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Reviewer: crazyforedwardrn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST FREAKING THING I HAVE EVER READ!! THAT WAS PURE GENIUS, ESME IS A HOOT AND EVERYTHING GOING ON AT ONCE, YOU CAPTURED IT BRILLIANTLY!!! THIS IS ONE FOR THE RECORD BOOKS, COMPLETE WIN!!! i DON'T THINK I COULD LOVE AN EDWARD CHARACTER MORE THAN I DO NOW!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
That's hilarious! OMG! The whole thing with the finger being stuck was brilliant.
Reviewer: crazyforedwardrn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
what...no funny business....isn't it a little early to be deciding that?
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
OH, DAMN! That had to be SO embarrassing! I wonder what Bella will say. And that was hilarious--him getting his finger stuck in the desk. How the hell does someone do that anyways? I was laughing so hard when his mom was trying to help him. It all sounded so dirty...LOL. And I loved it when Emmett said, "It's called thinking with your dick, man!" So funny :-) I hope you can update soon!
Reviewer: crazyforedwardrn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was completely awesome... Way to start it off Edward...no messing around with that,kiss her ask her to be your grilfriend...YEAH!!! seriously though that was a hilarious chapter, your description of Tanya was freaky and his reaction was perfect! I so am going to go read the next 5 chapters! Great job Dolle!!
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
ROTHFL! that was hilarious! god i love this story!
Reviewer: Volexisayang (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!!! I was laughing so hard I had tears!!! Keep up the good work & please update soon.
Reviewer: swtypie8705 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow i am laughing so hard!!! thanx!! can't wait for it to continue!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow, this is too damn funny, and too damn good, i cannot believe he screamed that out loud! it made the chapter 100x better!
Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
omg. thats just....wow. perfect, ACE XD
Reviewer: Samantha Whitlock (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMC!!!! I nearly fell off the chair as I was reading this chapter. This was absolutely hilarious:D If I were Edward, I think I would permanently live in exile after what just happened from sheer humiliation alone. Thank you for writing this story and please keep the hilarity coming!
Reviewer: onlysugarcoated (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG! I love this story! I think it's ages ago that I laughed so much. Love your writing style! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: skaye5880 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh Lord!!! My stomach hurts I was laughing so hard at that ending!!!!!!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
effin' hilarious!
Reviewer: valeri29 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
This chapter was absolutely too funny! Please update soon, I want to see Bella's reaction to Edward's screaming he wants to have sex with her. I'm hoping these two can get together and help each other figure out how everything is supposed to work.
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was great! What an "effed" up family dynamic:)
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh My Gods! This was hysterical! I LOVE inappropriate Esme and Emmett s always great for comic relief. I just got the strangest looks because I was laughing so hard at the computer. I can't wait for more of this story.
Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
And I thought the last chapter was funny. I basically fell out of my seat with this chapter. OME! I was laughing so hard. I really like your awkward Edward and I love how everyone gives him such a hard time. I'm thinking Bella is going to be the one to come in and save him, not just in the next chapter but in the whole story. Can't wait for her POV!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
i was tearing up i was laughing so hard! Oh my god, that was funny.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
this is one of the best funny stories ever!
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMG that was hilarious! Esme is awesome. I can't wait for the next part, to see Bella's reaction.
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
I have never laughed so hard reading a story! You are really on to something here. Keep it up!
Reviewer: mytwilightromance (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Priceless. Absolutely priceless.
Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
i really really really love this chapter... and i love the way it's written. i would love to read the next chapter...sooooo....bring it on!!!!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was effing hilarious! Hahahahaa!
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