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Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Let me guess... Esme just walked through the door. Or Carlisle, but I think Esme would be more pissed at the destruction of the banister.

How livid will Emmett be when he discovers that it was Bella's idea?

Great story!

Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

oh my god this story is awesome like a comidy hope he finds out it was bella idea wonder wat carlisle will think and esme when they poen the door hahhah omj that was fugin hilarious

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

I'm so loving this story. It's pure fun and laugh into your fist type stuff!  Thanks for sharing it!  Keep writing...

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Haha!  Too bad he finally found out, but it'll be great when he finds out it was all Bella.  And who just walked in?  Esme?  Emmett seems scared of whoever it is.

Reviewer: foxyLady (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

OMG! that was a great chapter. this story is so funny. thanks for the updte i cant wait for another chapter. :) you rock

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Haha poor Emmett, I wonder how he will react when he finds out that it was Bella's plan. Please update soon!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Oh no!  Who's at the front door?  I bet it's Esme.  Her house is pretty destroyed.  Uh oh.  Emmett and Edward are in trouble! teehee

Wait until Emmett finds out this was Bella's plan!  This will teach him to underestimate her.  Go Bella!

I find I say that a lot while reading stories on this site. :p

Reviewer: mkd (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

i love this story its about time emmett got a taste of his own medicine lol

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

lol, hilarious! Love Emmetts POV :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Threats

I love Emmett. He's such a pain in the butt! :)  The score is Bella 2, Emmett 0!

Reviewer: carolinajoy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Very, very funny.  I've saved this as a favorite.

Reviewer: budgiec (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Totally hilarious chapter.  I especially loved Edward laughing at Emmett every time he thought about who was responsible for everthing. 

Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pheromones

I'm laughing so hard I can't even see to type through my tears. This is so outrageously funny! Especially Emmett's reaction to Jasper's reason for asking which wolf was in the truck. Brilliant!

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

haha omg i love this story it always makes me laugh i cant wait for the next chapter! xoxo Melissa

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Mom and dad are home

??????

LMAO!   Hes ready to blame everyone and assume Bella was just a simple pawn oh if he only knew who he was dealing with!!!  Muah hahahaha

Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

great story hillarious

Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Inspiration

You did good on the werewolf perspective. Although, the armpit thing was a little gross. LoL

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

/dies laughing

Dude! Carlisle and Esme!!

Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole

This is possibly the funniest thing I have ever read!  EVER!

Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole

Cute. I love Emmett's playfulness. :)

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Haha oh Bella, not the sneakiest one in that house is she? lol figures that she's the one who ruins her own plan! Emmett's pov was great, and I loved the fight between him and Edward. Hopefully Esme won't freak out too much over the destruction in her home (judging by Emmett's language edit at the end I'm guessing it's Esme either alone or with Carlisle coming in the door).

I can't wait to see everyone's reactions when the truth comes out!! Good chapter!

Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhho  please please please update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

AHAHAHA lol <3

Reviewer: Twinklefae (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

I love this story... it's just so freakin' funny!  I was thinking about it last night actually,and wondering if you were going to update!

Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

omygod! that was esme @ the front door, wasn't it?

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