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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Edward's Birthday
Damn damn damn hot birthday. Edward is so different, and it just makes their relationship sizzle, hot hot hot. You know..most guys would want some pretty interesting gifts...but instead he buys her a BMW. What the hell??!! Got to love it! It looked like maybe he was going to get angry for a second, but he was able to control it. LOL!! ROFL!!! Can I have that Angus Burger cooked medium???? LOL??? Two windows for drive thru??? Loved it! I also loved how you snuck in the Twilight words "Say it! Say it out Loud!" when they had the cake there on the counter. Loved it! Of course sex with these two...hotter than Hades!! Loved it! Really don't want this to end. Love the love! Thank You for our Fridays, and our bonus Birthday. Yes!!
Author's Response: We are getting close to the end. But it's okay, I promise. Lots of excitement left in these last few chapters, I promise!! Thanks for reviewing! xoxo
Reviewer: Sapphire2011 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Edward's Birthday
Amazing! Can't wait to read more! ;-)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Edward's Birthday
I kinda feel bad for him too! But...he does have a lot of convincing to do!
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 04:50 AM · On: Edward's Birthday
a lovely, beautiful chapter. I have really enjoyed this story. You really have a way of capturing emotion onto the page.
Reviewer: pindrop (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 11:06 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
Lovely! Great job!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
You can't blame Bella for waiting for the shoe to fall. Edward left her out of the blue. She was devastated when he left. She had no communication from him at all. He just returned with no warning. He can actually say Bella I love you, now, but really what security does she have that he won't leave when things get rough again. Just his word that it's. His actions before said the opposite. So she's leery of words when his past showed something entirely different. Making him a homemade birthday cake with the words "I love you." Bella never stopped loving Edward just doesn't want to completely trust him not to pick up and leave her high and dry again. It's scary because the pain would be too much to bear for her. Edward is trying so hard to prove to Bella he isn't going to leave her again. Bella just needs time to have it proved to her by Edward and his actions. Edward is ready to make the lifelong commitment, but Bella isn't ready yet. She still needs to be convinced that Edward won't pick up and leave if trouble starts again from the outside world. Will just have to wait and see what happens what life events will happen to them and how Edward handles the stress associated with it.
Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head with your review! Thank you for being so insightful and sharing it with me! New chapter coming soon. Lots of excitement to come! xoxoxo
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
Gahhh!!! Great Great chapter can't believe you onlyhave 4 more chaps to go pls pls pls pls pls update soon!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
I can't beleive it is almost over! Oh no! Great chapter. thank you for it (since it was a bonus!).
Can't wait to see how things end for these two!
Reviewer: 2hotdogs (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
I instantly froze when I read Bella say "don't want to burn the house down." I'm surprised that didn't get any kind of reaction from Edward.
Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
Gr8 chapter glad she let him get the car 4 her and told him she still loved him.Can't wait 2 the next chapter!
Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:29 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
thank you so much for this chapter! i loved it, edward's bday sounded amazing. I love your story and please post soon :)
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:27 PM · On: Edward's Birthday
Loved it!
Reviewer: Sapphire2011 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 24
Awesome! It was time for happiness! ;-) More, please!!
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 24
Is this the story's ending?
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 24
Awww so sweet!!
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 22
Aww, I like Tyler!
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 17
Love Peter. So sad about Alec!
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 04:22 AM · On: EPOV Saturday at Six
So sweet!
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Fire in toy story 3. Is that why Edward didnt want to watch?
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
Woah. What an ass
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, my God, that was awesome. Absolutely HILARIOUS!! I am so excited to get caught up!
Reviewer: neenee12111111 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved it thanks soooooooooooo much for sharing this with us!!! <3
Reviewer: lilmisssunshine (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 24
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Reviewer: lilmisssunshine (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 18
I FEEL DEPRESSED.but you writting the emotions like that makes it so real.
Reviewer: lilmisssunshine (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY????????=''''((
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