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Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good story so far.  Only minor spelling and grammar issues which don't have much impact (unless you're a nerd like me about them).

Reviewer: LovelyNette16 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

On principle, I usually will not read a story if there are any spelling or grammar mistakes in the introduction. I know this is common of most readers on here, so I usually warn authors. Your story is interesting, and I would like to see more, but you must fix the grammar mistake in the intro in order to gain more readers.

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