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Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
you're killing me. please get to some lovin' soon.
Author's Response: Um, well, it won't be soon. Sorry about that. They aren't ready for that yet. But they will be! Thank you!
Reviewer: tufwn1214 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Ah! I love this story. I find myself struggling between being pissed at Edward for ever screwing up in the first place, and then wanting them to find their happy ending. I always do a mini happy-dance when I see you've updated. Your writing style is captivating. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It really means the world to me to hear your feedback like this!
Reviewer: arasa (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Love it so far..Keep going.....Update soon. Want to see how Edward and Bella work out thier issues together....
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They have a lot to work through, but they'll get there, eventually!
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Great chapter , can't wait for next update!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! See you on Wednesday!
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
I think this story is amazing. I love the twist where Edward strayed. It's different from the usual stories where he's always faithful and they're love is undying and all that. I love twists and turns. But of course I know why he strayed. Hadn't been getting any....typical man. But I love that he is a typical man. She's forgiving him. I hope next chapter they finally get it on! Thanks for updating sooner than later!
Author's Response: The love won't come that soon. Sorry about that, but they aren't ready as a couple yet. He is a real man and I want to portray him that way. And not just in his infidelity, but in his reactions. Lord knows they aren't perfect, and never react the way we want them to!
Thanks! See you next Wednesday!
Reviewer: brooklynnjack (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Aww all that awful drama for the chapter to end so sweetly!! Yeah!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought they needed a moment of sweetness after that.
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
you seriously didnt stop there....why???!!!??? Update soon please!!!
Author's Response: I stopped there because they stopped there. Sigh. They'll get there, just not ready yet! Thanks! See you next Wednesday!
Reviewer: Sweetiedolphin (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
It bothers me how Bella is still okay with being married to the guy. I know he says he only told Tanya to back off, but the dude has made quite the habit of lying. I have some ideas about what I would like to happen to Edward and Tanya but I don't think you want this fic to turn into a Saw fanfic. Tee hee. I'm actually wanting Jake in a fic, how sad is that?
Author's Response: Jake's been here. He's the gardener, remember?! Lol! She's paid attention to him too over the years, but never approached him. She wants to get to know him before she makes her decision. That's what she's waiting for.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Is Bella EVER going to grow a fucking SPINE? She's apologizing to him, after he betrayed her? After he and his family DRAGGED her to spend time with his whore?
Author's Response: LOL! You are not the only that feels this way. She's a strong woman and she'll start showing it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyLawyer (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
The UST in this story is killing me!!! Thanks for a good start to my day. My husband will probably appreciate it, though he will never know why. I hope Tanya winds up in jail. I can just imagine the story of when she is confronted with her theft and the police cuff her and take her off while she begs for help from Edward. I know that the story is probably not going there, but I can use my imagination, can't I? I'm looking forward to the next update. Thanks.
Author's Response: Imagine away, lady! I haven't written that resolution yet, so I can't tell you if you're wrong! As for the UST, your husband will appreciate me for weeks to come! LOL!
Thank you! Have a great week and I'll have more for you Wednesday!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Aaarrrrrggghghghghghghghg! Are you seriously telling me that Bella needed to appologize to that doucheball??!! If he doesn't stop rejecting that poor girl and man up I am gonna beat my head on my keyboard!
Nice update....;} This fic just brings me to my knees!!
Author's Response: LOL! They are working on their reactions to each other and it will get better soon. She didn't need to apologize, but Bella is a peacemaker. Promise! I am glad that you like it. Thank you!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
I want to know when he is going to tell her what "really" happened during his trysts with Tanya. It doesn't sound like he has totally fessed up yet! No sex until that happens, I bet!
Author's Response: You are correct. He confesses all at Bella's request in chapter 12. It's already written and has been for awhile. Thank you!
Reviewer: Iamnotobssessed (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
I think I need another chapter. Great Story.
Author's Response: LOL! I see another chapter coming your way on Wednesday. Thank you!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Nice, slow burn!!! I loved it. I can't wait for the next one.
Rox
Author's Response: Thanks, Rox. Yes, the burn is slow and will stay that way for awhile.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
hot diggity damn!!!! what a chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad you enjoyed it, Charmie! Thanks!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
Things are heating up! Love it!
Author's Response: They are, slowly but surely! Thank you!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
HAHA! F*CK YOU TANYA!
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad that you liked it! Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
i think that they need to finish getting to know each other and being together. so he just watched her sleep then? and i hope that tanya gets the hnt and backs off!
Author's Response: They do have a long way to go in terms of getting to know each other. Edward came to bed and went to sleep with Bella--no watching her sleep yet.
I will say that Tanya is rather clueless, so I wouldn't count on her getting the hint.
Thanks!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
well i hope that they are working on it and i hope that she gets some relief soon even if its from her self! cant wiat till the next chapter and tanya needs to die@!!!
Author's Response: I don't have any plans to kill off Tanya, but she will get her comeuppance. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: milene (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
I love this story-)
hot,hot, hot kiss!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you liked it. It was a great scene to write!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
Okay, I finally had the time to read the chapter, silly busy week, and I can see how you can't really know how Edward's responding to Tanya's touches because Bella's back is turned. Plus, Edward would never allow Tanya's touch and then reply something like that to her, I hope.
Is it just me, or is Edward a bit afraid of running into Tanya when he's alone, and so he's now using Bella as a shield? Of course, if he's attached to the hips, in a way, to her for the full weekend, she can never have any doubt. Don't know which one is best, him avoiding being alone with her, or give Bella some confidence. The second, probably, but some day he's going to have to face Tanya on her own, and his own, and stand up to her before she touches him.
Step by step?
Looking forward to more. Nothing too much to panic about in this chapter, unless you count in the Holy Grail of all Peens. Silly Bella, she really doesn't know what she's doing.
As I said on the thread, both need to grow up if they are thinking of making the marriage work. He's got to learn his upper head is in charge, not his lower one. If not, he'll always have trouble imo.
Spikey
Author's Response: He will be alone with her eventually and will have to react, but for now, it seems safer for him to keep Bella close and boost her confidence. As he told her, she is the priority.
Thank you! More coming next chapter! There's a teaser on the forum if you haven't seen it.
Reviewer: mandi79 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
wow... awesome
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Firsts
I felt that I needed to clarify my review. The E/B interaction is going alot better than I expected. Your writing is fantabulous :) I went back and read my review and it came off alot more snarky than I meant it to.
Author's Response: It made me laugh, so no worries! Thank you very much! I am having a lot of fun with these two.
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