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Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
OMG Bella fucking rocks!!! I am so proud of Bella for confronting her parents, the Cullens but especially Tanya. The old Bella never would have hit Tanya...I love it. I hope that everything Bella heard from Tanya will not cause problems for Bella and Edward. Please don't let this set them back let this make them stronger.
Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked her in this chapter. She's really grown a lot in the course of the story and I couldn't be prouder of her! As for Edward and Bella, you will see their reactions in the next chapter!
Thank you!
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
Crazy! Poor Tanya, NOT!
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad you liked that part! Thank you!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
I had a assumption she was working with James. Way to go Bella Tanya deserved everything she got from you. I wonder how Edward and Bella are going to deal with all this information now.
Author's Response: Tanya did deserve it all and more! She should never have gone on this path. Thank you so much! We'll get Bella's thoughts next chapter!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
Great chapter....still don't like Tanya and I don't feel bad for her. Good for Bella for getting a good jab at her noise!
Also, Renee has so much to learn when it comes to her daughter. I understand she doens't love Edward but she can still be nice to him, for the sake of her daughter.
Author's Response: Renee has a lot to learn about interpersonal skills and how to deal with her daughter. She hasn't done that much over the years and she certainly doesn't understand her at all.
Tanya deserved all she got and more. I hope her nose still hurts and that she got two black eyes!
Thank you!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
i hope that bella will get over this! isn't she kindof greiving? and aren't there 5 steps to it? i think anger is the step shes on! i hope that she doesn't give up on edward!!
Author's Response: Bella's stronger than everyone is giving her credit for. She deserves her anger, too. She's kept it bottled up for far too long.
Thank you very much!
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
Wow. What does James want with Bella? This story is so good
Author's Response: Thank you so much! James' part in the plot will be revealed--soon.
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
Gosh, Bella's never going to be able to get over this. How could she? She's surrounded by assholes. And even if she could have done more to help herself in her situation, she wouldn't have known how to! She was a kid, and between Charlie & Renee they only make up one parent!
I hates them all. But I love, love, love your story - so thank you for the update! And GO BELLA!
Author's Response: Thank you! Despite all of her set-backs, Bella really is growing into a strong woman. I'll have more for you soon!
Reviewer: Loopy4Twilight (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
i was thinking tanya at one point but now im thinking her parents or sisiters could of been it...
would be hell of a twist if it was her parents though (i carnt spell the names lol)
then again im also thinking it could be james and his family with laurrent to destroy the cullens...
as u can tell ive thought alot on who it can be...
brillent story carnt wait for the update
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Someone is trying to take something from Bella, but that's all I can say! I am glad you are enjoying the story and I love hearing your theories!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
wow this story is great I stayed up late just to get caught up. I started it today. So glad I did can't wait for more. Great job
Dying to know who got arreste
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying it! More coming soon!
Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
I can't stand shopping! Wow, kudos to Edward and Jasper - glad it wasnt' me. Oh no... Dying to find out what the call to Edward was about!
Author's Response: Thank you! You seem to be in the majority with hating shopping.
Reviewer: CrisiP2288 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
I've been reading your story all day! I can't wait to see what happens next... Really love your work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love getting new readers! I do update mid-week every week so I try not to keep you hanging for too long!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
oh how i dread Black Friday but you made it seem so nice ;) wonder who the man is that Edward pointed out, hmmm guess ill wait and find out next time.
Author's Response: Wait. I made it seem nice? Really? That hadn't occurred to me. LOL! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: Progress
He cut me off with a kiss. “When we make love for the first time, it will be wonderful, because it’s us. To be honest, I’m a little nervous, too, but I’ll do my best not to hurt you, and we’ll take it slow, okay? Whenever you are ready.”
As I said, she's going to need a bigger vibrator, lol. Where's that rabbit when you need it?
Spikey
Author's Response: There's been so much tension around these two lately, I'd say it's broken! LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
And the drama ensues!
~Tay
Author's Response: On and on it goes! Thank you!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
Oh nice! Leave us hangin for another week:( ARGH!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I try not to do it often, but it was necessary! Thank you for reading, though!
Reviewer: hautefoodie (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
Great chapter! I loved the Black Friday madness - I was at Target on Black Friday too - you described it perfectly! Loved the boys bitching about the cold...so typical:)
And what a cliffie - I can't wait to see what happens with James! It's a good thing Edward went shopping with them.
Author's Response: I go every year so I tried to capture the insanity the best way I could! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Loopy4Twilight (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
ohh i wonder who did it...
i have my own suspsions though...
excilent story im totally in love!!
(soz about spelling)
xxx
Author's Response: I would love to hear your theories! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
uh hu
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
well i hope that nothing bad is going to happen ! cant wait to see what and who was arrested and posted bail ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be a lot of interaction with the arrested party soon, so you will get an eyeful!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
Hi
Wow awesome chapter. It was cool to see the boys go shopping. I like that Bella was emble to be nice to her mom. she has not forgave her, but at least the weekend was not destoried completely. Now for your CLIFFHANGER. I can only guess a dozen things. So I will have to wait. It could be about James or it could be about the money that was taken. which might included James. WOW! I send lots of LOVE your way and hope it helps you.. Have a awesome day. Smiles Leona
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really needed it this week. You are right; forgiveness hasn't been achieved, but for now, a cease-fire will do.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
i had a feeling that it was a good idea that edward and jasper went with them! what was james planning!?
Author's Response: James is a conniving dude. That's all I can say. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
I like how Renee seems to turn around and wants Bella to be happy. She still doens't like Edward though.
Also, Edward is awesome to get up and go Black Friday shopping with Bella! I mean, granted it was to protect her, but still. As someone who does Black Friday Shopping every year (it's my Olmpic sport of choice) I think that is very sweet reguardless of the reasons why.
I'm a little nervous about the guy who keeps looking at Bella and of course the phone call Edward got.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Renee does want her daughter to be happy, but she really hasn't paid enough attention to find out how to make her happy.
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
Awww, everyone shopping together. Alice must be in total heaven!
Anxious to see why Edward's freaking out - thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You will find out those answers soon!
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
Wow. Who was arrested? This story is soooo good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't tell you who got arrested, but it will all blow up very quickly.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment
OMG! Who did he have arrested? Laurent? Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, I never really got the impression that Renee was in cahoots with the Windemere's.
Author's Response: Renee is a really crappy mother, but I don't think she's that bad. You will find out very soon who was arrested so I can't ruin the anticipation for you!
Thank you!
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