Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
Wow. Talk about progress and releasing some sexual tension. I need a smoke after that (I don't even smoke) and that wasn't even the whole shabang.
Author's Response: You and me both, Chick. You and me both! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
HI:)
As always your chapter was wonderful. I really don't have words to discrip what I think of Bella and Edward. I can see she is now starting to feel more for Edward and stop her self from runing away. The Couicalling is going to be awesome. Your a excellent writer. Smiles Leona
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They really are getting to a point where they want the same things and are ready to get them.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
Good Chapter......
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
Hooray for pretty dick!! :D
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
well its getting hotter in bed!
Author's Response: Little by little it gets hotter! Thank you!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
Well, that was an unexpected surprise! Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you . . . enjoyed it!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
so we met the therapist and they had a nice lemony date night...noticed the small part about "the man with dreads" she thought she saw, guess that means she is being followed after all.
Author's Response: Yes, she is being followed. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
Loved the date, so cute. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! They had a good time, that's for sure!
Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
aww it was so good...as always I loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 17: Realizations
So James is seriously creepy. I loved their time together though. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, James is really creepy. He won't ever get much better.
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
cant wait to see how their first therapy session goes...
Author's Response: I'm so fail some days that you've already seen it. It will be another chapter before you see a normal one though. Thank you!
Reviewer: esteslove (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
This is a very good story please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I will continue and have another chapter for you next weekend.
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
That was great. Their date was alot of fun. My jusband and I do the people watching thing also, but sometimes we make up outlandish stories about them too. For instance, clandestine meetings between spies and so on. Can't wait for the next installment. I really hope the counselor tells Bella to man up.
Author's Response: Spy meetings?! I love it! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strides
I just found you story the other day and it is fantastic. I love the way you are progressing the story, although your Bella needs to get over herself. Of course she is really young but, the way I see it, Edward didn't really cheat on her because their marriage hadn't started yet. Hell, they weren't even dating. Yes, I know a marriage ceremony had taken place but it takes a relationship to be established to be able to cheat on it, and there wasn't one. Not even a little bit. So I guess what I'm saying is, No Blood, No Foul. Anyway, you have a real gift and thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The cheating isn't the only thing she has to get over. Her husband ignored her for two years and basically left her to fend for herself among strange people in a new home. And then, he shared himself intimately with another woman. That just takes time to work through
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
It is still wonderful seeing Bella being more involved in her own life. She continues to make steps in the right direction.
I am so thrilled and relieved that they are going to see a therapist. I think that this will help them repair their communication and build their marriage.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! They are heading in the right direction all around. See you next week!
Reviewer: kgostorm (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
i like the fact that they're going to a counselor! im so proud that they are working on getting on track! i can't wait to see if the counselor can help bella over come her fears and get jiggy with edward!
Author's Response: That's the general idea! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
Great Chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
Love the story but I find there intimate encounters have taken a back seat to edward cursing Renee softly to nothing at all.
Author's Response: Only this one time. Haven't you ever been interrupted at an inopportune moment? LOL! There will be more. I promise. Thank you!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
Loving it as always.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
It's good to hear them talking and getting to know each other. Bella was so alone before. I'm so antsy about the Windmere issue!
Author's Response: And she didn't even realize how alone she was. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
okay....how much longer is the sexual tension going to last? don't get me wrong...i love that they both are truly working to make their marriage work especially edward.
Author's Response: LOL! It depends on what you consider relief and what chapter you are on! If the full deal is what you are waiting for, we have a bit to go. I haven't written it yet.
Thank you!
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
I can’t believe that Bella blames Edward for everything
I think it is time for Bella to accept that she was and is at fault too.
She can’t be so naïve and think that all the bills, the food and everything else was for free, she has to be more mature and realize that nothing in this world is for free.
I feel like Edwards is always on the spot, he always have to wait for Bella to do or say something but he is not going to wait for ever.
Great chapter, I think that the help of a marriage counselor is what they need.
Thank you
Author's Response: She is taking the responsibility for some of it. That's what led her to moving forward with him in the first place. It still hurts though and will take some time to move past.
Like most teenagers, she didn't think about those things. She didn't have to do them at home and moved straight to someone else's house where it was all taken care of too. She's learning about all those things that were done for her and is starting to realize that it wasn't all what she thought it was.
Thank you!
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
Oh I just started reading that the other day...
I love this story, it just feels so real and natural.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've worked really hard to make it as realistic as possible within the confines of the story.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: Introspection
terrific
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
