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Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Still totally in love with this story!!! My twisted little mind is starting to play tricks on me. I am starting to think that Renee has something to do with the whole James and Marcus thing. Too much going on at the same time, but you could also be doing that to throw off the scent of the others that are really involved.
So looking foward to next week!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! You aren't the only one that suspects she is involved, but I'm not telling.
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Awesome Chapter! I really Love how close their getting!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Ugh, mothers can be very annoying...I wonder what happened with Renee.
Eitherways, progression is happening, and it's good to see Edward standing up the Bella's parents.
Author's Response: I thought it was significant that Edward was standing up for Bella and showing how much he cares. It's definite progress.
Renee is a mother that hasn't paid much attention and just reacts without thinking. In short, she's a terrible mother.
Thank you!
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Dumb Renae!
Author's Response: She's an odd one, isn't she? Thank you!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
OMG! I can't wait for the next update!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! You should have one tonight or tomorrow!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
good Chapter......
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
oh charlie! gotta love him
Author's Response: He's pretty great, right? I love him hard! Thank you!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
I like the Edward and Charlie bonding, and I'm starting to suspect that Renee is in on the spying or something with Windemere. Either that or she's got some strange motivation or is very unobservant - I mean, how could she not notice how much happier Bella was when they were together instead of when she came up on her own the last time? Very weird. I'm interested to know where Renee's head is at.
Thank you for the update!!!! More please? I'm insatiable. Love your story.
Author's Response: There will be some explanation for Renee's behavior. She's an odd duck, I think.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
OK Renee needs to go suck on a lemon. How dare her try and mommy Bella now after she sold her own daughter off at 15 and then told her to "woman up" when Bella was heartbroken. ANDWHYHAVEN'TTHEYHADSEX yet? This is getting ridiculous! They are grown ups....well she is. He still an annoying punk with his hissy fits (shower scene). So mommy and Edward are annoying me, ALOT. Can you please get the sexytime moving.
Author's Response: LOL! He annoyed you because he was embarrassed? Huh, I didn't foresee that response. It is coming, I promise. We just have to get to a point where it wouldn't be contrived. Thank you!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
LOVE charlie!
Author's Response: Thank you! He's pretty great, I think!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
how does renee know about the separate rooms? will renee behave herself during dinner? or will charlie have to punish her?! im glad bella stood up for herself!
Author's Response: Renee, for all her faults, is observant. She saw the decoration of Bella's room and noted that there was nothing of Edward there. CHarlie punish Renee? That's funny! Thank you!
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
I don't really know what to say about Renee. At least Charlie is being supportive.
Author's Response: Renee doesn't really think before she speaks, she just reacts. Charlie knows how to handle her. Thank you!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Great job..really loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
love the progress and thankfully charlie is helping because Renee has lost it...
Author's Response: Yeah, Renee has issues. Thank you!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Wow. they have come a long way. Is Bella every going to want to have Sex with Edward. Please tell me so.. I know there going to take lot more time to have a happy marriage. But that takes a long time. and it will never get better if she keeps saying no to sex. I been in a marriage with no sex. it sucks. let say I have a ex husband. hahah. and with that Whit. guy, will he never gives up. What is next. Excellent chapter. Have a great night Smiles Leona
Author's Response: Thanks, Leona! She does want to have sex with him, but she's scared. They WILL get there. I promise.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
First after reading the title chapter I was afraid that the harsh word were between E/B...
But standing up to her mother and defending her marriage well bravo for her and him letting her dad know where he stood well they are both fighting for their marriage that makes me so happy... some new wives will always side with mommie and come running home but she must really want this with him ... and their phyical closeness well Yea!!! finally both on the same chapter and she finally knows pleasure and desire..how about we work on need in the next chapter ...you help her close the box lable it in the past and open a new one that says future ...need ...desire pleasure...lets try to lock her fears and bad memories up and give him a chance to show her love desire and passion...his restraint amazes me ...I wish she could know by making new memories with him it might help fade the bads ones back let him fill her up with love and hope and desire they need new memories to help erase tanaya ....I do love this story and both of them are so inexperienced they both need that perfect first time being lovers she has none..his experience is just bad they both need perfect just the two of them young and in love...
Author's Response: I definitely don't disagree with you. They do need that one perfect time to make the new memories. They will get there, we all just have to be patient.
Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
Love the flour scene and the sexy shower that followed lol. Love Edward being protective of Bella when he was talking to Charlie.
Author's Response: Thank you! The shower scene was a lot of fun to write, that's for sure.
Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
I'm glad that Charlie and Edward were able to talk, I hope that Renee can keep her big mouth shut from now on. I love the progress Bella and Edward are making, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: Renee's not so good with keeping her mouth shut. We'll have to see if Charlie can have any decent influence over her. Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 20: Harsh Words
well i hope charlie puts her in her place! and glad that shes happier than she has been! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Charlie rules, doesn't he? Thank you so much!
Reviewer: edsgurl (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
I am loving this story very much
I wanted to give you a heads up, I was scrolling through the title pages and came across one called Arranged by Emily-Masen, it is so similar to yours and only has one chapter posted I wanted you to be aware of this.
Author's Response: I am really glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Thanks for the heads-up on the other story. I'm going to go check it out.
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
yes! progress!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Twijules (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Coming Home
OK, Emmett should keep his mouth shut. The Bella constantly running away is now getting on my last nerve. Of course it's because I want answers and I'm being impatient...he he. Love the chapter and glad she finally went home.
Author's Response: Bella is young and has no defense mechanisms yet, so she runs. As she matures, she will get better about this. Thank you!
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
Amother amazing chapter!
Just loved it
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Twijules (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: Perspective
I'm hoping they hash this out soon. I want answers...LOL. Great sotry.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. It will come.
Reviewer: Twijules (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 2: Messages
OK, still a little confused. How old is Edward? I don't understand his reasoning, 2 years, becuase he thought she was scared and ignored her and never talked about it or showed her she had no reason to be afraid? I hope the following chapters explain in more detail what that is about. Love the story.
Author's Response: Edward is now 25 and was 23 when they got married. Thank you!
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