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Reviewer: djuvinity (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 06:00 PM · On: The New Girl
i love the plot n the kickazz bella
Reviewer: MrsDuckyFuzzles (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:40 AM · On: The New Girl
PUHLEEEEEEEZ UPDATE THIS IS COOL
Reviewer: onigiri06 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 03:56 PM · On: The New Girl
Thank God there's an update!!!!! Yay!!!! When's the next one??
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:17 AM · On: The New Girl
Well written and kudos on a variant of bad ass Bella.
Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:39 PM · On: The New Girl
Thanks for posting! Can't wait to see where you take this. And yea, real life can be messy, but it's great to see you continuing despite the issues that pop up.
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 07:15 PM · On: The New Girl
ok, so you just gained another reader....!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Hikari Dark (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:44 PM · On: The New Girl
That was awesome!!!!!! Please put another one up soon!
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:41 PM · On: The New Girl
great chapter!
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:17 PM · On: The New Girl
Seems really cool so far so I'm adding it to my faves.
Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:08 PM · On: The New Girl
oooh. love how you've characterised bella! can't wait to read more -L
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 11:59 AM · On: The New Girl
This second chapter had such a different tone from the first, I can't wait to see how it all comes together. Loved hearing Edward's first impression of Bella and I can't wait to read more of the story!
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 11:42 AM · On: Reunion
Fabulous way to begin a story and I LOVED that it was from Charlie's perspective. Really well done and I am very curious to see how the story unfolds.
Reviewer: grniys (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 11:02 AM · On: The New Girl
This is very interesting! I look forward to reading more. I'm loving Bella's attitude.
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 10:05 AM · On: The New Girl
i love it i love it you have to update soon i can't wait
Reviewer: thoratwilight (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:56 AM · On: The New Girl
please try to update soon pleaseeeeeeeee
Author's Response: I'll go as fast as I can
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:35 AM · On: The New Girl
This story is great. I'm dying to know more about Bella.
Reviewer: Dillinger910 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:20 AM · On: The New Girl
:)
Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:05 AM · On: The New Girl
YES!!!! Snarky Bella and playful Cullens.... I love it when writters give them more personailty than what the books give. I am so looking forward to Edward and Bella actually meeting! Good work, keep it up!
Author's Response: Why thank you! :)
And I agree, there wasn't enough personality in the books, you only really saw Edward until the last two books. Then again, I can't really do that when I'm focusing on the Cullen side for the start now can I?
Reviewer: _chaoz_ (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 08:55 AM · On: The New Girl
well well, the wait was worth it :) super!
so... alabaster skin, intriguing, highly entertaining and delicate brows?! seems someone's got a crush! very amusing, just like your noisy Alice. wonder how far she can look into the future and if she already knows Bellas secrets...
how much time has passed since the reunion in chapter 1? Will there be a hint what conversation she had with Charlie and what else happend in the time between?
and really - a Kawasaki Ninja, may I say I love you? ;)
oh I really should have noticed this story later, suspension is killing me! :D
well done, again counting days to read more!
best wishes
chaoz
Author's Response: yep, Edward is smitten, he just doesn't know it yet XD
As for Alice,
As for time from the reunion chp, doesn't really matter but I'd say a couple of weeks. As for hints of the talk they had, there will be some when Edward gets near Charlie at some point.
Kawasaki Ninja is one of my favorite bikes and yes you may ;)
and sorry about the suspense, speed isn't exactly my thing, that's why I'm getting what help I can with the writing process
-Delta
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 08:52 AM · On: The New Girl
i love bella when she's a snarky little smart ass! i'm so waiting for the next chapter can't wait to see what happends when when he meets bella with a ittle spunk
Author's Response: Oh, I think you're gonna love this Bella.
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Reunion
Oooh! Very intriguing. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: neither can I, would have had the next chp out weeks ago but there have been issues with the editing
Reviewer: onigiri06 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Reunion
Please, please, please update!!! I'm a fan of Maximum Ride myself, I borrow my little sisters' copy. God, I hope Bella here is not as spineless as she was at the books, but I really really love your concept!!! We're waiting anxiously for it!!!
Author's Response: Spineless? Far from it my friend. X}
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Reunion
Not a bad start to a story. I'd say that so far it's working out great. My one piece of advice is that no matter how badass a character is, don't take away all of their vulnerability. That small bit of vulnerability provides often times an anchor to humanity.
Ta
Master of the Boot
Author's Response: thanks for the advice, I'll remember it
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Reunion
Wow, this is an exciting start. And what a cool concept!! I usually stick to reading completed stories, but I think I'd like to follow this one for the ride because it's so unique. Any thoughts on an updating schedule? :)
Author's Response: I'm editing the second chp right now, with any luck it will be processed within a few days. After that... well I make it a point to finish what I start, though this may be easier than some of my other projects since first person comes easier
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Reunion
This looks interesting. I dont know Maximum Ride though I've somewhat heard of it. Badass Bella is always a good thing though.
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