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Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
If Edward fucked Tanya... Bella deserves better than him. And I hope she gets it. I'm so tired of Edward always being excused for treating Bella badly; for betraying her.
Author's Response: He won't get off easily, I promise. And he does have a reason--I'm not saying it's a good one, but it is a reason, nonetheless. Thanks~!
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
Great start! Why did he choose to be a douche? Why did he keep her at arms length? I' sure all will be revealed! Yes, my brother in laws 2nd wife...she cackles like a hyena, it's really grating!
Author's Response: You will find out a little more in the next chapter. Thanks!
Is he still married to her? If so, I recommend earplugs! LOL!
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
wow great first chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
Great start! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
I definitely will look out for your updates. Great 1st chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you liked it!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
How sad they didn't communicate...or he didn't communicate. Quite a hole he'll have to dig out of.
Author's Response: Yes, it is quite a hole and he is going to spend a long time digging! As he should! LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
I like this but am hopeful that whatever happened between he and T was before Bella. If not, then he is a POS and if Bella had any self respect she would never go back.
Author's Response: Hang in there with me for a bit. There are reasons for everything and everything is not what it seems . . . mostly. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: twilightwish (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
very good start looking forward to more. You have me hooked and waiting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a lot of it written but I am constantly tweaking. There will be another update next week!
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