Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
well, hate tanya had to rear her head and start drama between e & b again, hopefully this doesn't last too long. and hope b takes care of herself whereever she has run off too
Author's Response: There are only a couple of chapters left so it won't drag on too long. Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Glad James is getting his just desserts. That rat bastard! Glad Bella and Edward are in happy wedded bliss :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The happiness is coming.
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Yes and no. She is running I hope she doesn't get hurt. what is she thinking? And is she mad at Edward he had no Idea what was going on.. maybe a little bit. But he did promise Bella she will pay if she help James. Bella still has lots of emotional problems. :) Leona
Ps. I hope everythink goes okay. they don't need to go backwards.
Author's Response: They will work towards a solution and she will find a healthy way to deal. Thank you!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I am really pissed once again at Edward's non-chalance in regard to Tanya. I would not be so understanding anymore if I were Bella
Author's Response: Remember this is BPOV. Edward isn't so nonchalant. He's rather pissed. Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
well i hope nothing happens to her! cant wait to see what happens next and the outcome of james trial
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
You just can not blame Bella, Tanya is playing a game and it seems Carlisle is aiding her. What part is Edward in?
I would be livid.
Personally I think I would have shot her! Knees anyway! LOL
Author's Response: Knee-capping! I hadn't thought of that! Love it! You will find more info soon on the Tanya situation. Thank you!
Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I LOVED this chapter. Totally not what I expected. Is it wrong that I want Tanya to rot in a jail cell. Forget about her "contrite" act with Esme. Actually, her comment, "“You’re choosing her over me?” really gives her away. Of course Tanya thinks Esme's still mad over the $. Tanya can't even conceive of integrity or betrayal. I hated her before and after this chapter I think she belongs in Dante's ninth circle of hell, the one for not just betrayal, but for the betrayal of family members.
Author's Response: Excellent literary reference there! LOL! I am so glad you liked it. Tanya will find her punishment in an unorthodox way. Thank you!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
wow nice chapter...tough stuff lol...ud soon (-=
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
well i hate reading about trials but this wasn't so bad ....i hate to see them at odds with each other after all they have gone through to become a married couple ....I hope there is no body learking in the woods waiting to snatch her up or hurt her ooh....like Tayna ......come home E and fix this .....gee it making my heart pound she is always falling into a mess.....
Author's Response: I tried not to make it too stuffy by cramming weeks of testimony into two chapters. No mess for Bella, just some time alone. Thank you!
Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I am very happy that you are going to extend this! I can't believe that stupid bitch Tanya! I think Bella and Edward done well on the stand and as always I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be a couple more chapters but nothing too drastic.
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Actually, I'm glad that it's not going smoothly. Real trials rarely do.
Author's Response: You are so right. Things rarely do go smoothly. Thank you!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I can't wait to see Tanya get her just desserts!
Author's Response: Oh, me neither! LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Oh, Tanya, you're trying to mess with the wrong people! xD
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
wow full of info! Really great chp Im intrested to see where it all leads.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Oh no. I dont understand how neither one of them didnt know anything about Tanya. She is so two faced.
Author's Response: The DA should have made sure she followed through, but he dropped the ball. Thank yoU!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Fabulous as always!!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Supernova8 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I am so hating that nasty Tanya.
Author's Response: You are not alone in that! Thank you!
Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
oh shit...tanya is such a hag...glad you decided to keep going for a bit!
Author's Response: Thank you! She's a piece of work, isn't she!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I get why she's upset - for sure! And as far as fictional trials go, this one was pretty good! (I'm a lawyer, I greatly appreciate the touches of authenticity :-) But I guess I don't get why she's so upset at Edward and Carlisle - I mean they can't control what she does - all they can do is react to her behavior. So fine - she testifies for James and then goes to jail for embezzlement. There's not much she can do to get James off the hook now anyway.
Anyway, excited to see how the trial wraps up! Thank you for continuing to write!
Author's Response: I am glad that I did it well enough for a lawyer. LOL! I was a little worried about it. She's upset at Edward because she needs someone to focus her anger at. There will be more on it coming.
Thank you!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
OMG!!! I am happy that this is not the last chapter! I love this story and hate to see it end :-(
Author's Response: LOL! There will be a couple more. I can't stop! Thank you!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
im glad that bella is so brave and strong! she is amazing! i hope that this little set back doesn't mess up their relationship!!
Author's Response: She's really grown a lot stronger over the course of the story, but she's still a woman. LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Where the heck is she going? I wonder if James will testify! That would be fun! Couldn't believe that Tanya thought she could just fall back into the family. LOL! I think Edward and Bella deserve a little bit of happiness finally, so let's toast both James and Tanya. I think they should find some letter that James wrote, in detail, confessing that he is a slime ball, and then just as an added extra, put in the letter his raging homosexual tendencies, lol. It would guarantee some jail time for him, and a LOT of MALE friends in jail waiting for him...Hmmm...devious yes!!!
Author's Response: Oh there will be a lot of men waiting for him and none of them will be underage. LOL! Happiness is on the way!
Thank yoU!
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
OMG. Soooo good! What is Tanya going to say? Can't wait.
Author's Response: Oh, she'll have lots to say. Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
Are they crazy going to dinner with that scumbag?
Author's Response: Eh, they're men and they think they can handle themselves. LOL! Thank you!
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