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Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love it and i am like bella in this storyi walk out of class a lot and no one but my best chica likes meits cool to be left alone but stupid people but some people dont stopi have never got caught for punching some oneand i do it a loti am a fighting chica i come out on top of a fight alwaysyou need help witing your story talk to me an i can get you in side a mind of a person like me
but DONT fuck with me i do have a big attitude

Reviewer: Ross (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 2

I just love Bella! And the way she described that play, so very percise!

Please continue?


Reviewer: Peachsilk (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Very interesting! I look forward to reading more...

Reviewer: nightowl82 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 the darker side of bella and alice:) it's refreshing to see the roles reversed on edward and bella...and it's great to see angela in this chapter...hope she sticks around:) can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MidnightSunsLove (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this! Can't wait to see where you are taking this. :)

Reviewer: oh_the_webs_we_weave (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like it. Instead of the usual messed up Edward, we get to see a dark view on Bella and Alice

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

oh man.. those guys remind me of people at my school.  The way they were talking, just there? So real. We had a Bella and Alice at my school too, except there were 3 of them. Carina, Courtney and Ari. So funny, cause I'm imagining them instead of B and E.

Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

i read this over at  and i love it. i love your edward and bella.

Reviewer: Valla (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love, love, LOVE this story. I cannot wait to see where it is going. :D

Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is really good so far. I am very interested to see how the story progresses.

Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

you know  i love it.  i just do.

Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start. Can't wait to see where you take things. This is a Bella I haven't seen before.

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