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Reviewer: CrueltyConservesSadness (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
So, I'd found this story while it was in progress, and I know it's been a few years since it was finished, but I find myself always coming back to reread it--probably in half-year intervals. I just thought I'd take the time to let you know I really appreciate and love this story, and even if it doesn't get much action among the reading masses, I'll always be back to read it again. So thank you for writing and keeping this story posted.
-CCS
Author's Response: CCS - thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you keep rereading my story! It means a lot - I am trying to write "for real" now, and it's a difficult process, trying to find an agent, etc., so it really helps to know my writing is valued by at least someone out there in the world. So glad you enjoyed it, so glad you let me know. Take care and have a great day/night/whatever wherever you are. jnlar19
Reviewer: TwiSentinel (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 13
That writing was beyond excellent! Please tell me you have become a professional writer by now....
The plot and the storyline draws you in and leaves you confused and hanging, desperate to figure it out and find out what happens next. Your descriptiveness made me turn up my air conditioner without you having to resort to smutty details (which I find detracts from a good read). Like I said, brilliant writing!!
I'm not a kid, I am middle-aged and have read thousands of books...reading is my passion....I have a large and varied comparison basis for my opinions.
You need to go professional. You are a fantastic writer. Period/Exclamation Mark.
Author's Response: I hadn't been back to visit this site in awhile and was really happy to see this new review from you - thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and found the writing to be high quality. I am trying very hard at the moment to get an agent and then get published. I have two other completed, original works that I'm shopping around but haven't had any luck so far. It's a tough business! Thus the reason it's so nice to get such wonderful, warm encouragement through the ether. You're helping me to keep at it another day, week, month, etc. Best of luck to you in whatever you are doing in your life - thanks for taking the time to make my day. Cheers from jlnar19
Reviewer: NeverEndingStoryCS (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Right so call me crazy, tell me I'm overthinking it but right now I see signs of twins... maybe.
At the start it's said Belle moved with her family, not just her dad which inticates more family. The attraction only happens when he see's her away from baby Alice, babysitter Belle/Bella doesn't really show actual interest in particular art Picasso. And the stamping foot scene Belle says she's always been the favourite, in favour to who?
At first when she talked about the broken glass and the screaming on the night the parents broke up and how when she got the phone it was the dial tone I honestly got this thought that maybe her mother never even called and that Charlie killed her. Then I was like maybe Belle hurt baby Alice and because Bella looks like Belle she would get hounded for it and everytime Edward looked at Bella he would see Belle and be reminded of what she did.
Love your story. And sorry for my crazy ideas
Author's Response: I love your ideas! And if you read on, maybe you won't think you're so crazy anymore. I'd love to know your reaction if you did....and thanks SO MUCH for this review. So nice to know that my little story is still being read and enjoyed from time to time. I especially enjoy a review where the reader shares their thought process, what he/she's thinking when going along. I hope you enjoyed the end, and take care!
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 13
I loved this story! I loved being in the dark for a good portion of the story. So many authors spill their whole plot in the first couple of chapters and then you kind of know where the story is headed. I loved not knowing what the big secret was and that there was more than one, was astounding! Thank you for writing this. I hope you write more stories in the future. You have a gift!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for this review! I haven't been active on the site lately, so I'm sorry for being slow to say thanks. I LOVE REVIEWS, particularly ones like yours. So glad you enjoyed the story! As for writing more, I am working on other stuff now for the real world now, but I may be back. The world of ff is so tempting. Take care!
Reviewer: displacement (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
just reread this story - it's interesting on the second read, knowing how everything is going to go down. so tragic, and just as suspenseful the second time around. i really hope to see more of your work! thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving me this review. It was extremely gratifying to hear that you read my story a second time and enjoyed it just as much. It's food for my little writer's mill - keeps me going. I have written one chapter of another B/E story, but I put it on hold until I finish an orig YA story I'm trying to do - it's tempting to go back to it, though, and reviews like yours are the reason. All the best to you, and I will try to get back to it soon.
Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
You, my friend, are a bloody good writer. Well done, pat yourself on the back.
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow. That was....
Author's Response: Hi there, lovely new reader....I appreciate you climbing on board and caring enough to leave me so many reviews. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and let me know what you think (although I take it chapter 10 was so intense you needed a break which I can understand.) Best to you, and thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts.
Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 5
Belle killed Alice! on accident? not on accident?
And everybody thinks Bella is Belle and thar's why she changes her appearance?
Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
They're twins, right?
They have to be!
I've been thnking this since the whole -she changed her clothes, only gone for a second, felt nothing for her in my house- fiasco.
Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intense first chapter!
Reviewer: displacement (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
i read this about 2 months ago, and i have to tell you that i can't stop thinking about it. it is so incredibly well written, you walk a fine line between confusing the hell out of your reader and keeping it suspenseful. it's sexy and tragic and beautiful.
Author's Response: Love this review - thanks so much. I like a sexy story, but I want it to have meat to it, if you know what I mean - not just be sexy for the sake of sex - I still want a good plot, and that's what I tried to do here. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and really appreciate you taking the time to let me know. A very nice compliment, too, that you keep thinking about it. Cheers to you wherever you are!
Reviewer: lovestoread19 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 13
wow loved this story I cried when i found out exactly what happened to Alice. you are a really good writer and you displayed the emotion well with out being tacky considering the way she dies.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this great feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and cared enough to let me know. It was hard writing the Alice scene - it needed to happen, but I didn't want it to be too much - I didn't want it to be shocking for shocking's sake, I mean, and not for the purpose's of the plot - glad it worked for you! Take care!
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
Okay, first, you can never take HEAs too far. Second, thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I haven't been this absorbed in a fic in a long time. Thirdly and finally, I need a shower. A nice and cold one. Goodbye. *waves and runs away*
Author's Response: You are so wonderful, LittleMissAbigail! Thanks SO MUCH for your reviews - I can't tell you how rewarding (and helpful) it is to hear a reader's reaction as they move through the story you gave me a review for each chap! What a gift! I was also so gratified to know that someone was still reading this - I was afraid it was disappearing in the completed fanfic ether....
Hope your shower was helpful (wink to you!) Best of luck to you in life and all things. Cheers from jlnar19
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 12
Love. That is what I feel right now. I love you very much. Thank you, many times over, for turning Carlisle's character around. He is my favorite and he was my biggest problem with this story.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
Utterly and fantastically.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well, *deep breath* I was in desperate need of a cold shower mid-way through this chapter but you have cooled me off better than it ever could. That's really all I can say.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks for another warning. I like all of your little car references, by the way. It's cute.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
*breathes sigh of relief* Thank you! I was so confused with all this Belle-Bella crap. I was beginning to think she was a schizophrenic.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7
*holds head* So confused! *groans*
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
I think it's I who is in need of that cold shower now... Ay-yi-yi!
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, great. Thanks for the warning. poor Jake. I like him.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow-za. That was intense. To answer your question, I'm getting frustrated. Thanks for asking. *eyeroll*
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, I have got to find out what happened. And, this "Belle," "Bella," whatever, switching around is driving me crazy.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well, that was interesting.... I like it so far but, good grief, you drop the f-bomb like tomorrow ain't coming.
Author's Response: Hi - yes, I do have a bit of a dirty mouth in my fanfics - I think it's because I talk so sweetly in RL! Repression I guess. So glad you are enjoying the story though and continuing on despite my bad langauage.
Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hm. You weren't kidding. you do jump into your stories head first. Wow.
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