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Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
so I guess the next question is where is Jacob???
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
Have I told you lately that I love your story? Because I absolutely do! I'm torn between thinking Bella's fiance is a werewolf (specifically Jacob) or another vampire (cause she's going to Alaska and if she was with Jacob she wouldn't have to go there) or non-existent as I really wish! Edward, oh Edward! I'm actually hoping that Rose is going to wait for him to leave and take it upon herself to tell Bella that Edward loves her! I know none of the rest of the family will do that, but Rosalie never really cares too awful much about making Edward mad. I loved seeing Emmett stand up to Rose; too often he justs seems like her trained dog or something and it's nice to see Emmett hold his own and take up for his little sister! It was kind of weird hearing Esme trying to be "cool" with Bella, lol, and of course Alice's shopping addiction is always a nice little side note! Loved it!
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
Incredible. Wow, I have been sucked into this story from the first chapter, and now I'm sitting here anxious for more! Awesome story, looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Aww, this is so cute, and so sad!
Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
Very nice chapter... I did have a nice laugh when Edward and Alice had there talk!!! Now I am very happy that Edward at least told her his feelings! So with that I have my helmet ready for him to be stupid!!!!
Reviewer: anonymous (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh my mother fucking god. That was epic.
You did a very good job with Edward's confession. I liked Bella's reaction; it was very in character.
This is an amazing story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: starangel143 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
Another fantastic chapter...can't wait to read more! Thanks again!
Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
omg, that was great again! So where do we go from here, lol! Cannot wait until the next update!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
this just keeps getting more and more agnst filled.
part of me wants a resolution soon, but part of me wants this to go on for a while because it is such a good read.
post soon~amy
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
good stuff :)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 10
Because you're an idiot Edward, that's how you could have left her. Love the chapter!
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ohhh good stuff! I cant wait for more!
I hope we find out what Bella was doing in Denali soon! And where the heck IS Jacob?
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10
Yay!- they love each other. The story is great so far- can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
You're making me feel real sorry for Edward. I hope his "distress" continues. He deserves it for putting Bella through the heck he did. I saw let him stew in his own juices.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 10
HOLY. LORD. My mouth is still hanging open over here! This is becoming more and more hypnotic with each passing line and each devastating blow. I love it. Please post more asap! I truly love it.
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh Hell yes finally !!!! Maybe now he can stop lying to everyone including him self and they will have a chance to be happy.
Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
Well as you can see from the reviews below you have gotten a raise outta everyone!!! I have to say that I love Rose from throwing Edward under the bus!!!! That is sooo her! But I must say for Edward wanting to fight for her he is not doing a very good job! So what got my attention is the fact that Edward does not remember Jacob (or more like can not put his figure on it)! O god please tell me Alice see what happens and does what everyone here wants to do!!! And hits him upside is head so hard that it might knock some sence into him! Or hell I'll take Rose throwing him under the bus again!!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: this all happened without the storyline of New Moon manifesting, so Jacob Black is not a very familiar name in Edward's mind quite yet. I mean, he knows who he is, but not to the point where he would assume that that's the only Jacob she could be referring to.
Don't worry, though. He'll find out soon enough, and then, dumbass Edward will strike again and tick everyone off. I'll make sure I have my helmet ready for when that chapter gets posted. ;)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hus8 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
That is exactly how Edward would react. He would be so focused on his own turmoil and trying to do what is right (according to his own mind) that he misses all the signs. Good job!!
Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
omg, that was just torture, lol! Why couldn't he have said those words where she could hear them? Great job and cannot wait until the next update!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is excellent.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 9
THEY KISSED!! THEY KISSED!! THEY KISSED!!
*sighs contentedly* thank you!
i wish edward has spoken sooner though. at least he kissed her back. for one moment i thought he was going to run or doing something equally as stupid... again.
thank you for the quick updates.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
Edward, you are an idiot...but that's why we love you I guess.
Reviewer: tjm (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
Yay! Bella's finally told the truth about how she feels. Now will Edward follow suite?
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 9
“Because emotions like that are only worth pursuing when they’re mutual!” She groaned, turning on her heel and disappearing down the stairs before I could react.
Man, after the way they kissed, it makes it pretty obvious!
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