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Reviewer: twisigh (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
go edward.. protect your girl.
Author's Response: He has to start somewhere, right? Thanks!
Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
update soon nice work more ed and bella
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming next week!
Reviewer: roselove0827 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
whoo tanya got burned ha ha ha im love this story
Author's Response: Thank you! It's about time she got it, right?
Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
pleasekeep updating and please DO NOT make Tanya (Skankya Whore) pregnant with Edwards baby........LOL E/B need a HEA. Thanks
Author's Response: No babies for Skankanya--promise!!! Thanks!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I can't believe they expect her to be around Tanya and she's letting him off to easily. Cheating is cheating.
Author's Response: She's not done yet--they still have a long way to go. But, she's in the lion's den and wants to mark her territory clearly. She might still decide that he's not worth it, but she doesn't want to give him to Tanya either.
Thanks!
Reviewer: jrzbabe8 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
YES! I love it! Maybe now Tanya will back off!
Author's Response: Now, do you really believe that Tanya's going to back off? LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I hate Tanya!!! I am so proud of Bella and Edward and I hope they continue to support each other while they are on their trip. If only they would have been honest with each other and communicated then they never would have had the issues they have in their marriage. I bet their public display of affection has shocked not only Tanya but Edward's family...love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Tanya is fighting for Edward, though her reasons are still unclear. Edward and Bella have a long way to go still, but they are at least getting started--finally!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
yeah there making progress...post soon pleaes
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter, next Wednesday and a teaser on the forum this weekend!
Reviewer: FatalSouthernAngel (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
This chapter was really good, and I loved the last past. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have a lot more in store for these two.
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
ZING! Three cheers for the Holy Grail of all Penises!
HIP-HIP HUZZAH!
HIP-HIP HUZZAH!
HIP-HIP HUZZAH!
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad that you liked it. Thank you!
Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
yessssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ugh I love this story so much!!!! JUST FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: LadyLawyer (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I started reading this at work this morning and I have done nothing else. This is really good and the slow building tension is getting to me. This is really just a sad situation for everyone involved. It's what happens when people don't communicate. I look forward to seeing how E&B learn to do it.
Thank goodness I'm the boss or I'd be fired. Thanks for the effort you obviously are putting into this just so someone like me can enjoy it. I'm putting this on my favorites right away. Good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me. This story is actually a huge change for me and I am really enjoying the response to it.
I do update weekly and I post teasers on the forum each weekend, so feel free to stop by and say hello!
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Ha! Good for Edward. I wish I could have seen Tanya's face.
Author's Response: LOL! I imagine that it was something like shock, disgust, and disbelief all wrapped into one. Thanks!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Bella did an amazing job of dealing with Tanya. Also, I'm glad that Bella and Edward talked some more. I think it is great that he is being honest with Bella and that they are both trying.
And I loved how Edward handled Tanya. He will need to talk to her soon (and Bella should be able to hit her at least once) but he does need to end their 'thing' so that he and Bella can work on building their relationship.
Great job. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed their interactions this chapter. They have a long way to go, but it's a start!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I like this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
nice come back, edward!! update soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much! See you next week!
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Wow....they're making progress here....this is a really nice story...thank you for updating so soon! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I update every Wednesday-ish and post teasers on the forum on the weekends.
Reviewer: aprileaster (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
This is so great so far. I mean, granted, they have a long way to go and a lot to work out, but it's so good that they can be united in "enemy" territory. I can't wait to see how else Edward is going to make it up to Bella.
Author's Response: They do have a long way to go, but they have finally gotten started. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Finally - they talked nice. Finally- they kissed. Finally- Edward put Tanya in her place! Loving it!
Author's Response: That's why it was Firsts! Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked it!
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Perfect
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Someone really needs to put Tanya in her placeand I hope it happens soon. As for Bella and Edward what a way to build their relationship keep being honest and open with each other!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: They are getting started . . . finally! Tanya will feature more before the end but I refuse to tell you what happens to her! Thank you!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I think Edward's a betraying shit. Masterbation, Edward. Not adultery.
And Bella is spineless. Grow up and walk away from the asshole.
Author's Response: You are not alone in your sentiments. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
come on girl show her what your made of. I think i would have licked jelly off his finger tip right in front of that blond haired b---h Rose and Alice should teach her the meaing of foreplay and how to tease her man
Author's Response: LOL! She teases him quite a bit when she is unaware. I can't wait until she does it on purpose! Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
i was hoping that edward and bella would present a united front. and they did! im so glad that they decided to give it an honest chance! bella deserves to be cherished and loved. will tanya keep at it? and will edward figure out where their money is going?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. They really do still have a long way to go, but it is a good start for them.
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