Love your story and your recs. Who wrote throught the flames? I'm enjoying The Foreign Papers a lot.

You may like Episode by BoydBlog.

merrily

Kat

Love your story and your recs. Who wrote throught the flames? I'm enjoying The Foreign Papers a lot.

You may like Episode by BoydBlog.

merrily

Kat

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sparkling Twilight wrote Through the Flames, I believe. I've marked BoydBlog to check out. Thanks!

Okay, I'm more confused than ever, if Edward is the oldest that means Alice and Rose would be pretty young too.. When is this storyline placed? Where is the setting? Still hoooked!

Author's Response:

The story is set in the Midwest US, with upper class, old money families. Rose and Jasper are two years younger than Edward and Alice is a couple years younger than them. They did all marry young, but all were at least 18. 

 

Thanks!

OMG

Amaizng chapter!

Bella rocked it!

xx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! She really had a lot to get out there!

Wow, I didn't think I would like the story on the onset. But you've got me hooked.

Author's Response:

Well . . . good! I am glad you are enjoying it. It's definitely a different venture for me. 

ooooh things are getting spicey - love it !!!

Well, I know you said Tanya wasn't all there, and... you were right.

Stupid doesn't even cover her. She truly is a blonde, right?

I find it sad that Bella's been sitting next to him throughout everything that's been going on lately, practically holding his hand in a sign that she wants to keep on working things out, but the moment she's confronted with the person she SHOULD fully put up the 'I'm with Edward' front (if it can be called that, because she meant being with him), and then she just doesn't, and sits away from him. It's not like she moved away from him, right? She just didn't sit next to him, holding his hand to give him strength, and receive strength back.

Finding out the why is a shock, sure, and hearing how easy it was for her at times, though confirming that he wasn't into her, was too, and then her saying how it wasn't personal, and 'you're nice, just a victim', don't even get me going on that, but to keep that distance at that moment? Hmm.

I would have liked it more had Bella chosen, when walking into that room, to form a united front against her.

I'm with you on no TPOV. There's just no brain enough in her head to give much diversity (:P) in the POV, lol. I mean, what are you going to write/are we going to read? Her inner musings on how Alec loves her even though he's been a no show for two years, and of course he's going to take her back after she did the entire neighbourhood, but he's underground for the moment (unless James has him 'captured'? Is he even in the country/alive still)? And then there's the 'poor Edward. He's helped me wherever he could in the past, and I'll repay the favour now by getting him to cheat on his wife but my love who dumped me/broke my heart is more important than that'. Er, yeah.

That doesn't mean that you can't write a TPOV, or that I won't read it. I was just thinking out loud. I agree with Bella: Tanya's pathetic.

See ya next week, hopefully, if you can keep up with writing.

Thanks for the update!

Spikey

Author's Response:

Thank you, Spikey! I do so love your reviews every week. Heck, I'd love to talk to you about it any time! 

Bella sat next to Edward, just not so close that they could easily touch. I'm thinking maybe a foot between them. We will get a little more of Bella's perspective next chapter, but I can say that she was holding herself together in some fear that Tanya would say something else, true or not, that would crush her. Luckily, she didn't have much to offer but how pathetic she is. 

Yeah, Tanya will come back but I can't spend much time in her head. I feel dumber each time I venture there! LOL!

Thanks and see you tonight or in the am!

To be honest, I'm surprised that Tanya had the guts to even show up but good for Bella for finely speaking up for herself to both the Cullens about how she felt about their so called 'support' with the whole Tanya situation and to Tanya herself.

Author's Response:

Tanya really wasn't given the option to not show up. Eleazar dragged her there! LOL! Bella has grown up a lot from the beginning of this fic and I was rather proud of her for standing up. Thank you so much!

Damn.  Tanya is a total BITCH and BLIND!  She played Edward, the Cullens and almost completely ruined Bella's self-esteem.  Seriously, after Edward always being there for her, that's how Tanya repays him?  Tanya is lucky that Bella only broke her nose!  I know in regards to the physical stuff that Tanya and Edward did since they were, it's just rehashing of what he told her.  But that's still got to hurt, to have to hear it again.  Even after Edward has told her he loved her, you got to wonder if that's going to be enough for Bella after this.  I think they love each other enough to continue to move forward.  Though I would also like to see Windemere's sneaky dealings to blow up in his face, he needs to crash and burn HARD!

Author's Response:

Things are going to start heating up all around now. Tanya will get hers, eventually, because Karma is like that! 

Thank you so much!

Great Chapter! Hope Tanya rots in jail. Hoping that this dose not set B&E back in the progress that has been made in their relationship. Can not wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am so glad that you liked it! We will get E and B's responses next chapter!

Good Chapter.....

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I was thinking that maybe Alec is dead.  But I don't know what Bella meant when she said, "And no one else is looking for him? You keep telling yourself that.”  Is she insinuating that Alec is in hiding?  Bella had a point, how could anyone ask her to spend the weekend with the woman who slept with her husband?  And then have her in her own home more than once.  She should have put her foot down.  Hell, Edward should have said there was no way he was going to subject Bella to that, period.  I can't believe that none of the women put themselves in Bella's shoes and didn't say anything.

 

Author's Response:

She meant that if Alec was being held captive by Windemere, why was no one else looking for him? He, presumably, has a family that would care if he went missing, right? 

I think, and since they live in my head it's a pretty good authority (LOL), that the Cullens were trying not to interfere. In a way, they were trying to helpful and not dwell on what occurred between Edward and Tanya, therefore possibly making it harder. Instead, their inaction did the same. Bella will make her wishes known now as she has finally found her own voice. 

Thank you so much!