Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Oh...this is gonna get good! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter to see how this plan executed! At least any trouble they get into will happen outside of the house! LOL!
Kat
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Lmao! I can't wait forthe next chapter! Your daughter is an excellent muse for you!!!! LOL Post again soon!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
THIS WAS GREAT = PLEASE - PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! GOD I LOVE EMMETT
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
they r so gunna get caught!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Hahaha!
Reviewer: aami_cullen (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Aw, damn it! I need more. Love me some Sibling Rivalry. Now I got to figure out how to get my printer working so I can print out a copy for me and my friend. Please write more!! Oh, and I'm guessing this doesn't have a end? Cause even when Bella would get turned there'd be even more hard-core pranking and rivalry. Just had a brainwave - the Cullen's during winter, snowball fights, ice-skating and more snow-coated goodness. Just an idea.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Jasper's a cheeky one! How often does he play both sides in a prank (or such) for his own amusement?
Well, this is certainly a somewhat more harmless prank. And at least the house won't be the target this time.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
I love this story! It's refreshing to see Edward getting manipulated with what others are thinking instead of him using their thoughts to manipulate them. Great chapter. : )
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Your daughter is one smart cookie ... Emmett is gonna make this interesting again!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
I love this. Very entertaining to read. Please continue soon
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Yay! So great to read another chapter of this story as it is a story that has made me giggle and chuckle aloud. Please please please update again asap so more of the catapult plot can be revealed. I loved reading Jaspers POV too by the way, that boy has such a naughty and manipulating sense of humour!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Loved that this chapter was in Jasper's POV. I can't believe the trouble these three get into when bored. The school picnic is going to turn into a water balloon war.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Your daughter is a freaking genius too, lol. Giving Emmett a catapult is a great idea. Well okay probably not, but its sure to be funny as heck. ;D
I loved the interplay of the three brothers here, teasing and trying to get on each others nerves, but in the end coming together for a greater cause, well at least coming together to prank some humans, lol.
I also loved it being in Jasper's pov since, of course, you know that I have such a soft spot for Jazz!
Emmett's pirate talk was hilarious, as was him watching Hannah Montana.
It was also pretty funny how the two of them played on Edward's jealously to pull him into their nefarious schemes.
I can't wait to see how this one plays out! Glad they have Alice's blessing (supposedly, lol).
I'm really thankful to your daughter for prompting this one! Can't wait to for more!
Reviewer: aemd28 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
I really liked the first part of this story and I thought it was over. So you can imagine my surprise and delight to see a post months later, I really can wait to see what trouble the three of them will get into.
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
oh most definitely enjoying it. I almost got up and danced when I saw a new addition to your story!!! (okay so maybe I did get up and dance!)
Will there be more?
Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
One word FUNNY.
Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole
totally funny looking forward to more
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Loved the chapter...can't wait to read the next chapter
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Oh I can't wait for the next act.
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Bring on the water balloons. Can't wait to read what they do.
Reviewer: Eris13 (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
This is so hilarious!!!!! I cannot wait to see where you're going to go with this. Oh yeah, I love your Emmett in this story, he's awesome!
Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
That was very, very funny! Glad to see a new chapter in this. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
You have a VERY imaginative daughter:) Thank you for continuing this story and sharing your gift for humour!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
omg i love it i cant wait for the next chapter this is going to be to funny lmao
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
omg...this is fabulous....i can't wait for the chaos to erupt!
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