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Reviewer: dazey (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I sent one review already but i had a problem with my pc so if you recieve 2 reviews for this chapter from me sorry.
Now that being said I still think Edward needs a couple of black eyes! Bella needs to man up and act more like she did at the end of this chapter because honestly regardless of his issues with the age difference it still doesn't give him a right to cheat. He agreed to the marriage without knowing anything about her and part of being married is talking about your issues. if he had she would have at least felt cared about and he may have been able to deal better with is desires knowing she understood what he was feeling. Bella needs to call him out on all his shit and he needs to own up to it and stop making excuses like an entitled child.
Author's Response: They do still have a lot of talking to do and communication is key now, like it always should have been. Edward is trying. He made mistakes, but he can't take those back. All he can do is make up for them. Thanks for reading. I have a lot more in store for you.
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Loved this chapter! It was so good. I am hoping that Bella and Edward can work things out!
Author's Response: They are getting there, but still have a long way to go. At least now they are still on the same path. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Hmmmm emergency situations are eye openers, but the home wrecker is still in Bella's home! WHY would Esme allow that?! I don't care if she is like family....her daughter in law IS family. That hose beast would have been on her ass outside the door. He's still a baby douche. But I still love Bella.
Author's Response: Tanya had to stay or the next part doesn't work. Don't blame Esme yet. Tanya's just stubborn and determined and she has her own motivations.
Thank you!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Great turnaround. I was worried that Bella was going on a pathetic emo path of no return.
Author's Response: She will start finding herself more and putting more of herself into their relationship. Thank you!
Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
ok still kicking a dead horse i see... it's past time for her to put a little into her relationship as well as herself, both can be done together. I know I have done it!
as for her being young..young doesnt mean stupid, and she is being a bit stupid and childish.
Author's Response: She's hurt and confused, but this has put a lot of things into perspective for her. They should be able to start moving in some direction now Thank you very much for reading! See you next week.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Great part. I wonder what edward found out on his trip.
Author's Response: You will find out about Edward's trip in the next chapter! Thank you!
Reviewer: andias (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Love the indecision and her reaction to Tanya. The drama was a nice twist and moved the story along, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Bella had to have something to shock her system into action and this did it. See you next week!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
OMG! My first reaction was NO SHE DIDN"T!!! and of of course she did but she didn't so I am so happy that YOU DIDN'T!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter! CONGRATULATIONS on your nomination!
I keep re-reading chapters ... I can't get enough!!!!!
Liz
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Liz. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story. I couldn't leave you with a cliffie. I'm just not that mean!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
I loved it. WTF is the deal w/ Tanya? I was glad to see Bella stand up to her... GOOOOOO BELLLLLA!!!!
Rox
Author's Response: Tanya has her own motivations for everything she does. Thank you so much, Rox!
Reviewer: arasa (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
more please....
Author's Response: As usual, teaser this weekend and another chapter next week! Thank you!
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
so good, can't wait for the update
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: capcalawrence (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Great Chapter! I hope that it finely pushes them together. Can not wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: It certainly helped Bella realized what was important. Thank you! See you next week.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Now maybe they have had this scare Bella will be willing to show her true feelings towards Edward and let him know she truly does love him.
Author's Response: The crash certainly put a lot into perspective for Bella. She has a long way to go, but she at least has a direction to go in now. Thank you!
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Love this story great chapter i never saw the plane crash coming well done
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. See you next week!
Reviewer: Iteachu4600 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
OMG what a chapter! What the hell Tanya when people tell you to leave their home you leave. The Cullen's should have called the cops to have her removed.
Author's Response: The next chapter wouldn't work very well if she did leave. It's important that she's there. Thank you for reading and reviewing and your presence on the forum.
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
THANK YOU FOR SAVING EDWARD. WHAT WOULD WE DO WITHOUT HIM!!!!!!
Author's Response: I couldn't let anything happen to him! The story wouldn't work very well without him. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Holy shit **sobs hard** i was so scared too
Author's Response: I guess that means I'm doing my job well! LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
i love it! i never wouldve guessed that!! it was perfect!! so good! what does tanya want exactly? and will edward still be there when she wakes up? i think that this situation should tell bella everything she needs to know about working things out!!
Author's Response: Bella has had a lot of things made clear to her over the last couple of days. She's finally ready to make some decisions. Tanya has her own motivations which will become clear eventually.
Thanks!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
I am so happy you didn't decide to end the chapter with "there was a plane crash". lol. I know cliffies are sometimes necessary, but that would've been cruel. Eitherways! I love how strong Bella is getting, in regards to Tanya. Very different from the shy little girl we first met in chapter one (excluding where she b*tched out Edward.
I can only wonder who took the money...I wonder if it's someone close to home, or maybe it's Aro. Hmmm, guess we'll find out.
I really don't think its fair that Edward got testy with Bella. I mean, I understand that he's under a lot of stress and that was probably behind it, but...dude! He freakin had an affair (even if that's not what he calls it) and he expects it to all change?? Either things must be really bad in Italy, or he's just a dumb head :P
Then again, the plane crash will probably help their cause :)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I couldn't do that to you and leave you with that cliffie. Bella is finding herself and getting stronger each day. She's finally growing up. Edward is very frustrated and angry with himself and it comes out in his tone. It's never really meant for Bella. Also, he doesn't want to be in Italy any more.
Thank you! See you next week!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
So so so glad Edward is fine....and Im so proud of Bella for the way she handled the Tanya situation.....please post again sonn I love it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! She is growing stronger and coming into her own now. See you next week.
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
I believe that Bella is correct in a lot of stuff however I also believe that at the moment she is only pointing her finger at Edward and not accepting that she was wrong too.
Come on!! For 2 years your husband doesn't even talk to you and you just live with that idea... I don't care how naive you are, there are thing that you just don't turn you face to the other direction. You fight and she didn't do that, she just liked to be placed on the spectator sit.
In situations like this one, when you believe that the person you love is dead makes you realize that you need to live every moment at fullest capacity.
I don't think that she should just accept his apology and move on , I believe that trust is very important in any relationship however Edwards also has to learn to trust her and she is only focusing in her own needs and not in the needs that as a couple they both need.
Great chapter!!!!!! I can’t wait for more.
Thank you
Author's Response: The crash put a lot of things into perspective for Bella. She was wrong too and they will explore that together. She should have said something, to someone at some point, and she didn't.
Thank you very much! See you with more next week!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
OK can Bella Kick Tanya's ass now???? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, she'll get her chance, I promise! Thanks!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
Great work wow knock me over with a feather....when she woke I waslike oh no what could have happened... Then Em and I just knew wow way to throw us for a loop! Amazing work post again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This really was a difficult chapter to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it. See you next week!
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
WOW!!!! That was one scary moment, I mean even my heart was acking over here. Great chapter. Hopefully after this almost tragety they will work out their issues faster. She almost lost him.
Author's Response: It was really scary for all of them and was a great catalyst for the coming change. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
So, I'm really impressed with Bella. She is standing up for herself and it is wonderful to see. I do agree that she need to get some answsers - more specific answers from Edward about his 'tryst' with Tanya.
I'm glad that Edward is okay. (I was worried too.) Hopefully, this is what both of them needed to help them move forward. Nothing encourages change more than fear of death. ;)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Bella needed to find her feet and her own strength. She has to grow into herself as a woman. She will get the answers that she needs soon. I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much!
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