Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Don't drop the soap, James :)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Great chapter!! Though the Tanya thing didn't go down exactly how I wanted it I'm glad you didn't let me bully you into it lol..oh and Alec having a girlfriend = priceless!!!! As soon as the chapter is available on FF I will review there too!
Author's Response: LOL! This was always Tanya's fate. I just really didn't think that jailtime would teach her the lesson she needed to learn. But Alec using her like she used Edward, you're right--priceless!
Thank you!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Yay! This chapter was just one cheer and fist pump after another! Everyone gets what's coming to them! HOORAY! Of course it wouldn't be nearly so satisfying if you hadn't given such good angst earlier, so thank you for that.
Dreading the end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked how it all washed out.
Reviewer: Supernova8 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Glad to see James get what was coming to him. Although Tanya didnt get jail time, I hope her broken heart was justice enough for Edward and especially Bella.
So relieved that Edward just didnt care about her anymore and that Bella got to witness it first hand so she wouldnt have any more doubts.
Author's Response: I never really thought that Tanya would benefit from jail time. It wouldn't have made her realize the weight of her mistakes. But feeling it, that would. Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
im glad that he got what he diserved and in the end ihope that in the end of all of this they get their happy ending!
Author's Response: Thank you! That happy ending is coming.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Excellent job, I loved how James got what he deserved as well as Tanya. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. I really felt like James needed to go to jail, but that it wouldn't have that great an impact on Tanya. She got what she needed.
Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
On a Tuesday night such a treat! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 31: Endings
Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
That stupid bitch! That's all I have to day about that.
Author's Response: LOL! That's so funny--most people thought the same thing! Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Crime and Punishment
Wow that was intense. James must have been high to be so stupid! I'm glad he didn't make it past the parking lot and he's out of the picture.
Author's Response: James is rather delusional and desperate. Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Wow a lot happened this chapter! First of all Xmas blow job was awesome and more real life then what I've read. That stuff is foul! Lol
What amazing and thoughtful Xmas presents!
And last, wow I can't believe James would be so dumb as to grab her in public like that! I did have the sneaking suspicion that he would show up soon. Or maybe it was your warning ;)
Author's Response: LOL! I wanted it to be more realistic. Let's face it, that stuff IS nasty and most women don't swallow and think it tastes like cookies.
Thank you~
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 23: Beginnings
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 27: The In-Laws: Part 2
Thanks for the shit storm warning! lol
Good chapter.
Author's Response: You are welcome. LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: Parties and Promises
Did it ever occur to Bella that maybe part of the problem may be the fact Edward did intimate things with Tanya yes but also that she has no experience with them still. Maybe she would feel better about Edwards infidelity if she experienced some intimate things with him. Maybe sex is to soon but she should have some fun experiencing some firsts with him and it actually may help her move past Tanya. So then it's not like Edward has done all these things without her. They need to create trust and intimacy as well as forgiveness. I mean Edward has never seen her naked? Bella needs to open up and move forward.
Author's Response: They are getting there. It hasn't been that long since not only did she find out about his infidelity, but also since she started getting to know her husband who was essentially a complete stranger. Thank you!
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
They did need a break! It was nice to see grandma loosen up.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the change in Grandma. She just needed a shove in the right direction. Thank you!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
:) just when i think things are getting settle, more drama starts.
Author's Response: LOL! It won't last too terribly long, but trials never run smoothly. Thank you!
Author's Response: LOL! It won't last too terribly long, but trials never run smoothly. Thank you!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 29: Crime and Punishment
:) James is captured and now they can finally move on with their lives.
Author's Response: Yes, their happy ending is on the way. Thank you!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Oh dear, I spy something bad happening, her going off all by herself. But then, there were multiple points in this story that you could've interjected something bad happening, and it never did lol. So maybe I'm just hoping for more drama :P oh well~
ps. What's with the comment in the A/N this chapter? It says "you won’t see Edward and Bella as grandparents. Not my thing." You planning to skip forward 20 years and a child is all grown up? D:
Author's Response: Thank you! There's not enough of the story left for drama like that.
As for my author's note: I put a poll on the forum for what's coming and grandparent E and B was specifically requested NOT to happen. LOL!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
I thought we were pretty much done with Tanya and her drama, guess not. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response: LOL! She'll get what's coming. Thank you!
Reviewer: Lily09 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
OMG i can't believe you let her go into the woods!! bad things happen in the woods... remember lil red riding hood? O.o....
But i still love this story ;) VERY GREAT!
Author's Response: LOL! That is hilarious. Thank you!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Why is Bella running off on her own that is not safe thing to do, Tanya is seeking revenge with this act of testifying for James.
Author's Response: Bella just needed to be alone. As for Tanya, you will find out. Thank you!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
thankyou.abk
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
Tanya probably thinks Edward and/or Carlisle will make everything ok & not pursue prosecution. I really hope they stick by their word to Bella. Tanya's working all the angles. Lock her & James away together for life - they deserve each other. Thought Edward's reaction to Tanya testifying was wrong. He may not have had a say but he didn't have to be so curt with Bella. It could have been out of frustration but still. Then Bella running off - girls crazy. James probably thinks he's gonna walk for all we know he has people watching her still just waiting for an opportunity like she just gave them.
Author's Response: Edward is frustrated because he knows that he's going to get in trouble (which he did) for something he had no control over. There's lots more coming! Thank you!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations
What the hell is Bella's issue? Running off into the woods? Seriously? Damn girl. If you needed some alone time, go to the library.
Great update. Sad to see this end.
~Tay
Author's Response: LOL! Tay, you kill me! Thank you!
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