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Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
OMG! You need not stop there!!!!??? What happen??? Hurry!!!
Well, cliff aside-- great Christmas, I am happy with the B&E relationship and Christmas morning BJ always good (i've heard...from others), but wow--really update soon please!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! The chapter was finished today so we should be moving forward soon.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
No, way. They have to get to her. UGH!!!! This incredible chapter ended with this cliffy????????? Nooooooooooo!!! Love how Bella's grandmother was on Christmas. :) Great chapter even if you did leave us hanging.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to leave it there, but I won't leave you hanging too long.
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
not a nice way to end christmas....i really wish i didnt have to wait a week to see whats next
Author's Response: I wish you didn't either, but I just finished the chapter today. It's with the betas so you'll have it soon.
Thank you!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Christmas was great. Well until James came back.
cliffie!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
well i hope he gets to her fast or can figure out where shes being taken to! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Oh gosh! What a way to end a chapter. =/ I'm so glad you update regulary, because I'm going to be anxiously waiting. I predict that Bella is going to be pregnant in the near future. I can't recall the story ever saying she was on the pill and they don't use protection.
Christmas was awesome, and my favorite memory is Edward waking up to Bella!
Author's Response: It's never said, but Bella is on the pill. No babies yet for her. LOL!
Thank you!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Thank you!
Author's Response: No, thank you!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
OMG!!! I can't believe you left it there!!!! Can't wait for next Tuesday!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I had to! Thank you!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Holy macironnie.. That was a excellent Cliff hanger. Out of know where and grabs her.. I knew it was coming but oh my god. He hurt poor Bella. I can honestly say I can't wait for the next chapter.
That was a BEAUTIFLL chapter. Their slow all reconnecting.
I have a few wonderful chirstmas that mean the world to me.. and a lot that I hate Christmas for a long time.
But the one meant the mos actual five days later was the birth of my only child Alexander. He was given to me to love and him love me back. He is 15ys old Now and he is the world to me.
Love your story.. :)Leona
Author's Response: And I'm sure you treasure him every day, even when it's hard. LOL! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Iteachu4600 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
You are the devil women! lol Ahh you left us like that!
Author's Response: I had to, I had to! THere's a teaser up. Does that help? Thank you, bb!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
I absolutely loved the entire Christmas part. I was in tears when I read about the bed that he bought Bella, the gift for Grandma, and then of course the ornament. Sniff, Sniff. Truly choked me up. But come on, I mean I knew it would probably be coming soon, but that cliffy at the movie theaters, WOW! Please write soon. I'm dying here. Want more. Need more.
Author's Response: Thank you, dear! I am glad the goodness of Christmas came across like I wanted it to.
I just finished the next chapter so it should go up soon.
Reviewer: cosmom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 27: The In-Laws: Part 2
Ok...I'm all caught-up after finding this story the other day. Gotta say I'm totally enjoying it. Just wondering, though...is Bella on the pill? They really don't seem concerned in the least. Cannot wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response: She is. They never really say it, but she is. I am so glad you like it! Thank you!
Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
great christmas, but they might want to spend a little more money on personal security. with as crazy as they know james is they walk around without a care in the world.
Author's Response: With the whole family there, they didn't think they needed it. He's just ballsy enough not to care. Thank yoU!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
oh i just loved the new turn around it Grandma .I was blessed the the best Gram in th e whole world and I have tryed to be just like her I so glad that they included her it seemed to make her day .....babies I love babies .....and james lets go get Grandma she can beat him over the head with her new racket
Author's Response: I would so love to see Janice beating him with her purse and the racket. Priceless! My grandmother is the best in the world too.
Thank you!
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
OMG wasn't expecting that! Don't let James or his hinchmen get her out of there. Edward & the guys have to stop this. Hope Emmett & Jasper beats the guy senseless - course Edward will need to get a few in to. Please update soon!!!
Christmas was great. The interaction between Renee & her mom was cute. Charlie & Edward getting along was good to see to. While Bella's Christmas morning "gift" to Edward both shocked & delighted (no pun intended) him.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the familial and marital interactions on Christmas. They were long overdue, I think.
As for James, I'm not telling!
Thank you!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
good chapter....
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: prudence21 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! such a cliffhanger..very well written..
love the whole christmas thing...
pls pls pls pls pls pls.. im begging!!! hope u can post d next chapter asap!!
i knw sound very demanding..but im realy a fan of your work...
thank u so much!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. I just finished the next chapter today and it's with the betas. As soon as it's done, you'll have it.
Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Oh crap! This is so not good. I hope he doesn't hurt her. Hurry with the next update! Please?
Author's Response: I just finished the next chapter today and it's with the betas now. Thank you!
Reviewer: stormy315 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
omg....please don´t let her get hurt too much....christmas was a bliss for those two...this is a shock right now...please update soon....
Author's Response: THank you! I'll give you more in the next chapter!
Reviewer: atina10 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
What!!!Cliffie!! ;)
Waiting for the next chapter
x
Author's Response: It's coming! Thank you!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Holy Shite ... Angsty indeed ... my heart is racing right now !!! can't wait for the update ...please hurry :O
Author's Response: Thank you! The update is coming, I promise!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
OMG what a way to leave us hanging. It was a great chaper till the end
Now I am going to just lie in wait for the next one
I really liked how you did Christmas
Author's Response: Thank you! THere's a teaser up on the forum and I plan to have the chapter out mid-week.
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Oh no
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
what in the world does he want with her? is it just a i want what someone else has thing? or is it i want what i can't have? i hope that he doesn't hurt her any further!!
Author's Response: I'll let James tell you what he wants in the next chapter. How's that! Thank you!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Loved Christmas - I'm glad she was so happy with her family and her holiday that she forgot about Edward's. Not that there would have been anything wrong with remembering them - but she deserved a day like that with her own family.
Interesting end to the chapter - they were so worried about her being snatched that they constantly had her surrounded with people, so James finally just gave in and had to figure out how to get to her with all of the people around anyway. Smart. Sometimes a crowd makes it much more difficult.
Great chapter! Thanks!
Author's Response: You have it exactly right. And crowds tend to compress in and not allow those following easy access. That and no one wants to get involved.
Thank you!
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