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Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

oh snap!!!!! Shit, meet Fan!

~Tay



Author's Response:

LOL! Tay, that was priceless!

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Christmas was sweet.  i really enjoyed how you wrote it, espically Bella's Grandmother and the "five bedroom" talk!  I thought it was cute.

One of my favorite Christmas memories was just last year.  My ssiter adn I go to New York City frequently.  I like to go to shows and even got to meet some of the Broadway actors.  We also tooka trip with my cousin and niece and took them to the city for the first time.  Well at Christmas my sister had made me a collage with the pictures from our favorite trips.  Ome of the pictures were of me with actors we had met, me with my niece and a picture of my favorite resturant.  I cried when I openned it (i'm such a girl, really I am).

Anyway, getting back to your story...JAMES!!!!!!!!  AHHHHH...I knew he'd be back and I still hate him!

I never beg author's to update their stories, but....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!  Please and thank you (I didn't know if that would help)



Author's Response:

That sounds like an absolutely fantastic and super-thoughtful Christmas present. Your sister is a gem and I think she deserves another hug in retrospect! LOL!

 

Thank you so much! You have the next chapter already and I hope you've liked it. 

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity

How do I find it on the forum? I have a hard time on there

Author's Response:

It's on page 301 or 302 on the The Arranged Marriage forum under Alternate Universe-Human. Does that help?

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Wow... yikes. Started reading on a rec from A Crimson Change... and I've been up way too late getting caught up! But, now, here we are! Thanks for writing, I've really enjoyed the story so far, and it's just getting going! Great job :)



Author's Response:

WOW! I had no idea I'd been rec'd. Thank you for letting me know and reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

uh oh! Bella is kidnapped, let the trouble officially begin.



Author's Response:

Yes, it begins now. Thank you!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

One of my favorite chapters! I cannot believe he had the nerve to take her like that in public! Amazing job, can't wait to see what happens next. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! James is getting desperate!

Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Please, please, please, tell me there are no rape scenes in this. :(



Author's Response:

No. I would never do that to any character. So, no worries there. 

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: ihatepancakes (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

It feels like everytime I start a new story and it's already pretty far along I just start reading when the newest chapter is the biggest cliff hanger... I wish I would have waited for one more update then found your story...

Can't wait to read the rest!



Author's Response:

I update every week so I won't make you wait too long. Thank you!

Reviewer: brooklynnjack (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Oh my!  Poor Bella I am sure next chapter I will say Poor Edward.  I know his reaction is going to tear my heart out!



Author's Response:

It's not going to be easy for him. Thank you!

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

OH CRAP!!! He must be casing her big time. I can't wait to read the next one.

Rox



Author's Response:

Thank you! He has been stalking her and just made his move. 

Reviewer: mom3270702 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

awsome love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

nice chapter. Christmas was nice i love the gifts that everyone got...the jewelry part was super sad but i like how you added that in and how that part ended. WOW that ending was crazy. as always great job and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: cosmom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Oooh, I'm so happy I decided to check for an update.

I just love how E&B are w/each other. Its so hot and sweet at the same time. There's nothing worse than an overly sappy Edward but I don't worry about that here. Yours is perfect.

Also really enjoying the change in Grandma and the affect its having on Renee. hehe.

Well, well...just as I was thinking that they didn't seem too worried about security and James, there he appears!

Cannot wait to read what happens! Since I'm new to this fic, do you update on a regular schedule?

Great job!



Author's Response:

I do update every Wednesday, so you shouldn't have to wait too long. I am really glad you like it. Especially in the early chapters, it's a hard read, but I'm glad they've evolved. 

 

Thank yoU!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

This chapter was great. I love Charlie's reaction to the ornament that they had made...very sweet. Damn I hope that Bella is okay. I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Oh wow! This ruins Christmas movie time.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, no movie for them. Thank you!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Everything was so lovely...  Until you heard "his" voice at the end.  Heart failure over here!  Please, please let her be okay...

My fav Christmas memory was "hide the soy sauce".  My Dad is white, my Mom is Filipino.  Until I was old enough to help cook, my Mom would make Filipino dishes for the holidays.  We love my Mom's cooking, but I knew my Dad missed some traditional things from when he grew up.  So when she finally deemed me old enough to help, I learned how to make traditional holiday dishes - ham, turkey, green bean casserole, sweet potato casserole, pies, etc. and incorporated them into our holiday meals.  My Dad loved it!  My Mom believes soy sauce makes anything better and is very mischevious to boot...  Every holiday when I make my share of the food she tries to add soy sauce!  So after a while, my Dad, siblings and myself make every effort to foil her plans, hence the game of "hide the soy sauce" with my Mom!  It drives her crazy when she can't find her bottle of soy sauce.  She tries everything - hides multiple bottles, she get's up super-early and tries to sneak in the kitchen and she gets caught, the grandkids love to narc on her and she starts cursing in Tagalog, it's awesome! =)



Author's Response:

That is hilarious and sounds like so much fun! Thank you for sharing and for reading! 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Loved Christmas :) Edward is a closeted sex freak lol. And oh shit at the end! Not cool lol



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: daryl_k (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Oh you! How can you end the chapter with this cliffie! Update soon please!!



Author's Response:

It's coming, I promise! Thank you!

Reviewer: twilover77 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Fix it right now!!!!!  lol...oh man, of course when they are happy.  Seriously. I can't wait ;)



Author's Response:

Thank yoU!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Well crap!!!! This story has had me on pubs and needles so many times. Update soon please???

Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter went to the betas today, so it should be yours soon. 

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

That James, always messing things up!

Author's Response:

He's a douche, isn't he? Thank you!

Reviewer: prescowannabe84 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity

Honestly... your writing is HOT. The way these two interact with each other. I would think after having relations they would cool down a little bit, but honestly it only is making them go at it more LOL. Really awesome and I love how Edward and Bella are growing in this relationship.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wanted to give a more accurate depiction of the honeymoon phase because that is really where they are. 

 

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

FUCK! Why the hell did you do that to me? And here I thought they were going to be happy for a while. Guess I was wrong. Keep up the good chapters girl. You know how much I love this story. If there is anything I can do to help you let me know. See you next time.

Elaine



Author's Response:

Write the next chapter? I just finished 29 today so I'm cutting things close. 

I'm sorry I'm torturing you. I just HAD to leave it there, but I won't leave you hanging for long. 

Thank yoU!

Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

Oh you.....



Author's Response:

Eep. I guess I should hide.

 

Thank yoU!

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas

I loved this chapter.  I can't believe he his building her a house.  Who the heck is taking Bella in front of everybody.



Author's Response:

James is taking Bella. 

 

Thank you!

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