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Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Love it
Author's Response: Thank you! XO
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I still ahte him because it was Tanya he slept with! I HATE TANYA! LOL! Go Bella! Just scream at him and tell him everything you want from him!!!!
Author's Response: We all love to hate Tanya, don't we? Thank you!
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I never hated your Edward. I figured the age difference was what screwed with Edward's head. He's not Edward if he's not gult-ridden and self depreciating.
I think he and Bella need to start over. They need to just decide that the past is the past and maybe start "dating." They need to get to know each other and let the romance happen. If they try and go forward with all the baggage they've got strapped to them they wont go anywhere.
Author's Response: You captured it perfectly! Thank you!
Reviewer: Aaymee (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Oh my god this story is amazing!! Way better than anything i've ever read!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Wow! That is high praise indeed. Thank you!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
oh I hate when it ends...I need more...please post again soon
Author's Response: LOL! New chapter-Wednesday. Teaser-weekend. Outtake-maybe weekend. Thank you!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Well he most certainly doesn't deserve to be the one to take her virginity. That's for certain. He cheated. My spouse and I have had to go longer than a year or two without sex due to medical complications. It's not the end of the world. He was selfish.
Author's Response: He did make a mistake and he needs to own it. That said, they've got a lot of work to do before any v card is going anywhere.
Thank you!
Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
God I love this Fic. It is just so messed up and your make it flow so well! I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that warms me!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Yup he is still a dick.
A coward actually. Sure men have needs but instead of giving in to Tanya, he should have talked to Bella.
He doesn't even know when her birthday is. Wow he just stupid and scared. Yes Bella was 15 but did Edward not think that she was afraid as well??
I am not really sure how you plan on making it right between them. Bella's still has her Vcard and Edward's doesn't deserve that privilige.
Whoppee he went and got tested for STD's.. he wouldn't have had to if he kept it in his pants. Why is it only men have needs? Bella might be young but she has needs to to. You know a BOB. They have them for men as well!! Just saying!
I think that they both need to seek out someone who can mediate their relationship.
Someone who can help with their commumication problems and relationship problems because as it now stands they do not have a hope in hell of making it.
Tanya and her family just need to go away but it doens't look like that is going to happen any time soon.
I do understand Bella's hurt and I hope she gets some of her self respect back.
Author's Response: You make a lot of good points. They will get there, but they have a long way to go.
Thank you!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I get why he did what he did but it doesn't make up for anything. Every relationship cannot exist without trust...Edward needs to trust in order to gain trust...He needs her to fall in love with him all over again...
Great chapter....can't wait for 6
Author's Response: He needs to give her a reason to really fall in love with him the first time and not the idea of him she had, I think. They've got a lot of work to do to get there!
Thank you!
Reviewer: livvi84 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I don't hate Edward. Never did. Bella's the one that is irritating. Her legs must be tired from all the running. Now it's time for her to act like a big girl.
Author's Response: Her big girl panties are migrating from the back of the underwear drawer. LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
i think the last conversation they had will help them... i feel like this was the yelling fight that was needed to get everything off their chests. can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! It will surely help, if nothing else, and they have to start talking!
Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Your writing is excellent and I love the story! Yu give such eemess and authentic detail. You stay true to real emotion that I have becme invested in the charactes
as for Assward- he is an immature Prat, as most men re want to be. He lies, lives in denail and the land of selfish, playing at being a man when he is truely still a boy. I wish Esme and Carlisle would wake up and give some advice to idiotward on how to be a man and help Miss babybella advice on hope to cope. Sofar it's the slutty and selfish leaing the cluless!
See i told yu i am invested! :O) please keep up the great work
Thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I love your character descriptions--they crack me up!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
i have on leg on the edward train...please post soon to see if i am back on edward full ride. Love story- different
Author's Response: There will be a full update next Wednesday-ish and a teaser this weekend. If I can eke it out, there might be an outtake too.
Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I see hope at the end of the tunnel...but it's a really long long long way there. Edward does need to pull his head out of his ass :)
Author's Response: Yep, that tunnel's pretty long. If you wave, though, I might be able to see you! Thank you!
Reviewer: brooklynnjack (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Great Job! So excited for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Keep your eyes open for teasers and outtakes!
Reviewer: Hermya (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I don't hate him, I think they've got some major communication issues and this probably isn't helped by the fact that Bella keeps running away.
Author's Response: They do have communication issues, but will start working on them soon. Thank you!
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
yeah I still hate him he's a douchbag and an idiot and his logic for staying away from bella doens't make sense. to me it's a plot flaw. nutthe story is engaging
Author's Response: He's a man and doesn't always use the same logic we would. I know my hubs never does and he thinks I'm the crazy one.
