt like sitting there, seeing his old love standing there....gah.   It was perfect.   To see how far Edward has changed, and yet how passionate he remains for Bella...so so sweet.   How in one year, Edward has become such a helpful part to the kids program.   How he wants to be involved, and he's not afraid.   Love it.   He just wants to make Bella happy, and her gift...Perfect.   Can't wait to see where this is going.   This has been such a wonderful and passionate story, always giving me goosebumps or a heat rush.     Love it all, even when I feel tears in my eyes.   You give it all to us, and we wouldn't have it any other way!   Love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I always love getting your reviews.  Glad you enjoyed the story :)

You did a great job on this story.  I love it!  I hope you keep writing more of them!!

i started reading this three days ago, i haven't been able to stop reading it.... even know i had to get up for work in only a few hours this morning i kept reading.. i kept thinking about what the next chapter was going to hold or happen while i work.... i absolutely fell in love with this story... i loved that it had its ups and downs.. i love how bella developed relationships with different people.... including tyler & liam .... it made me laugh, snort and giggle randomly.... example while i work i noticed that my desk had a single shine nickel by my computer monitor totally made me think of this story...i will never see a penny or a nickel the same way.... this story also made me anxious and emotion and almost cry during several spots.... but it was soo good i just couldnt stop.... not to mention it got my heart racing with of edwards sexyness.... im sorta sad that i found this story right when its about to end.... but i glad im in time to read the epi..... i cant wait to see what happens next :) thank you for writing this amazing story and most of sharing it.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I am glad that you enjoyed the story so much.  xoxo

Awww, yay!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Wow, really loving the story!! I want to say i can't wait for the next chapter, but if that's the the last one before the Epi, I'm conflicted. Thanks for writing!!

Very exciting and intense chapter.  Everyone thinking James' target will always be Bella.  Has the best guards guarding her.  No one suspected one of Edward's inner trusted circle would allow James into his life close enough to reach his family and him.  Now the choice is either his daughter's life or Edward's what else can father Garrett do, but attempt to save his daughter.  He agrees to trade Edward.  Puts Emmett out of commission, drives to the meeting place, and James puts bullets into both Garrett and his daughter.  James is crazy.  What he had planned to destroy Edward is so wacko it is unbelievable.  Tying the man to a post in the garage, dousing him in gasoline, placing a flamable gel circle around him, alighting it on fire, and keep garage doors closed.  Edward would have died of smoke inhalation before being burned to death first if not for the bravery and love of Bella. Edward was never late for lunch or anything.  Being punctual was his life, his major complaint in others, his biggest annoyance, and the later he was the more anxious and worried Bella was becoming.  When Tyler said they had to leave now from the restaurant she went willing, but when they wouldn't tell her anything she became alarmed.  She badgered them for information.  Finally Tyler told her Edward was missing.  Bella insisted they check his chip.  Tyler wouldn't do it with her in the car.  He wanted her safe and protected because he was going after James and James wasn't walking away.  Bella wasn't going anyway but looking for Edward.  She called Peter and told him activate the program and locate chip and send to GPS to their car. When it arrived Liam drove to the site.  Tyler gave her, her gun, said if he shows up just shoot, don't think, just shoot, he'll kill her without thinking about it.  She promised.  The two went to look for Edward.  Bella saw smoke and heard gunfire.  She knew the smoke was something away from the smoke.  Smoke meant someone in trouble and that had to be Edward.  She went and wouldn't leave until he was released from the sick death trap of James.  Edward should have known Bella wouldn't leave with him in that situation. She would die with him than leave him to die in that situation.  When they came upon James with his gun pointed at them, she didn't listen to Tyler, she didn't think to pull her gun out as soon as she left the garage to have handy if anyone should approach.  She didn't even think to put her hand in her apron like everyone puts their hand in their pockets and just fire away until he was dead on the ground.  But Tyler knew Bella wouldn't be able to mentally handle his death on her conscience.  Tyler killed him, but was seriously wounded in the process. So both men were wounded, thank goodness Liam showed up to help carry one back to the car.  The nurses at the hospital should have just let Bella alone and visit and stay with the men in the hospital.  One gave up and let her visit Tyler after a while.  She knew Bella wasn't giving up no matter the obvious differences in their physical appearances she was checking personally on Tyler's wellbeing no matter what.  It's like a military hospital when I was a child after a surgery, my grandmother promised she'd be there by my bedside when I woke up.  My grandparents weren't military (my dad was), but my grandmother threw a fit.  She yelled at the nurses and told them, I promised that child I would be there and by God I'm going to be there.  My mom told me under her breath the nurses said "Oh these grandmothers." You can't win.  That's Bella.  Strong, determined, won't take no for an answer.  Why she backs down with Edward I'll never know, she didn't with Tyler, but with the witchy nurse Edward has she cows down and lets her in the end walk all over her.  Which has Edward checking himself out having Carlisle staying with them.  But all the stresses, tensions, and fears of the day worked into the demons of the past in his mind causing the horrendous nightmare and screaming which woke the entire household.  The hospital should have let Bella stay in the hospital the PTSD would have been better handled there with them rather than at home with his father, girlfriend/lover, housekeeper, friends/guards.  Surrounded by the people who love him the most who will hurt and suffer along with him as well rather than medical professions who can maintain a medical detachment and offer sound and unbiased proper medical help and assistance.

awesome