Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 12:09 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Adorable. I liked the Brady Bunch's song modified to fit the vampires lifestyle. Cute. I can just imagine the Cullen kids in all their different costumes singing and dancing to YMCA. Hiliarious. I was actually chuckling out loud. Especially when Edward was shaking it for the girls in his family (Bella), but also knowing all the other girls who already thought he was hot would think even more about him along the lewd way.
Reviewer: Disenchanted890 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:32 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Hahaha that was cute!
Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:47 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
i am roflmao
Reviewer: Lasharp15 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:51 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Very funny!!! Keep it going!
Reviewer: who knows (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:49 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Jasper sending out giddiness and excitement. Prepping everyone to agree, brilliant move Alice.
Edward turning around to shake it, yes please.
all too funny - emmett would like his outfit.
does Jasper taste like feathers too??? :P
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:54 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Wow, this was a funny one, you have to continue ! :D
I reallywould like to know more about this crazy family :DD (I mean in this fic)
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:40 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
*LOL* That was FUNNY! I cant wait till you post more :D
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:30 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
ABSOLUTLEY POSITIVELT HILARIOUS!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:57 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Yes, please! Need more! I love the Brady Bunch, adn this is such an awesome idea, along with the perfect number of people! Lol!
I love the song choice, too! YMCA by the Police! Perfect! Oh, I wish this were real and that I was there, I would love to hear Edward sing! :D
Wonderfully amazing! Keep the chapters rollin!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:55 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
i see a hulu line in there can you see it
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2009 11:44 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
This is hilarious and I can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: planethalia (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:19 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
I really would like to see more of this. This idea needs more fleshing out! Like how did the boys react when they learned theredad had met the vampire of his dreams? and are the parents trying to supress their childrens obvious attraction to one another? Wow, youre story has given me plot bunnies. Drop me a line if you want them1
Author's Response: I actually had the whole first chapter written and it was the wedding and the families reactions but ended up going in this direction. I will probably write it at some point. I've been suffering massive writers block with this story so any ideas would be helpful. Sorry it has taken so long to respond to this review, I"m slowly but surely making my way through them. Thank you so much and email me if you want to discuss further.
jword04@gmail.com
Jaime
Reviewer: Ayla (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 02:34 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Hilarious! I love it :D
Author's Response: Thank you, there will be more eventually but I am just having a hard time thinking of the next chapter at the moment.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: bedward4ever (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 04:48 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
hahahahahaha lmfa "we're the cullen bunch and thats how we roll" that was super funny double u h a t ever
Author's Response: Ha..thanks. Glad you enjoyed it and hopefully there will be more coming at some point.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 12:36 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Oooo! So funny! I was cracking up through the whole thing. Emmett flexing randomly...
Author's Response: Ha...I love Emmett.
Thank you for reviewing and I am glad that you enjoyed it. At some point in time there will be more. I have written and deleted chatper two on numerous occassions. Once it feels right it will be out there.
Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 07:06 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Hahahahahahaa, omg. so awesome. "because we're the Cullen Bunch and that's how we roll". as long as the other chapters are longer i will be happy, i'm looking forward for what you have in store for them. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. The next chapter will be longer if I can ever finish it. Having a bit of a problem with it at the moment.
Thank you again.
Reviewer: lauraluvsedward (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 01:40 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
jasper as an indian and emmet as the construction worker? haha. the summary of this alone made me laugh my ass off. hope to read more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I had that summary written for quite a while before I could manage to write the story. There will be more, obviously it hasn't been soon but at some point there will be more. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 12:55 AM · On: The One with The Talent Show
oh how much i laughed out loud. great job! [=
Author's Response: Great! Thanks, it was a lot of fun to write but suffering massive writers block for the remainder of this.
Thank you so much for reviewing
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:47 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Baha ... I'm embarrassed for them just reading this ... "Without warning giddiness and excitement filled the room and the talent show seemed like a spectacular idea" - hilarious!
Author's Response: Yes, leave it to Alice to figure out how to manipulate Jasper's gift.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: badgergirl1999 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:43 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
Jaime---this is great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Now having massive fail for rest of story but will attempt again soon.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:35 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
You wrote it! Yeah! Fun chapter. Edward, shakin' that ass--whoooooooo! And in leather, to boot.
Author's Response: Ha...yes finally wrote it and am now working to continue it. Thanks for the review, glda you enjoyed.
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:19 PM · On: The One with The Talent Show
wow! That was funny as hell!! Loved it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, the second chapter is proving much more difficult to write but it is in process so keep an eye out. Thank you again for the review.
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