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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

super good...still one of my fav stories!!! can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Thank God Tanya's gone for a little while! I was ready to choke her ass out. Glad Bella and Edward are making more progress too :)



Author's Response:

They are making progress. And Tanya will be back. It can't be that anti-climactic. Thank you!

Reviewer: Charvie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

This is officially the only All Human story I have ever enjoyed....my goodness, well written, and suprising....I have been team edward so faithfully since I finished the Twilight...it feels like he cheated on me! lol.... well done I look forward to more



Author's Response:

Wow! With all the wonderful stories out there, this feels like really high praise. Thank you so much! There is lots more to come and I do update once a week. 

Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Thank God Carlisle saw how much of a bitch Tanya is!



Author's Response:

He did and now he knows what he has been missing. Things are about to change. Thank you!

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

OHFORCRYINGOUTLOUD!!!!!!!! Why are they not screwing? This is getting ridiculous. She is practically begging and he still stops.  He had no problem pokin the h00r! Maybe he could give her what she actually wants for a change, otherwise the marriage/relationship is still so completely one sided....HIS!  THE douche! PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

She's not ready and they both know it. There will be more on this later. LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Go Bella claim that man of yours!!!:)



Author's Response:

Oh, and it will get better! Thank you!

Reviewer: angellma (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity

Bella should have an admirer come into play, so Edward knows what it feels like. Jealous Edward would be SUPER sexy!!!! Awesome chapter!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I write so far ahead! LOL! There's lots more to come with this story. Thank you! Update mid week. 

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Is there such a thing as a girl having blue balls??  Cause if there is..I sure as hell have em after that fucking chapter...Dear God girl..get on with the show already..I am dieing here waiting for some sexual healing!!!



Author's Response:

They aren't quite ready for the full boat, but you can look forward to a little more action in the coming chapters. Thank you!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

A plane crash --- that was a close call! Glad he got rid of Tanya! Now when are they gonna consumate this marrriage??? Love it!



Author's Response:

Tanya will return. No worries, this isn't the last we've heard from her. They aren't quite ready for consummation yet. Yet. 

Thank you!

Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Oh Tanya... what a complex issue. and trying to seduce someone in front of their father? really? how stupid can one person be?

I'm really glad that Bella hasn't forgiven Edward yet. I'm glad it's an actual work in progress deal. I love these 2 and I like watching them work through everything.



Author's Response:

Tanya is getting desperate and it shows. Why???

Forgiveness is a progressive thing. It doesn't just happen. 

Thanks!

Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

I wonder how long she's going to punish him for screwing up? I love this, PMS



Author's Response:

It depends on what you mean by punishment! LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

i wonder who tanya is covering for? and im still so happy that edward is safe! and that bella and edward are getting along so well!



Author's Response:

Tanya definitely has her own motivations and they will come out. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

I see hope for those two yet!  Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

 



Author's Response:

They are definitely making strides, aren't they? Thank you! New chapter coming soon. 

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

well i hope it was tanya stealing the money! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 



Author's Response:

There's a lot more regarding this plot line yet to come. Thank you!

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Hmmm. Edwards getting away with infidelity!!! Not good. I hope it gets better on the 'redemption' front. :-) Love the story.



Author's Response:

He doesn't get away with it. There are still consequences, but forgiveness is achievable. Thank you!

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Im glad there getting closer....can;t wait to find out what the deal is with Tanya. Post soon please



Author's Response:

Tanya's motivations are her own and they will come out soon! Thank you!

Reviewer: xmarksthespot (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Requests

Great chapter! It's been a bit since the last update, but this was definitely worth it. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I do update once per week so I don't leave you too long between them. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: arasa (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

I love the story so far please write more soon...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There's lots more coming each week!

Reviewer: de kate (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

oh hell, I didnt see that coming. well he's not dead so thats ok.

really enjoying, cant wait for next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Nope, not dead! That would have ruined the story, me thinks. 

Reviewer: Mz_Star (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

i think Bella needs to make up her fricking mind about what she wants!



Author's Response:

This chapter really helped her do that--it cleared away the dust so to speak. Thank you!

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

Bella is becoming a force to be recond with and that ending was heart stopping.



Author's Response:

She is becoming a force in and of herself. She needed to grow and she did, albeit in a hurry. Now, she's making decisions with all the dust cleared. Thank you!

Reviewer: MsCullen17 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

You scared me thought that something happen to Edward!!But still I love this story update soon plzz!!!!!!!♥

Author's Response:

Edward is alive and well! Thank you for reading and I'll see you next week!

Reviewer: lilacmoon (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

hi! im new here and im abit confused...is this story really complete? because that's what i saw on the info...enlighten me please because i really love the story..thanks! take care and good luck!



Author's Response:

No, this one is not complete. We will have at least 10 chapters to go. What Happens In Vegas is complete, though. I am glad you like it and I will see you next week. 

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 10: Changes

oh my! I was over here biting my nails. I am so glad that you didnt have the angst carry out to another chapter... I would have had to.... hhhhmmm..wait,which I probably couldn't handle. good chapter.. slow and steady wins the race (come on, Edward)



Author's Response:

I'm glad I didn't make you go through that . . . waiting. It wouldn't have been fun for any of us! LOL! Thank you and I'll see you with more next week. 

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