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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 01:45 PM · On: Enoch
I can't wait for more! I can't even describe in words how good this story is!
Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 01:15 PM · On: Translated
Holy crap! Can this story get any better?!?! Soooooo interesting, sooooo good!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 12:49 PM · On: Watcher
I'm so curious...who is "the watcher"? I'm thinking it an archangel...but which one? I'm guessing Gabriel....
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 09:39 PM · On: Enoch
I feel like I am getting a history lesson hidden in this story and I love it! The fanily you have created is just great an I really llike where you have taken the origionsl stories andcontinued then is such an interesting way. I usually have a hard time waiting for what happens next. It all seems so real like they are all my friends and I want to keep up with how they are doing! Thanks - Xanath
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 05:08 PM · On: Enoch
I have to keep telling myself not to get too excited when Edward has these little blips of memory, because he still has it in his mind that he must destroy the Cullens! I'm encouraged, however, by the promise Enoch has made to help bring Edward back to them. If he says it , it will happen I have no doubt! Wonder what he's about to share with Jasper, that Alice has seen? See you next time, can't wait!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 05:08 PM · On: Enoch
I have to keep telling myself not to get too excited when Edward has these little blips of memory, because he still has it in his mind that he must destroy the Cullens! I'm encouraged, however, by the promise Enoch has made to help bring Edward back to them. If he says it , it will happen I have no doubt! Wonder what he's about to share with Jasper, that Alice has seen? See you next time, can't wait!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 05:02 PM · On: Enoch
I have to keep telling myself not to get too excited when Edward has these little blips of memory, because he still has it in his mind that he must destroy the Cullens! I'm encouraged, however, by the promise Enoch has made to help bring Edward back to them. If he says it , it will happen I have no doubt! Wonder what he's about to share with Jasper, that Alice has seen? See you next time, can't wait!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2013 01:20 AM · On: Translated
Wow, that was really neat how you tied the chapter into the bible verses.
Reviewer: A New Dawn (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 09:36 PM · On: First
I am speechless. Excellent use of resources and jewish/christian themes.
Reviewer: Nicjazz (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 01:28 PM · On: Translated
Please Post soon!!!!!!! Im checking in every day in hope of a new chapter.
:)))
Reviewer: LivingwithEdward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 06:06 PM · On: Full Moon Rising
This is absoutely genius! I would have told you sooner, but I read on my phone now and I can't review from there. But this last chapter had me signing on the computer just so I could leave a review. When it was disclosed that the Mistress was Lilith I was floored. I thought that was such a creative use of controversial biblical history. So good. Then when I read the name Enoch, I thought it was perfect because the Bible saying that he was translated and never faced death. What a creative interpritation of that and it's so perfect for Twi fic. I absolutley love what you're doing with this. You are a very talented writer and I sincerely hope that you have some original fiction that you can publish, because it would certainly deserve publication.
I also wanted to say that in the beginning of this story I left a review saying that I was so glad that you were working on a sequel to Harvest Moon, and you had said that it would not be as long as the first story. I just want to mention that we're almost up to chapter 60 here. ;) Not complaing; just an observation. I'm very happy it's gone on this long. Thank you for sharing your art.
Reviewer: ramblynrose (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:15 PM · On: Translated
This is going great. I love the story; and can not wait for the next few chapters!
Best always,
Ramblynrose
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 08:37 PM · On: Translated
Those goosebumps are back again! They started when he entered the castle and Bella's burden was lightened and he touched Carlisle, calling him beloved son. When he announced his name was Enoch, I knew help as well as hope has come to Volterra! It sure erased some of the sorrow from reading Bella's thoughts about Edward and how very much she loves and misses him.
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 07:10 PM · On: Translated
Thank You for a great chapter. So well described that I saw it in my minds wyw as I reat it. Very moving. Thanks again - Xanath
Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Translated
OH.MY.GOD.
You have me on the edge of my seat. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 02:17 PM · On: Translated
So the mystery vampire is Enoch. That would explain everyone's reactions
Reviewer: Nicjazz (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 01:59 PM · On: Translated
OMG!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!! This story is so good, and it gets better and better by each chapter. Aaarrghhh...having to wait until next week for the next chapter is killing me!!!
Post soon!!!
Reviewer: Avacharenma (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 10:09 PM · On: Watcher
I am so excited about this! It is Wonderful! I really Love the way you have had Edward and Carlise find basically their Faith. Thank you and I can't wait for more chapters
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 06:12 PM · On: Watcher
I am so glad the Cullens have a very mighty good guy on their side now. I love the trip to the Vatican.
Reviewer: Lethaltxhunny (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2013 09:56 PM · On: Watcher
really enjoy reading your story.. can't wait til the update is up. This story is really one of my favorties. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: BellaEd (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Watcher
Just when I think it can't get any better, you astound me! Can't wait until the next chapter....
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Watcher
How appropriate to have read this chapter on Sunday! The Vatican, angels, the holy vampire who knows how to defeat Lilith! It all fits seamlessly! I don't mind telling you, I had goosebumps, reading about the meeting in the catacombs, and the wonderful library. I've been hoping so hard there would be a way to recover Edward and restore him to Bella and his family! Thank you again for such a gripping, entertaining, great story!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2013 10:04 AM · On: Watcher
I have not studdied religion very much. So the story is actually becomming like a religion course, and I am greatful for all of the information you are imparting. I do realize that some of it is story but I also relihat you have done a lot of research to weave some truth into the story. I love how things are progressing faster now and how you have built up the "family" with so many new people. I call them people as they have taken on life to me and I just want to keep finding out what is going to happen next. Thanks for you hard work on both stories - Xanath
Reviewer: ramblynrose (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2013 05:07 PM · On: Fall
I can't wait for the next few chapters. Love this story been reading it for ages. Send some soon.
Bless You,
Ramblynrose
Reviewer: Avacharenma (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Fall
I Love this Story! I Really Love your take on what would happen after Breaking Dawn In Harvest Moon, and I am So Happy you are doing this second book. Is it really wrong of me to wanna log on and find it finished just so I can read it all now? Sorry I know writing takes time, I just really want to see where this is going. Thanks again and I can't wait for your next update :-)
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