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Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
Can't believe he did that!!!!!!! Idiot! Well done to Bella though for having the strength to walk away.
Reviewer: ktblack25 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 09:24 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
I just caught up on this story and i have one word: AMAZING!! I love Pennyward =) even if he is dark and twisty!
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
classic...I love it...oh man, if I had nickel for every time I wanted to do something like this I'd probably be as rich as him :)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 01:19 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
AW! Are Edward's walls slowly crumbling down? Does Bella have anything to do with that?
What did Jasper say to Bella outside? Is he going to influence her to leave Edward? Will she let him?
Another question I have is, I know Edward is responsible for getting Bella her job, but, when and will she find out? Will this be the relationship breaker upper?
Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow - a very intense chapter. Finally we are getting a glimpse of the real Edward Masen - and we think there might be hope for him yet! ;) HIs torture (both the sexual and emotional) are very well described here - well done.
Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 6
Need a cold shower after the ending of that chapter!! ;) Nicely done.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 09:39 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
Poor possessive guy! Possessive of his thoughts and feelings too! He didn't like to share them, but he's slowly figuring out that your not giving something away when you do, your gaining something!
Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
This version of Edward really needs taking down a notch - so glad Bella is up to it!! Lol - I really liked this chapter - well done.
Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
I laughed soooo much at the end - can just imagine that lopsided smile and was glad that Bella didn't allow it to get the better of her. Nice start to the story.
Reviewer: rach018 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 08:00 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
OH MY GOSH!
WHAT THE HELL IS GONNA HAPPEN?
/hides
GIMMEGIMME MORE!
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 07:38 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
Aww! The ending... Totally sniffling. *puddle of mush*
Reviewer: christina1199 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 07:03 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
Howcome you didnt tell us we'll be needing our tissues for this chapter??? I still Love this story, cant wait til' next chapter
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 06:18 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
I just LOVE this story!
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 03:35 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
I cried, I admit it!~ Just found your story - it is quite compelling and has had me goofing off of work for too many hours!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 02:19 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
I just stayed up entirely TOO late reading this entire story, when I should be in bed for class tomorrow afternoon. I LOVE this fan fic!! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: 1216 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was really priceless, the pennies and the nickles. Well played to start a push/shove relationship.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Never, I wouldn't be able to resist him at all! Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 9
What is behind all of Edwards mistrust? I can't believe he would think that way of Bella!
Reviewer: soareska (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 09:04 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
this is my first review...i am completely hooked on this story. there is a memorable or heartwrenching moment or line in EVERY chapter. the nickels on the desk, followed by the pennies on the table? the talk with Twilight, him showing up at her apartment after , the chess analogy, and now finally, he loves... he really does...... goodness i could go on and on... for real, snaps to you, this is a beautifully written fic... lets not forget that your ability to incorporate and write lemony goodness is ridiculously awesome... *fans self*
what's your posting schedule? or do you just post when you're finally done? also, kudos i love the LONG chapters :)
if you wanna send a preview or teaser... heheheh... you can send it to: ksoares@circajewels.com
keep up the AWESOME writing!
xx
Reviewer: MichelleMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
this was drilliant
really loved how you captued totured edwardd!
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 08:15 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
Oh the ending was awesome! YAY!!!!! One: its such a sweet thing for Elizabeth to tell her son, and Edward, in turn, to tell Alice. Two: He admitted he loves! we are making progress!
Reviewer: Aurora Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 07:50 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
like it?? like it??!!! are you crazy!!
I LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 07:20 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
Great great chapter pls pls pls update soon!!!! And thank you so much for the little peek into his mind!!!! Gahhhh So happy he does love!!!!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 07:16 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
i knew the big lug had it in him
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 06:18 PM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
I loved getting Edward's POV. It gave us so much more insight into him and his thoughts.
I loved what he shared and said to Alice.
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