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Reviewer: tammgrogan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Epilogue
Very good ending, thank you so much for a great story.
Author's Response: Your welcome. And thank you for such lovely reviews!
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Epilogue
loved your little story - HEA - no one died love that in fan fiction. All the different points of view.
I think you missed something by not covering Carlisle's trip to V' - keep the family feel of the piece. It would have added more texture - Caius and Altheodora POVs would have been interesting.
Author's Response: I know I chickened out on someone dying. Then again, so did Stephenie Meyer in the books.
And I know that there are things that I could/should have covered, like Carlisle in Volterra, but they simply didn't fit with the flow of the story. Caius & Athenodora would have been too far removed from the bond.
Glad you loved my little story, though.
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Homecoming
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Homecoming
Loved the chapter, I'm happy to see everyone home safe and sound. A story about Demitri sounds good will it be a sequel to this story?
Think about it, update soon! Dixie
Author's Response: I have been thinking about it! It's in the very earliest of stages but it is possible. I always say that about my stories and I haven't written a sequel yet, so I'm not holding my breath! lol. But, if you have any ideas, I'm totally open to suggestions.
Hope you like the epilogue! Nicole
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Bargains and Plans
Demetri's a hybrid? Why wouldn't they have noticed his heart beat? Very interesting development!
Take care and update soon! Dixie
Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Bargains and Plans
Demitri is an interesting twist. Almost all back together again but this surely isn't the end? Great chapter.
Reviewer: lpeaz814 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Bargains and Plans
another great chapter...can't wait to see what is happening with all of the characters next so please update asap thanks :)
Reviewer: bms9248 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Parent
I just found this story and read up to this part.....I really enjoy it! It is so different with everyone's point of view that you use. It is different from the other fics out there and that makes it all the better. It stays true to the characters and their actions! I love it!
Author's Response: Aw, your review totally made my day! Thank you! I hope you like the rest!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Parent
It's so nice to see Rose and Carlisle comming to an understanding. I'm glad Rose is realizing that her dad really does love her as a daughter even if she hasn't always been nice. I'm glad Bella and Esme are ok. I wonder what Caus will think when he get to Volturi and is met by everyone!
Another excellent chapter, I can't wait for more. Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: I've always thought Rose and Carlisle needed to come to an understanding. I'm glad you liked it. And I really hope you like the rest!
Reviewer: Amicia (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Parent
Aw! I LOVED Rosalies POV! You are very good at the different POV's. Some authors write them the same, but you are very good about writing them from the different people and getting their thoughts, attitudes and emotions in. Thank you, keep them coming! Love the story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely compliment! I'm so glad that love the story!
Reviewer: HGriffin (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Parent
Ugh I am so excited...this is a wonderful story
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Parent
I am in love with this story. It's addictive! I seriously am on the edge of my seat wondering if everyone is going to be OK. PLEASE update this SOON!! It's fantastic :) :) You definitely have a new fan :)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm super thrilled that I've got a new fan in you! And addictive is just what I want to hear about my stories. I'll submit the next chapter later today or tomorrow. Thanks so much again!
Reviewer: HGriffin (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
A-flippin-mazing....I love your shifting point of views! Especially with the characters not so much in the forfront of the original story. But I am painfully curious who was burned in the fire at the Cullens. Oh and I love how Charlie knows everything!!! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I'm so glad that you love the shifting points of view with some more minor characters.
And, since all the Cullens are accounted for, I'm not spoiling anything when I admit that I kinda, sorta dropped the fire thing. I chickened out, really. So, for the sake of explanation, it was just Jasper's cuff that got ripped off during the fight and ended up in the fire. And, of course, there were some soldiers that kidnappers brought for the fight that burned.
I hope that's not too terribly disappointing and turns you off the story. I really hope not!
Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
So, it's great by the way! It does need more of nessie and jacob in it tho! I mean really!
Oh and props on the story line and plot! You really put detail an effort into it! I love that the most! I hardly ever rate a 9 and have only ever given a 10 once!
Thank You
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm tickled by your rating and hope the rest of the story lives up to it...even if there isn't a whole lot of nessie and jacob. Sorry!
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
i love the moment between Edward and Charlie!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
I love that Jake is indebted to Rose, too funny! I'm really glad Ness is getting to be with Charlie and know him, and now gets to have him in her life! So Bella and Esme are left, now what. will everyone meet up in Eroupe to make the rescue?
I'm really enjoying your story, thank you for sharing!
Dixie
Author's Response: You're too smart!
You're welcome for sharing! And thank you for reviewing!
Nicole
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
great chapter. i wonder what jane would mean by saying" someone like bella". bella is supposidly a very attractive and powerful immortal. so, what the hell. anyway, i wonder what cauis has planned. i wonder who's pov will be next.
Author's Response: In my mind, Jane was, simply put...jealous. Sort of like Rosalie told Bella she was in Eclipse, just in a much more violent manner. She wanted to be the center of the someone that she saw as an equal's universe. In my mind, the mind that created the story, she isn't jealous of Bella's looks or power...she has her own power which she much prefers, but she is jealous that she can't have the pretty toy that she wants. So she basically threw a rather violent and dramatic tantrum. Does that make any sense at all?
Oh well.
Esme and Rosalie are the next POVs.
Reviewer: TwiMom4Claire (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
Aww, Charlie and Edward bonding. Little by little re-grouping, looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: tammgrogan (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Accepting the Inevitable
That was soooo sweet, and nessie, you just want to hug her..
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Strategy
wow! another exciting chapter!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Strategy
OMG! What a sight Rose saving Jakes life by sucking the venom out! If it wasn't such a direr situation I would be laughing.......really........Rose? You have a wicked side to you that I like! lol
Ok thank God Edward and Rose are safe, I'm just assuming Jake will be ok, I can't imagine you killing him off. So everyone is acounted for, the only two left are Bella and Esme.
I love all the diff. POV's, Each person has a diff. way of telling the story and I'm really enjoying that! Keep up the good work!
Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: I had to pick Rose. Some of the best parts in Breaking Dawn were the Rose/Jake interactions, in my opinion. The way that they worked together, sort of, over Nessie...I just had to do it!
Killing off Jake?...you'll see very soon...but I will say that I'm generally a chicken when it comes to death fics.
Thanks for the encouragement on the different POVs! My goal was to never repeat a POV and try to do a different voice (in characater, of course) for each one. I'm glad it's succeeding.
Thanks, Nicole
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Strategy
So exciting! And the writing and story quality are fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of the reviews! I'm thrilled that you like the story & my writing so much!
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Shared Insistence
You are so good! The suspense and details are excellent and you handle the alternate POVs well.
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Strategy
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Strategy
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