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Reviewer: coricullen1980 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

love it drunk at chilli lol



Author's Response:

It doesn't get much more fun than getting drunk with Grandmother at Chili's! LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

oh look at Edward bringing Renee and her mother a bit closer.



Author's Response:

He's tyring to make things better for the Swans and Bella too. Thank you!

Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

liked how edward was able to win over bella's grandma, well abit... and renee as well.



Author's Response:

He's really trying to make things better in Bella's family so that she is happier. Thank you!

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

Freakin loved grandma at the Chili's! that was classic! another good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I could just picture her there, you know? And it made me laugh!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

That was frigging awesome.........  laughed lots.  But very scary about James..  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Have a great night..   :) Leona



Author's Response:

Thank you, Leona! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

This is all too happy...it makes me wonder what's coming.

I wonder if James wants to try and sell Bella into prostitution...like human trafficking.  Ugh. Who knows. :P Love the story tho!



Author's Response:

I think I can safely say that James wants Bella for his own personal use. And yes, it has been too quiet. Thank you!

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

Bella grandma was very interesting. Once again a great chapter.

thanks so much made me feel a better today while being sick to have a new chapter to read



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm sorry you were sick and I hope you're feeling better!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

That was fabulous!  Janice being normal obviously was a big hit - kudos Edward, you da man!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I thought it would be fun to show where Renee came from and how her perceptions were skewed all around. 

 

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

hahaha you just had to put a grandmother in this one lol anyways wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

I did. I just love grandmothers. Maybe it's because mine's so great, but they are so fun to write. Thank you!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

excited that they are getting along. looking to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

It was a very sweet chapter, and it gave a little insight to the possibility of Bella's grandmother being a little human, lol.    I can actually visualize the old hag eating chips at Chilis.   James doesn't sound like the type of person that gives up so easily.   I wonder if anything is going to happen at Charlie and Renee's house over Christmas or to them on the way back in the car.    Lots of angst coming our way?   Please post another chapter soon.

I also love Unexpected Circumstances and love it also.

 



Author's Response:

There is angst coming and with the newest chapter out, you see the first part of it. 

Thank you!

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

Very astute of Edward.  I like how you take the Cullens' vampire gifts and turn them into a human version (e.g., Jasper being able to hear the emotions behind the words, Edward almost reading Bella's grandmother's mind about wanting them to stay).  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love that you saw that in the story! 

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

grandma was fun! maybe they'll have to invite her out more?



Author's Response:

Yes, I definitely think there are some changes coming with Grandma. Maybe with that relationship improving, Renee's with Bella will too. 

I apologize that it took so long to reply. I've been trying to get the chapters out instead and I got behind. 

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

nice, umm...sexin'. it was pretty hot.

~Tay



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the steam. Thank you!

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

I think James is up to much more than hi let on.



Author's Response:

James didn't show his whole hand, me thinks. Thank you!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

I think James has many things on his agenda. As for the two love birds keep on rocking!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! He does have an agenda!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

James probably still has some additional details he's withholding...  He's devious like that.  If he's not smart, he's still just as dangerous because he's obsessed for some reason with Bella.  You almost got me distracted via the lemons, but I am still seriously freaked out for Bella, Edward and their families!



Author's Response:

LOL! I did my best with the distraction. And they didn't work?! Darn. James has an agenda and he isn't the kind to let it go. 

 

Thank yoU!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Fear

OMG...  James is CREEPY!  Seriously, that dude wants Bella for breakfast, lunch and dinner!



Author's Response:

James definitely has issues and Bella needs to be careful. Thank you!

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

I think James is up to something... surely he is not that dumb to just lay it all out there. I think he is underestimating the Cullen Boys though. On a happier note--Possessive Edward is so hot!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Possessive Edward as much as Bella. She's a fan. James is up to something but it remains to be seen exactly what and why. 

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

Well damn! The sex floodgates did open. James is a bastard!



Author's Response:

They hit the honeymoon phase-LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

The evolution of Edward and Bella's relationship was well done. Stormy as it was, each of your chapter makes you excited for the next one and see how they are progressing and growing in their relationship. You are one amazing author. I enjoyed reading what we have and hoping you will update us soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much! I am glad to see that you have enjoyed the progression between them. There will be another update coming tonight or tomorrow. 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

God I love this story.   It just gets better and better, especially since Bella and Edward are really together now, in every way.   I love it!!   Can't wait to see all the crazy people be exposed!!  Maybe her mom is in on it somehow.  Write us an update soon...



Author's Response:

I've got you an update coming tomorrow. Thank you! There's a lot of crazy to go around. 

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner

James is just icky.... Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 23: Beginnings

Wow...that was a good chapter!   Wonderfully written.    I love it that Tanya had to admit that Bella's name was the name spoken wihen Edward was together with her.   Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if having her name said makes it better or worse, but it did provide some comfort to her. Thank you so much!

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