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Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
Keep it Up!!
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! Okay I just reread and caught up with this story and I am very intrigued. I have a baddd feeling that the fiance is Jake and he was the animal that attacked Bella. Or she is lying through her teeth and there is no fiance which would be better.;-) Just cause I can't stand the thought of her being w anyone bu edward. can't wait for more..
Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
Another great one! Cannot wait until the next one! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
Glad he's decided to fight for her. Though I hope she doesn't make it too easy on him. It might help their relationship if he got over his control-freak tendencies a little and treated her as an adult with opinions.
Thanks for writing! Your story is wonderful. You're doing a great job on Edward's POV.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5
Another great chapter! Is Bella trying to prevent him from chasing Victoria or whoever? IS there a fiance? An uncontactable fiance? No cell phone- or is he running? You've got me pondering......
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hooray, Bella's awake! Was that touch their first physical contact? Did she just need time and an adrenaline rush to recover?
She's being very mysterious. Hmm. Is the fiancee just a defensive tactic? It would be understandable. Will she explain what/who attacked her? Will we (hopefully) see more of Alice?
Can't wait to read on....
Hope this isn't a duplicate - I hit something and my review disappeared. Grrrr. Sorry.
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad Charlotte is around and hopeful. Edward needs that. His tile counting made me smile. Been there, done that.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
YEAH!!!! Hes gonna fight for her Hells Yes!
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh my goodness. Very compelling chapter. Well written, with believable characters. Nice job!
Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. Fascinating beginning. I'm pleased someone decided Esme might enjoy college - for whatever reason.
Poor Edward. Glad he's thinking of his family and not doing anything rash.
Must keep reading now - you've got me hooked....
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
I just found this fic, I'm so curious about everything. Who the mystery fiance is (why do I keep thinking Jacob?), the reason for her injuries, etc. It's driving me a little crazy wondering why the mystery fiance hasn't shown up though. And does she have a ring? There's been no mention of any rings, although if she had been admitted with those injuries I'm guessing they would have removed all jewelry and stored them.
So NOW Edward is going to fight for her??? Stupid vampire. *eyeroll*
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 6
I cannot wait to see what happens next!! Loved it
Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oooh wonder who Bella's mystery fiance is. This story is going so well and I love the little bit of mystery you've added.
Thanks for the quick update.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
i love it. things gt more and more interesting with every chapter.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story it's so sad. I can not wait for an update!
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great story... looking forwrad to the rest.
~Sapphire
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great story... looking forwrad to the rest.
~Sapphire
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
The suspense over Bella's fiancee is killing me! Please post more asap!
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
Magnificent!!! So compelling. I love that you aren't handing us anything easily...I am kind of guessing that Jacob & Victoria are the secrets she is not willing to part with...but I am thinking she might be lying about the fiance part...very intriguing. I am so glad I found your story...I added it to my favorites so I won't miss a thing!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
OoOoh Can't wait for more of the story!
Reviewer: rockstarvampire (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay for twi_ction joining twilighted! I love your stories.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
No.
DENIAL about Bella's fiance. NO. I refuse to accept she has a fiance.
Honestly, I think that Edward deserved the kick in the pants, but I am glad he's going to fight for her. It's about damn time. They belong together...but I wonder if the Edward in your story has what it takes to fight and do what's necessary. He always used to make decisions for her. He used to treat her like a child...and she's his equal.
Can't wait for your next chapter.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
damn the nurse! and edward. why does he have to keep lying?! oh yeah, the fiance...
i really cant wait to find out what has happened to bella. and i hope edward will tell ehr the truth eventually.
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great Chapter
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
Aww, i think i get what happened to her, but she should tell someone, well maybe like Carlisle, not Edward he would go crazy, hehe LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for an update!
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