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Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOL Love it! Bella cracks me up with her crazy talk. And Edward's just too adorable. Can't wait to read the next one. (I'm off to do so now, in fact. YAY! LOL)
~Cat~
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hmmm, what an interesing idea. Having Edward having problems with touching women! Between his issues and her low self esteem, they surely must be made for each other. Seems like this will be a very good story, i'm enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: Matahari (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
OMG Esme's stunt was hilarious!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. And Esme putting holes in the condoms, that shit, although creepy,is hilarious.
Reviewer: DazzledMexicanMidget (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love yor writing style! :) And Edward internal dialoge is very funny.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
The condom story made me laugh until people LOOKED AT ME. I love this.
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
te he:] That's great!! I like the idea of Edward as a vet:] snd I hope that they will fall in love and all that good stuff:]
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
awww!! love it:]
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
he's moving? is it temporary??
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
What a month this promises to be! I'm excited to see the direction you take with this.
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this story. :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh WOW! This is such a great start to a story! I absolutely love it, and can not wait to read more of it! You've totally managed to hook me, and left me wanting more. Can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up, and then meets his family. LOL GREAT JOB! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
she fainted when he asked her out? poor bella, she really needs to remember to breathe!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Jesus Christ. I would faint too. No, scratch that. I would throw up first, cry like a little bitch and then faint.
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is too funny! Please update another chapter!
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my word that was funny! Edward and his hellmouth comment was precious. Tanya the plastic surgery queen was a hoot. And Bella saving the day was refreshing. I will have to keep an eye on this one.
Reviewer: kissinthesun (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
i've been reading a lot of new stories lately but this once is the most interesting one so far.
you are fucking hilarious, you got me cracking up within the first minute.
really nice job.
oh, and i also read Art Model.
yo, you are good.
Reviewer: mytwilightromance (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOL that's hilarious! I love Edward's inner monologues, especially the part about Death. Great stuff!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait to see how this plays out!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hellmouth? Snoopy Dance? I smell a Buffy fan! (I am too!) This is cute so far, I can't believe Bella fainted! Looking forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: addicted_2_twilight (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Edward dazzled Bella and she fainted hahaha I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm liking this so far. I'm anxious to see what Bella says..after she regains consciousness that is.
Reviewer: blissfulignorance (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
i can already tell that i'm going to like this story :)
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! My favorite line, "Thank you Jesus! I'll see you Sunday!" Loved it!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
So cute! I love it! I love how she's confidident and yet not so confident. Nice! Looking forward to more. Putting it in my favorites.
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