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Reviews For Foul Territory
Reviewer: Hyla (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very good story looking forward to date number 2 ;)

Reviewer: Rat_girl610 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just wonering if you ever plan on update???  haha i miss this story.  UPDATE ASAP!!!

Reviewer: Rat_girl610 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

do you realize that you havent updated in over 5 months???!!!!!  UPDATE!!!!!!  lol

Reviewer: nyxfox (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

i really love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! I don't mean to push, but baseball season is getting ready to start up again . . . . perfect time to update, no? I think Edward is just perfect, and I'm excited to see where you go with everyone else . . . so if you get a moment . .  please!

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 5

 I'm really liking your story. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: beckz111 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

love it
great first date
lets hope the second 1 is even better
cant wait for your next chapter x

Reviewer: buggybell13 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 5

write more!!!!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great first date. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: ewannaC (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

I cannot be without commenting anymore: Jake the cairn terrier :) Just priceless...

Do enjoy reading this story otherwise too. Hope you keep udating and let both Bella and Edward off the hook so to speak :)

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

I think that it was a perfect 1st date for them!!! I can't wait to read date 2.


Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

i'm really glad i stubled upon this story! it's sweet. and baseballward is HOT! :)

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

really really liking your take, never ever thought of Edward or Rpatz as a professional athlete but i like your vision
curious to see where you have this headed, do we get to see Emmett? please please let him have an appearance
until next week

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

I adore this story. Great job!

Reviewer: Alice Jasper 4ever (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

I think I am in love with this story and tis Edward. Lol. The first date was great. I can't wait until the next update and date 2.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

It's safe to say she was a tad bit overwhelmed by the situation, right? But it was so cute. Can't wait for the second date!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well, one thing is certain, she had him smiling chuckling or outright laughing all night, so I'd say he had a good time! As for Bella, way to go on making a move with that kiss!

Reviewer: Voyanisen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was so sweet, and really beautiful.


Thoroughly enjoying this story!


Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love this story. Really good!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

Loved the date! Can't wait for dinner at Bella's place!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

great first date.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

good job as always

Reviewer: cjcullen78 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

Awwww...this story is so cute. I added it to my favorites already. And the Giants are my favorite team so win/win I say! Lol. I was just in SF a couple months ago too. That stadium is gorgeous! But then so is SF.

So I wonder what's next for E&B.....guess I'll just have to keep reading. Keep the updates coming. Love it!


Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 5


Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Love the connection they share.

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

love it!!!

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