Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Poor baby.
Douchward.
Author's Response: This really isn't his finest hour! LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Messages
Love my ass...
Position..
Why marry a 15 year old if you are going to treat her as a child? Wait.. until she is older. Engage but wait.. sleep with a family acquaintance is stupid...
Author's Response: Edward didn't realize that she was fifteen until after the wedding. James told him at the reception! This wasn't Edward's finest hour!
Thank you!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
nice downtime, its shows there relationship growing.
Author's Response: That's really what I was going for--shoeing them being a normal couple. Thank yoU!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
definitely think James is too smart to have laid it all out there for the Cullen men...so cant wait to see what he really wants and why.
Author's Response: He gave them enough to set the thoughts. James really can't comprehend that anyone isn't like he is. Thank you!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Good chapter what they suspected of James was true but he is ficsated on the one that got away. Sometimes people need to be taken out of their element to bring out another side of them thats what happened to Janice.
Author's Response: You are exactly right. Janice has been stuck in her world for so long that she doesn't know how to be any way else. Thank yoU!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
nice job...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Something is fishy with Demetri. I'm getting an uneasy feeling about him now. Love the Chili's outing lol
Author's Response: Why do you think something is fishy with Demetri?? He's a good guy. James is just conniving. Thank you!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Grams got her chill on..I love it! lol! Great chap as always xo
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: coricullen1980 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
love it drunk at chilli lol
Author's Response: It doesn't get much more fun than getting drunk with Grandmother at Chili's! LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
oh look at Edward bringing Renee and her mother a bit closer.
Author's Response: He's tyring to make things better for the Swans and Bella too. Thank you!
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
liked how edward was able to win over bella's grandma, well abit... and renee as well.
Author's Response: He's really trying to make things better in Bella's family so that she is happier. Thank you!
Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Freakin loved grandma at the Chili's! that was classic! another good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I could just picture her there, you know? And it made me laugh!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
That was frigging awesome......... laughed lots. But very scary about James.. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great night.. :) Leona
Author's Response: Thank you, Leona! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
This is all too happy...it makes me wonder what's coming.
I wonder if James wants to try and sell Bella into prostitution...like human trafficking. Ugh. Who knows. :P Love the story tho!
Author's Response: I think I can safely say that James wants Bella for his own personal use. And yes, it has been too quiet. Thank you!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Bella grandma was very interesting. Once again a great chapter.
thanks so much made me feel a better today while being sick to have a new chapter to read
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry you were sick and I hope you're feeling better!
Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
That was fabulous! Janice being normal obviously was a big hit - kudos Edward, you da man!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it would be fun to show where Renee came from and how her perceptions were skewed all around.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
hahaha you just had to put a grandmother in this one lol anyways wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: I did. I just love grandmothers. Maybe it's because mine's so great, but they are so fun to write. Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
excited that they are getting along. looking to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
It was a very sweet chapter, and it gave a little insight to the possibility of Bella's grandmother being a little human, lol. I can actually visualize the old hag eating chips at Chilis. James doesn't sound like the type of person that gives up so easily. I wonder if anything is going to happen at Charlie and Renee's house over Christmas or to them on the way back in the car. Lots of angst coming our way? Please post another chapter soon.
I also love Unexpected Circumstances and love it also.
Author's Response: There is angst coming and with the newest chapter out, you see the first part of it.
Thank you!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Very astute of Edward. I like how you take the Cullens' vampire gifts and turn them into a human version (e.g., Jasper being able to hear the emotions behind the words, Edward almost reading Bella's grandmother's mind about wanting them to stay). Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love that you saw that in the story!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
grandma was fun! maybe they'll have to invite her out more?
Author's Response: Yes, I definitely think there are some changes coming with Grandma. Maybe with that relationship improving, Renee's with Bella will too.
I apologize that it took so long to reply. I've been trying to get the chapters out instead and I got behind.
Thank you!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
nice, umm...sexin'. it was pretty hot.
~Tay
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the steam. Thank you!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
I think James is up to much more than hi let on.
Author's Response: James didn't show his whole hand, me thinks. Thank you!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
I think James has many things on his agenda. As for the two love birds keep on rocking!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! He does have an agenda!
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