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Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my God, I just laughed so hard reading this! My husband (who is trying desperately to finish the murder mystery he is reading) had to leave the room because I am sooo lound. Seriously, I had tears streaming down my face.
The family dynamic in the story is hilarious. I love Esme and Emmett! The nickname of princess is just perfect too.
I can't wait to see what you have next. You are one funny, funny writer!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
THE HOT BITCH...I so loved him. I love cross-overs. Emmett is fucking hysterical. His retelling of the Rocky event is classic. Reminds me of McVampy's Twilight stream of consciousness. I tell you once more...This is the funniest story on Twilighted. You will be up there with the story telling gods and goddesses. I HEART THIS STORY SO HARD.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
LMAO...this chapter is hilarious.
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
I can't stop laughing. That was the funniest thing I've ever read here. First of all, the whole concept of a bellagasm is hysterical, and the viagra apple pie angle is too funny for words. Poor Edward. And I can't believe Rose decked him? Can you imagine if this was a movie? You are one silly girl! EPIC chapter!!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh dear god, poor Edward. *shakes head*
The fact that his brother and parents are so open about sex is probably why Edward has a complex... that and ballcrusher Rose LOL.
Reviewer: Ysar (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
Your Rosalie is awesome. Scary as hell, but awesome.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Love your story so much. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh god Edward. Omg omg omg. What the hell happened? Poor thing. I feel so bad for him. I don't know if I should laugh or feel sorry for him. I think I
I'm leaning towards the latter. He will never live this down. Poor thing.
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
What the hell? Who was on the phone? Rose or Alice?
Can't wait to read more. Poor Edward.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Poor Bella. I love the dynamics between Alice, Rose and Bella. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like your Edward. I like how you haven't gone for the cliche manwhore Edward. Hehe. Can't wait to read more. I hope Edward was right when he said Bella could be the one to help him fix his problems.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. I'm glad we know a little more about Edward and Bella and she's agreed to pretend to be his girlfriend. Hope it lasts longer than a month though.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just started this story (I know, where have I been? Living under a rock?) and I really really like it so far. Can't wait to read more. And I think I'd faint too if Edward asked me to be his girlfriend :)
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9
Haha, impatient Bella is funny, but the wired Edward is too much. So funny and really well done. great pacing...kudos!
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is seriously funny stuff. I haven't read anything even remotely like this take on Edward and it's hysterical. Great story.
Reviewer: dmarie17 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
LOL!! one of the funniest things I have read in a long time. Love it! If this story ends with some great smutty lovin, you will be one of my new favorite people!! MUAH!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
i love it.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 9
I loved the office scene. The begining was awesome and I wan t more EPOV to understand how things are moving along. Thanx and more plz!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
You are AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! TAKE ALL THE TIME YOU NEED TO GET CHAPTER 10 PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Both of them are gonna be blushing through the convo!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 9
LOLLL. Oh, Rose...she makes me laugh. And Edward's version of dirty talking was hilarious!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
TO DAMN FUNNY!!!!!!!! LOLW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
This chapter was one of the laugh-out-loud, funniest things I've read in a while, thanks! Along with the earlier scene in Edward's vet's office, great comedy!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 6
ok after that I would like bang my head repedidly on the desk...over and over and over again...MAN that sucks!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great to have the story and you back. Yes it takes you time to update, but your story is so good it's worth it. Bella's thinking process is hilarious and with Merlot helping out it turns even better.
Poor Edward, here Bella and us where thinking there possibly was no solution to him and it turned out that Rosalie just scared him into muteness. Way to go Rose!! She almost ruined Bella's night with her overprotectiveness. What will Bella say and do to her for this? That will be good.
About their little word game, it was good, how Edward began with simple inocent answers and then ended up with me after Bella said F..... Then the trip to the bathroom was good and lucky that they didn't find anyone on the way, well except for Bella's gracious fall into that strangers seat. Good thing Merlot can be blamed for that.
Edward's hot, sexy science talk, really was something sweet and lets say it again sexy.
What and where will dessert be served? I hope it comes soon, we waited for the main course a lot, lets hope dessert is coming up soon. :D
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