Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Battle line
Sometimes he hasbeen smart but mostly lucky! I ma not sure where this is going but Iwill follow to the end.
Hugs - Xanath
Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 02:57 PM · On: Battle line
ACCCKKKK!!!!!
You now have me on pins and needles on two stories.
I can't wait for the next updates.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 02:46 PM · On: Battle line
First, I'm really glad Edward finally decided to share the letter with Bella and the rest of his family. Sure, there will be fall-out, but it may the saving of him. I'm not liking where thi9s is headed, because the Ancient One is trying to destroy Edward and all he loves. That is totally unacceptable, and I wish you would find a way to allow Edward, Bella and their families, to destroy her instead! There is enough evil in this world, I don't need to see it triumph over good any more than "normal"! Just sayin'!
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Battle line
Content1 you are the best. I love all your stories. And the fact that during the summer you still manage to update all of them regularaly is amazing.
Getting back to the story...Bella is going to kill him and rightly so. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: BellaEd (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 09:44 AM · On: Battle line
Finallly - this is what I was waiting for !! I always thought Edward had learned the dire consequences of being secretive with Bella, and I understood your need to stretch the story, but it was reaching breaking point for me. So bless you for relieving my suffering :-)
I'm still trying to figure out who the "Mistress" is though.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Battle line
I think Edward will be alright. Looks like memories of Aro are actually helping him realize he can't do this on his own. You really bring forth the ancient evil of the Mistress in her POV.
Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Battle line
the only thing i don't like about reading your updates on this story is the time in between each one
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Battle line
I have been dreading this for so long. Now we are here. Please don't take long to update. You have been building and building.. This is so hard because He has now thrown Bella away. Deceit. Trust.
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 03:42 AM · On: Strategy
I a really starting to get nervous. I have a feeling that someone I care about in this story is definitely going to die. I shake this feeling. I have really enjoyed reading this story so very much, but I am worried. Is Edward going to be doing the Mistress' bidding and leave his Bella? Will this Mistress cause such an upset in the Cullen's lives. Is she going to try to kill Carlisle? I could not bear it if anything happened to one of our heros. I guess I have to wait and find out. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 12:23 PM · On: Strategy
Wow.
I liked he recap at the begining, thought the list of characters (very breaking dawn) was a little long.
Edward/Jake/Ness/Bella handeled Will well. Never thought he might imprint on another-i hope that doesn't happen.
The Mistress is worse than I thought, and I hope she's gone soon.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Strategy
I can't tell you how happy I was to see you had udated again. I loved the insight into the Mistress. Also glad she is not going after Charlie. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 08:00 PM · On: Strategy
This is one dangerous, evil, nasty tempered old vampire! She must be older than dirt and the years have not mellowed her a bit. She really has issues! Edward better not put himself in her power, it won't go the way he thinks it will. Now that William has imprinted/mated-bonded with Victoria, I hope they can keep her and Saralyn safe. A deadly dance is developing here!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 07:36 PM · On: Strategy
I figured the Mistress would continue to seek Victoria and her mother. I wish Edward would come clean with Bella. Good transition chapter.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Strategy
I know I keep saying this but this story is soooo freaking good! I can't wait to see what happens next. I noticed in the above notes that little Victoria is listed as *vampire possess a quantifiable supernatural talent I wonder how that happens? I seriously loved "Harvest Moon" and now "Full Moon Rising"
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Strategy
So from your rundown on the story, I am guessing that the vampire that turned Carlisle and died was the old one's mate. That would explain so much of her hate for all of them.
Xanath
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 02:57 AM · On: Strategy
That was great cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 05:37 AM · On: Generations
Holly shit a lot happned.
I undersetedmated Edward, I thought he was getting rid of Jazz to do soemthing stupid and he wasn't.
OMG William found his mate and it's Jasper's great-great-great? ganddaughter. OMG.
Fabulous ch.
Hope "Mistress" if stopped soon.
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 03:58 AM · On: Generations
OMG is all I can say...Jasper has a some sort of great great, great grandchild?????? Whenever I read this story, I truly fee as though they are a strong united family. I will always be excited when I see an update in my in box. THANKS FOR THE MOST AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 11:07 PM · On: Generations
How is she shielding herself from Edward and the wolves? There are a lot of unanswered questions about her I hope to find out sometime in this story. I sincerely hope you don't have Victoria and SaraLynn murdered, especially now William has imprinted on her. Thank heavens she wasn't able to murder Michelle and her unborn child!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Warm Water
Edward did his level best to recreate their wedding night and honeymoon. With a few side trips to vampire-love, he did a magnificent job! Lord, how he does love his woman!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 10:11 PM · On: Richness
Lots of stuff in this one both good and bad. It was genius of Bella to encourage Edward to search out good memories, from Aro. For him to find Renee's memories of Bella was so sweet. It was fun to meet up with the wolves again, right up until Edward found that damn envelope in their room! I guess she can go anywhere without detection! How the hell do they guard against that? Right off the bat, Edward starts thinking of sacrificing himself for the good of the family. Makes me wantto get Rose to swat the back of his head, to remind him it's not the right way to go!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Major
Jasper is just going to keep sorting and sifting until he can find the right way to fight the ancient one. This gathering of everyone's impressions of everyone else is a great idea. There will be so much information when they finish, it should take even vampires a while to collate it all. Anything to get a handle on how to combat this evil that threatens them all.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:55 AM · On: Intimacy
What a wonderful vacation, and all the family together. Sounds like heaven , chhildren and all. The sad memories of Ellie were helpful to their knowledge of their enemy. The spirit walking was pretty neat, too!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Faith
All I have to say, is Merry Christmas Bella and Edward!!! After the horror in his mind, to come back to this beautiful evening was the most magnificent of gifts! They are all truly blessed, not least by their own goodness, and they are all good!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 02:53 AM · On: Mastery
That was amazing, and a scary ride all at the same time! Edward surely must realize how lucky he is to have all the help, on earth and in the spirit world as well. Especially Stefanie and William, he might not have made it back without them!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws. Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|