Beautiful ending!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Gosh, you're also amazing at conclutions? Why must you always make me jealous. I just start writing something for validation and you have to show me up? No fair.

 

Oh well. Like I said this is a great conclusion and not like the usual happily ever afters, but it does the same thing. I really like it.

Author's Response:

awe, I'm sure I'm not showing you up. Thanks for all te reviews! I'm glad you liked it. <3

Wonderful and a very perfect ending... thank you sooo much

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks so much!

=O OMG!!! I think that was THE best thing I've read all day. 

Scrath that. 

ALL MONTH!! 

DAMN! 

That was INTENSE!! I'm really glad that Sam backed out-I'm even more glad that Seth did. Seth is beloved to me. It's weird to think that Jake getting Bella was the one thing he couldn't handle. It poisoned them both. Twisted what was destined to be a great friendship and made it an evil, sadistic relationship. 

My favorite line was "Let's go home." At the very end. I don't think anything else could have ended that chapter more perfectly. 

I'm so PUMPED for the next update!!!! I'm addicted =]!

Excellent job.  Great characterizations.  I really liked that this story was from Edward's POV. 

The whole story was intense.  I really liked the twist at the end, where Bella had to tell Edward she chose Jacob.  It was heart wrenching.

I'm glad Jake got what was coming to him!

And thanks for updating and finishing this story.  So many authors start a great story and never finish--or take so long between updates that I don't even remember what the story was about.

Thanks for the great fic!

Author's Response:

awwe, thanks so much!

I have never started a fic and left it unfinished aside from one that lacks an epilogue... Ridiculously enough, my fanfics have more priority than my novel right now.

Thanks for all the reviews, though! I really appreciate it. :D

wonderful story... i love it.  I am incredible sad that it is over now.. but i guess all good things must come to a close. Good job! =]

Author's Response:

thanks you!

I'm glad you liked it.

that was a beautiful story. I am so sad it is over. Thank you

Author's Response:

well thank you!

<3!

omg its really over. i cried so much towards the end. the ending was so beautiful. it would have been nice to have the wedding or her change in the story too but this ending was good too.

i want a sequel though. please? this story was so good. it cant end. :(

thank you for writing such an amazing story. cant wait to read other stories from you. i need a replacement for this story now that its over. hmm...

*going to check out collide*

Author's Response:

I've already written all of that stuff in other fics, though, so to add it onto this one would be like overkill for me.

All the rest of my stuff is posted at fanfiction.net though. fanfiction.net/~twiction

Collide hasn't been validated uet, though, I don't think... but it should be up soon!

:D Thanks for the reviews!

i loved the ending great story

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much!

OMG!
your writing is so amazing, when i was reading it it's like i was actually reading something that stephenie would've written. lmaoo well except for the swearing but it was all good. i could actually picture them swearing, especially emmet. This is really creative. you might wanna think about writing in the future :P

anyways can't wait til teh end! thanks for writing so well :)

I love it! Okay I did notice the review about your fanfic side... I had to... I LOVE IT! I enjoy the ending and everything. Now I'm going to go check out the other stories you have on there.

I just want you to know that this is a favorite and will stay as a favorite!!!

Nicely done!!!!

loved it really good :D cant wait for chapter 19

Post soon! Post soon! I really wanna read it! Love.