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Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 16
sneaky sneaky!!
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 14
owe owe owe !!
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 12
no shoes just tomatoes and slimy cabbage lolz
Reviewer: Estelicia (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
bravo. i couldn't stop reading. i just had to read and read and read till i knew the outcome. no fair lol great job
Reviewer: Estelicia (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 2
this is really good, i just want to keep reading and reading to find out what happened to poor bella. lol
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great fic...I really enjoyed this one. One problem, you kept going back and forth between this being 2 or 3 years after New Moon. It was a little confusing. But other then that, great job.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
OKAY - WELL -WOW - JACOB THE BAD GUY HARD TO SWALLOW - I AM 100% AN EDWARD FAN - YOU NEED TO WRITE A SQUEAL - BELLA HAS BEEN THROUGH HELL AND BACK - I WANT TO SEE HER HAPPY WITH EDWARD THROUGH YOUR EYES - SO WRITE A SQUEAL PLEASE - ALICE TOLD ME YOU WOULD - DONT BET AGAINST ALICE!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great story. I'm happy with how it ended. Jacob was a otal jerk and even though it's a little ooc, it's your story--so it shouldn't matter. Can't wait to start reading collide.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
Finally. I was wondering how long it would take him to admit his feelings to her.
Reviewer: Souillet (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow love love loved this story... and you know *hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge nudge* there could totally be a sequel to this story hehe!!!!
Reviewer: amaris09 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
I recently came across this site and stumbled across your story. Your writting captured me and I couldn't stop reading till I was at the end. You are a wonderful writer and I wish you the best of luck if you choose to persue your gift (and you should!!!!).
Reviewer: mzinke (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
Good story. I like it that Edward and Bella are seeing eye to eye finally. A happy ending
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
yeah. i love, love, love, that bella asked edward to marry her. thanks for a great story. now i've been reading for a few hours and need to go to sleep. i look forward to more of your work.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
i just started reading this story today. i'm terribly sorry that i haven't reviewed, but honestly, i just had to get to the next chapter. amazing story! i did catch the hiddent message thing, it reminded me of when alice let the message for bella in BD. You have thrown quite a few twists my way though.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
i just started reading this story today. i'm terribly sorry that i haven't reviewed, but honestly, i just had to get to the next chapter. amazing story! i did catch the hiddent message thing, it reminded me of when alice let the message for bella in BD. You have thrown quite a few twists my way though.
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
awww
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 19
awww
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!
Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
I like this one.
Reviewer: seasons54 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 19
I simply could not stop reading to give a review until I had completed chapter 1 thru 19........WOW.....I really enjoyed it....with your writing talent you should continue writing...I would definitely buy a book you wrote and read it with enjoyment.... thank you for Mistaken Vows.....AWESOME
Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is one of the best written stories I have ever read. The ending was epic and perfect. I hope you'll wright a sequel with her change and her new vampire life.
Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
GREAT story! I am in no way a fan of Jake, so u get brownie points for sure! I would've killed him off, but the way you did it was so totally Edward. You did a great job in writing all of the characters. Jasper is my favorite & you showed him enough love to make me happy! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
thank god for a happy ending! i must admit i did like this jacob, i am so on team edward that a horrible jacob makes me happy! (how masochistic is that? lol)
i liked this story, very original and i think you are an amazing writer!
=D
Reviewer: zah (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
wonderful story and nice change as well.. very professionally written compare to many fanfic i read up to now. keep it up..
Reviewer: risabella (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great story, loved it!
Reviewer: risabella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
Now you did it. You made me cry. I was already close several times during the last 13 chapters.
I'm lost for words at the moment. I know I should quit and go to bed but I don't know if I can.
Heartbreaking story. Thank you.
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