Thank you!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Ya still not liking what edward did...and really not knowing how he could ever make it up to bella/fix things...I love love love this story...thanks so much for posting more...(-=
Author's Response: Thank you so much! He's not sure if he can do it either, but he's going to try! Thank you!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
i've read a few people reviews and i'm sitting here agreeing with just about everything that was said ,i to wonder who the photographer was and i'm also glad that she told him what she thought pity it was 2 years in the making,i honestly hope that he takes on board what she said about wanting to be loved and have what alice and jasper have and stop giving her things instead of giving her what she really needs which is him,another thing i would want to see happening is him severing all ties with tanya he claims she was his friend but wouldn't surprise me if shes the one with sticky fingers (as well as loose knickers) and seriously getting a doctors report whilst great to know that he's not diseased, what a great way to shove the knife in just a little bit further and then accuse her of cheating when she was really being assaulted ...wow great husband
Author's Response: He does have some issues, but you will see him start to come around soon. He heard the message.
Thank you! I would answer more but I would be giving too much away.
Reviewer: Ilenna82 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
She doesn't want to be treated lika a little girl and she runs away 'cause she can't face what she just said? Seriously?
Pretty good story. Should be good to see where it goes next. Some serious holes in the story: where in the western world can you marry someone off at 15 without the courts going ballistic?
Author's Response: You can in the US if there is parental consent and no one objects. Sad, but true.
She'll get there. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: PreciousRubies (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
I love it whenever Bella grows a pair in fanfiction. :) Makes her more appealing as a character. Can we get a little taste of EPOV during this confrontation?
Ed is a real idiot. He was too busy thinking of the effect Bella had on him to look out for her needs and give her the attention and affection she needed. But, of course, as a man he can't seperate those two things from sex because of his feelings for her. While he obviously can with Tanya, since he has little feeling for her. He went wrong in suppressing his attraction and not trusting himself instead of talking to her about it and seeing how she felt about the situation.
Please update soon! I await eagerly!!!! And I hope my assessment wasn't too off...
P.S. In regards to the collage and its effect on Edward. I meant that wouldn't he notice how little there was on it and how she knew so little of him? Nothing remotely intimate, as a wife should know.
Things are so awkward...This is going to have to be taken slowly. But I can't see how they would pick up the pieces and fix the two years worth of damage. But I'm sure you'll amaze me in how you plan to reconcile them, if at all...*crosses fingers for the first option*
But I can't help but feel like there is even more DRAMA coming our way first. Yes, it needed all caps, due to the size of the surely impending DRAMA.
Please! Update! Soon!
Author's Response: Your assessment is spot on. As female readers, we tend to forget that Edward is a man. They don't think like we do. (One of my fave authors put it like this: Men don't say--Her breasts were so voluptuous and I wanted to take my time in worshipping her slowly. They say--Boobs. Me like. Want to touch. Ooh, soft.)
He did notice the collage, but that is his doing and he knows that. He expects that.
I am going to try to do an outtake of EPOV for you all sometime soon. (This weekend is feeling a little optimistic, but I'm going to try).
Thank you!
Reviewer: bcdw (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
WOW, love this! so different!
Author's Response: Thank you! It is definitely different than anything I've ever written!
Reviewer: Saryione (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
yes, I still want to punch Edward really hard in the stomach. Then I'd feel bad and nurse him back to health but I still think it's deserved. Its time Edward stopped treating her like a little girl under his protection and more like his wife. He does this in the book series too and it always made me want to smack him upside his pretty, sparkling head.
Author's Response: Ah ha! You hit the nail on the head. He's a protector by nature and this is a tough spot for them both. They have a long way to go.
Thank you! Join us in the forum for Edward pinata beating.
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
LOL! Great chapter! <3
I wonder who took the pictures of Bella! Could it be Tanya trying to start stuff...or is it someone else?? oooooo can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, oh! There's that pesky little picture problem! LOL!
Thank you! There's lots more to come!
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Obviously I'm still pissed at Edward, he never did anything to make Bella feel loved and cherished, he never fought for her, he dishonored her, etc.
But Bella isn't without her faults. She says she wants to move passed this and work everything out with Edward, but she isn't communicating with him, and she keeps vacillating on if she gives him a chance or not. It's like she's saying in her head: "Ok, I'm going to sit down and talk rationally with you... but you just pissed me off again with something you said, so now I'm going to storm off in a huff." She just needs to sit down and listen to everything he has to say, maybe even cry while she's there, and when he's done talking THEN she can storm off in a huff...
But I'm not going to be too hard on her, since being in this situation would mean that all of your actions would be determined by your emotions, not rationale.
Author's Response: It is tough for both of them and sometimes that is hard to remember. He didn't want to hurt her and he did. And her ups and downs, while understandable, are also very painful to him. He gets to deal with it though, because he's the cause. That's a huge burden to bear.
And Bella--she's out of her depth on this one.
Thank you!
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