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Reviewer: JCullen23 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

Laughed so hard I cryed!

Reviewer: Clair_Delune (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

Omg, this is the funniest thing I have read in such a long time. Im sitting here practically dying from laughter. Cannot wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

this is great - i want more - i love how they went all parental on them

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

i have never laughed so hard

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Conspiracy

omg tooooooo funny

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Inspiration

this is soo funny

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

Well, that POV was a positively delightful surprise! I love how they put on the parent "act" and then need to escape to break down! And the horror of their mistake! Loved it-can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Dave51481 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

This has got to be one of the most hilarious things I've ever read. I was laughing my ass off through almost the entire thing. You need to do more prank fanfics - maybe post-BD with Jake and Nessie involved.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

Very good.

Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

I loved this chapter... I was laughing so hard. I couldn't help it but it was so funny... oh man I got a good laugh.

Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

OMG!!! SO FREAKIN FNNT...DEF WANNNA SEE HOW THIS TURNS OUT

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

This was the most hilarious chapter yet. Great job!

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

I love when Emmett talks to Edward in his mind.....and my fav part is when he catches Bella in the shower and awaits Edwards arrival

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Rosalie's Return

The tomato juice was priceless!

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Conspiracy

lol I was wondering how Rosalie was going to come into play, considering Bella was so against it in the beginning

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Pheromones

Don't worry I don't feel bad for Emmett at all, and your banner makes alot more sense now "wolf wipes"

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Phase 1

hehe Emmett is the only who doesn't have a special gift to use really......except his strength......that stinks for him because all the others are surely using theirs to play this joke on him.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Plan

The whole way through I was like what is the plan what is the plan....now I am looking forward to seeing it executed.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Inspiration

Once you go pack, you don't go back, hahaha! Loved that line!

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Threats

hehe Score for Bella!

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole

Funny, I can't believe she told on Emmett!

Reviewer: neji (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Rosalie's Return

GREAT ONE!!! its awesome! Funny chapter~ Serve emmett right even though i kinda pity him~ hahas =p Rosalie sure is fierce >.>

-Neji

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted

So funny when Carlisle and Esme were expecting dead wolves and shaved wolves etc. ;D

That was a long long chapter, but it was worth the length.

I love how Carlisle is able to control them all and get them to all own up..

Can't believe Bella put wolf wipes in the shower head and the shampoo bottle, just brilliant!

Them both laughing at the end was great, I knew they wouldn't be able to NOT laugh!!

The last line is so funny ;D

Look forward to reading the rest of this :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Goddammit, I’m going to kill Jasper. That back-stabbing, disloyal bastard. I should’ve known. Sure, he’d fight for our family against outsiders. But inside the family, Jasper was well known to flip sides on a whim. His sense of humour was seriously warped. The only one he stayed loyal to was Alice. That rat-bastard. If I weren’t naked, I’d run out there and pound him into the lawn face first. Nudity wouldn’t usually stop me, but in Rose’s state, she might just seize the opportunity to remove my favourite piece of anatomy. What I needed was a vampire-proof cup.

Gahahah, poor Jasper, but I love him!

And I totally loved this chapter as well, I love reading Emmett's POV of things, it is always so funny.

I did think as soon as Emmett made that last minute change of plan that he would find out about Bella. Had to laugh at him pushing her in the shower, and then him wresting with Edward.

I bet thats Esme and Carlisle through the door, right? They go away for two days and they come on to this ;D

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Rosalie's Return

Then he smelled his hand. His eyes widened with horror as he realized the smell was back again.

Bless him, the only person he is scared of - Rosalie - and now she is going to be pissed!

“What the hell??” she yelled in outrage. “Werewolves? Why were werewolves using our furniture? Who let the dogs sit on the couch?”

The door banged open with a crash.

“They’d better not still be here! Somebody tell me what the hell happened!” she screeched. Her hands curled into tight fists.

I love ALL of that.

Rosalie is just brilliant, and the tomato juice sugestion is genius!! I'd just love to see him doing that ;D

I wonder what Bella's plan is...

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